Murat Love Chronicles By Radhika(Just One Shot)... - Page 30

Originally posted by: chand1234

A really nice and touching OS ridzzi👏

Originally posted by: Kadamvari

THE PERFECT ENDING FOR DHARAM-VEER..I AM SO MISSING 2008😭 DAYS

Originally posted by: sweetnandu

amazing update ...got to recall all veer shera moments. :)

Originally posted by: Arpimugfan

Just Owesome Di, So Pure, So Romantic, the way you described each n every phase of their feelings...! Touching n Lovely :-)

do write more plz, I love this kind of beautiful n meaningful ss...

Love You Di :-*

Originally posted by: Amor.

wowww beautiful OS

Originally posted by: shafy_MN

nice one

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar

Wow, I'm so happy that u r back with ur stories

U know na that I really liked all ur earlier OS, they r just wow 👏

And this one was also superb ⭐️

I wish ki DV me RM ka patch up scene aise likha hota but DV was a heartbreak for all RM lovers 😭

but wo toh...

anyways do write more, I'm waiting... 😃

Originally posted by: tejjo

hey ridz

sry yr im really vry sry 4 late cmnt
mene padh to liya tha bt cmnt nhi kar payi mera pc kharab ho gya h

or ye bhi mein mob se likh rhi hun

first of all a hug n kiss 4 u 4 writing os
welcome back darling

i missed u so much n ur os n now im feeling happy happy

ridz mujhe bhi lagta tha ki veer or shera ki story happy note par honi chahiye thi in dv

bt itna accha or happy end bhi ho skta h ye nhi socha

its really fab

awesome baby
awesome

i just love u 4 this

n last scene was my fav when she hugged him

dv ki yaad aa gyi sacchi

i always love ur stories i mean os..they r so different n lovely

write ff also na pls

or os bhi likhna pls ek se mera kuch nhi hoga

ek week me do to milne chahiye na

pls pls

write more
luv u

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

Ridzzi di..kinna sweet story h'

N aapne khatam ker diya abhi se'

Abhi tho story shoro hi hoi thi'

Plz jaldi se once upon a time update krke..aapne aur bhi imaginations share karo humre saath abt veer n shera'

Jaldi jaldi plz..

I cn just see ur love for music so much..i mean mujse bhi jyada'.

Her situation k iye u hav such a apt song'

Khushi di and aap isme grtt ho.

Story per aate h..

Dialogue were less..

di, emotions ko enhance kerne k liye dialogue kamm hi hone chahiye'ekdum correct kiya..dialogue were effective too.

Emotions beatufully described'vry gud..

N last wala cheez- they both on same horse'moving towards village-haye, ye prc scn muje badly dharaveer mei bhi chahiye tha'but..nhi aaya'

N aapne yahan likha, muje bhot acha laga'

Kashh veer n shera ko bhi ek horse riding scn dete'

Hum murat fans kahan pohoch jate'

Really sweet confession'.lovely wrk di.

Originally posted by: shruja

awesome os
perfect ending of DV
loved song used
and main tenu samjava ki is my fav.