--Love Struck--SwaRon Story

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Hello friends i know I have quit the writing business but what to do I had this fever and couldn't stop from writing something and now I am posting this because Deeps (Deep_TanHa) has not left any option for me than to post this one. I am in oath for friendship to Deeps so this one is for Deeps and Tanuka two of my best friends on IF. And there will be no PM's for this work from my side because I am not able to make it to send pms...

--Love Struck-- A SwaRon Story

Prologue:

"what is your problem?" I asked….

"What is my problem? Do you even know why are you here?" She said….

"Ya because I am in love… I don't believe that why I am in love" I said…

" if you are in love than go and talk to the girl you love… why are you here?" she asked…

"because I don't think I should be in love" I replied…

" oh than you want me to say that you are not in love… ok you are not in love happy" she said angrily…

I knew I was being a jerk in not acknowledging my feelings but what do I do? I don't want to be part of a shit which is called love.

I believe this love thing has never allowed anyone to live the way he wants. A girl comes in your life and runs your life and makes it wholly shit.

I was so reprimanding myself that I forgot that I was at her place…

"hello swayam come back to earth and speak up you fool" Kriya spoke finally…

" I don't believe this, I never wanted to be in this shit" I spoke…

" what do you call love a shit, you are just impossible" she said angrily…

" what impossible, why do you girls think that being in love is the most amazing thing" I told her…

"because it is most beautiful feeling to be in love, and wait a minute where did this thing come from girls and boys" she said in puzzled tone…

"because you girls are responsible for this love shit feeling that develops between a boy and girl" I spoke.

"what you are kidding me right, you know its not like that love is love and boy-girl are equally responsible for this" she replied…

"no, noways only girls believe in this love and all crap, I just hate this feeling and girls" I spoke…

"oh hello boys do believe in that and you see rey loves me right and you hate girls than why are you here I am also a girl?" she spoke out of irritation now…

" Rey is a bloody looser, that boy is ultimate kaniya of the college and you girls feel he is a angel, and your thing is different you are my sister also" I said…

"don't you dare utter a word against him and what ever the thing is between you guys just keep it to yourself, and the same girls think that you are a devil" she said…

"than why out of those one came and affected me so much… doesn't she get feard with my presence" I spoke…

"well you only know answer to this one that why she doesn't fear you" she said laughingly…

"aahhh please don't start the same thing again… gosh these girls are driving my nuts" I spoke…

"what than don't talk to me and if you want me to help me than tell me the whole story how it all started"

She brought two cups of coffee and I started to take out all my feelings…..

We were seated on bed of her's in her room… she was a patient listener so I for the first time had chance take it all out…

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Characters:

Reyansh Singhania : A Second year management student. Very bright in all activites and was a nice student too. He was famous in his campus because he was always up to help anyone. He was called the Kaniya of the college because all the girls in college used to feel comfortable around him and his group which included Nilesh Kotain (Famously known as Nil) and Vikramjeet Rajput ( Famously known as Vicky) and all the girls except two girls in the college who hated Rey because of his flamboyant behaviour. He had only enemy in his life and college and that was Swayam Shekhawat and his Gang.

Kriya Ghai: A Second year management student recently transferred to the college. She was very beautiful and bright student. She had made headlines from the day she entered the college because she was damm beautiful and the major reason why she got famous was she was cousin sister of Swayam Shekhawat whom will come to later on. She was the first girl whom Reyansh got attracted to and fell in love. And she too accepted that and they become the most talked about couple in college. She became friends with Neha Kapoor (famously known as Neha the bollywood queen) and Vishakha Arrora (Famous tomboy girl of the college) this two girls hit off with kriya because none of the girls in the beginning were ready to be friends with kriya because she was swayam's sister who was rival of Reyansh and these two girls hated Reyansh ( This character will catch up in the story later on)

Sharon Singhania: A Second year Computer Science student and most happening girl of the college and she was twin sister of Reyansh Singhania. She was so pretty that anyboy would go weak on his knees just to see her opposite/besides him. She was the best student of the college in almost every activity. She had this two best friends of her whom everybody knew as Simi (actual name Simran Rayzada) and Rinni (actual name Reena Mallik). She was the main stay of her brother's group. She too hated Swayam Shekhawat because he used to take her brother Rey on his touse for everything.

Swayam Shekhawat: A Second year Computer Science student and equally famous as Reyansh but with a twist. He was brillient in studies and all the activities. He was the only guy in college who was going hand to hand to Reyansh in all the activites and known as only guy who can beat Reyansh on any given date. He was also helping nature boy but with a twist he hated girls and he helped those boys who were betrayed by girls. He was also famous for his skills to leak exam papers for the students who were not able to study in the college time but he never used those paper himself to get good marks and even girls who hated him used to ask his help for exams but he never helped girls. He too had a gang which included Bharat Sharma (famous Tapori of college) and Amar Gowade ( known as silent bomb). There was a huge rivelry between Reyansh Gang and Swayam Gang because of the famous reason girls. Reyansh used to help girls whom boys betrayed and Swayam helped boys whom girls betrayed and this never ending puzzle always ended up in fight.

Hence forth these were the main characters that will be seen in this story.


Index

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

Part 6

Part 7

Part 8

Part 9 (Final Part)

The Story has ended with last update being Part 9

Edited by pratik54000 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You are back with an amazing story bhai...😛
Welcome back...🤗
Coming to the prologue...
Interesting concept...
Its really a unique one...
The most different thing in this concept is Rey and Swayam are enemies(had never thought of this)..
That too Swayam hates girls...(he is surely a different swayam here)
Sharon is the twin sis of Rey...aww...dats nice...
And Kriya is Swayams sis...yeh bhi accha hai...
The best part is...Rey helps the girls who are betrayed by boys and Swayam helps the boys who are betrayed by girls...hehe...
About the CS...
It was awesome bhai...😳
This concept is fabulous...😊
I love it...😃

Edited by shravani97 - 13 years ago
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Beautiful beginning Pratik...I am loving the realistic approach you have taken for this SS...its beautiful...he hates love...he hates her ...his dislike for girls...everything altogether makes Swayam's character of a lover boy a 180* turn...and i am loving it...

Loved the little nuances you have shown the character sketch ...Rey the kanhaiya of college...LOL...u touched every aspect of student life..studies,extracurricular activities...the angle of love...loved KRIYAM convo...this Swayam is so real...Loving the love...😊


Thanx Mr CA...for posting this for me...m glad u didn't break IT...😳

Edited by deep_Tanha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good to see a new work of yours...:)
Coming to prologue n CS it was quite amusing n interesting concept
Swayam hate girls😆. n rival of rey too.:p
"Reyansh used to help girls whom boys
betrayed and Swayam helped boys
whom girls betrayed and this never
ending puzzle always ended up in
fight. ".The reason behind their fight was really erm different ...:p
Waiting for next part
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Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron

Good to see a new work of yours...:)
Coming to prologue n CS it was quite amusing n interesting concept
Swayam hate girls😆. n rival of rey too.:p
"Reyansh used to help girls whom boys
betrayed and Swayam helped boys
whom girls betrayed and this never
ending puzzle always ended up in
fight. ".The reason behind their fight was really erm different ...:p
Waiting for next part


Good to see you sadiya... and well lets see how story goes on... ya reason behind their fight was very obvious because this is a never ending puzzle... Thanks for reading it... and liking it...
Edited by pratik54000 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesomeee prologue...looking forward to the first part...
please update it soonnn...😛
swayam and rey char are very interesting...very eager 2 read UR FF👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice story line... eagerly waitin for d updates... pm me wen u update...
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Res ..

^^EDIT : Pratik Bhai 🤗 , I am really very glad to see you back in the writing business! I really, really am! And coming to this story😳, it's concept looks very pleasing, as well as promising!😎 I really can't express in my words how elated I feel seeing you start off with a new story!

Now, you really have to update em fast as am literally dancing on my bed seeing you here on this new story! *sigh*

Best of luck, and I want PMs the next time 😡

-Nivi!x
Edited by NocturnalBeing - 13 years ago
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nice begining
prologue nd cs was amazing
rey use to help girls whom betrayed by boys nd swayam use to help boys whom betrayed by girls
i love d concept
waiting for 1st chapter

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