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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tejukor

Hey per-tik 😆 ...thank god tune likhna nahi choda. Nahi toh saja hame bhugatni padti n hame itna classy writer ko khona padta. When i saw my in box n what i saw was a msg saying you have written somthing n cant tell u hw happy i was.I read ur...I don't know what u r say... ff or ss in one go...n seriously it was indeed a pleasure to read ur piece of work.
Talking abot ur ff toh very nice concept I know m quite late n every body already told u hw classy it was but fir bhi I would like to say pehle jhagda n than pyaar this kind of story is always a treat for swaron readers like me. I just loved the concept n one more thing jo sabse important hai n other writer bohot hi rarely kerte hai but aap k har ek written stuff me hota hai n woh hai ur long long update which I use to read with same excitement. Thank u thank u so much for re joining this writing world.


hey first thanks for a different style name 😆😆😆 and thanks for taking time out to read this and yes i am happy that you are glad to see me back thank you so much saying all the sweet things for me and work they really do mean a lot se bhi zyada... thanks again for a lovely gesture that you gave me dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Satluvsd3

bhaiya!!!🤗 am so so so so happy and happy and happy that you've not left...thank u so much bhaiya...chalo let me start now...par bhaiya you've got to excuse me,coz i had my exams,toh i didnt read a single work of ne1 here!!but i am happy that people have read your work,inspite of no m's being sent😊
Concept and characters:woowww great story ...rey and sharon,twins,sounds real fun,and kriya swayam,siblings,sounds double fun!!!...all the characters are pretty diff from each other i am loving it!!😃
Part 1!!:
WOW.1st update was really awesome...i love it for the fact that this whole new swayam is narrating this new story...amazing!😃right from his entry...the way a small MU let into a fight...to a warning by the princi...to the d awsum 😎convo outside d room😆...phir colg canteen mein,getting to know more about swayam!!...😉
this story's really one of a kind,really cool,completely diff since here there's rey gang and swayam gang...and swayam,this guy HATES girls OMG really!!!?(as far as i've read on this forum,this one's the 1st with such a background and such a character!!) that's y you rock bhaiya!!!⭐️ i really love this kind of swayam!!!😳😆i wonder how will SwaRon come like in the story ahead!!😳
bhaiya just two words for you"KEEP WRITING!!!"😉



Heya Sats my sweetheat sister i am so happy to see you back... i was missing something on my thread and you know what was that it was the sattu comment which remains most important comment on my work... Thanks for making this work complete by commenting sats... and i am so happy to read all the sweet things you said about the work... well i have tried my best to bring something new to the table to all the fans and i am glad that a great response has been received on this one. i will surely keep writing if you keep commenting like this you know that... gosh i missed you so much sats my dear dear dear sister... i love you lods and thanks for the satu comment. it really makes my work complete...
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Hey Guys I am back with update... before i update i just want to say that i dedicate this update to Deepika(Deep_TanHa),Sats(Satsluvd3) and Sukanya (Suku_SwaRon). The reason behind this dedication is three of them are most closed to me and deeps have turned rockerz yesterday only, Suks have writen her first work yesterday and Sats came back to IF yesterday from exams...so i am happy for three of them so this dedication from my side to them.

Act-3 Hit and Miss cat-mouse game

I came home after that and I was still thinking about the things happened throughout the day. I can really make out that it could have been one of the happiest days in my memory as everybody in college cheered me up and I was acknowledged for the efforts that I put in. But instead of that now I will remember the as the day which changed me really changed me.But one thing was sure today was the day which made me realizes that my opinion about the girls how they are, is correct.

And wait a minute did she say revenge? What kind of revenge and for what? I won the competition on my own I did not cheat anybody. Her brother lost to me because I was better. Wait-wait-wait no she wanted revenge because I answered her back in front of people which she thinks is a damm insult of her. If she thinks like that then she has to rethink about that because I just replied her arrogant behavior just the way it was required.

If she feels replying her is insult than she needs psychiatrist because her mind is not in working order. This was really disgusting thing which she had done today. This girl is just blowing my mind out seriously.

I am not able to sleep because the thoughts of that talk are really not allowing me to sleep. I am wondering that why god damm bullshit plans of some arrogant girl is affecting me. I really need to do something about this Miss. Famous because this is seriously not done. I am not able to sleep because of her. My total thinking capacity is reserved on only one incident and I am not able think anything beyond this.

Somewhere down the line she and me, we both knew that her brother lost to a better man. She was not able to grasp that anybody can beat her brother that to in a game in which he is champion. Moreover the thing that was really disturbing not only her but all was the dominance of theirs was being challenged by somebody. And suddenly there was a rivalry shaping up between Mr. Protector and me. But one more rivalry started last day and which was deeper than mine and Mr. Protector's rivalry, that rivalry was mine and Miss Famous rivalry because after that we both had started to hate each other because I challenged her to show her what I can do.

Oh god why I am I being so much conscious about these small things. I have taken care of her plan now and taught that bitch a suitable lesson than what is not allowing me to sleep now.

Whole night gone by like that I was not able to sleep or think anything because a very big change in me was building on. I never really hated anyone or I can say that hatred was the only emotion that was not in me until today but now I am seriously building this emotion in me and I hate girls more than anything now.

Next day morning rise up finally. I got ready to go to college. Only one thing was there in my mind that I don't want to face up her in the very morning.

I was praying to god that please god save me from that arrogant bitch in the morning because I wanted to spend my time in college happily because after college I had to attend the bloody dance rehearsals in which she out of all was partner and I know that would be one really irritating period of time. I am still wondering why I agreed to have her as my dance partner.

I reached the college and I was glad that she was not entering with me. I thanked god for a good start to the day and not showing Miss Famous face in the very morning. Instead of Miss Famous my day started with seeing face of a girl only and guesses what even though I hate girls, this girl always brings smile on my face.

Neha was the first person I saw since the morning and the reason why I was glad because you know Neha is a person who keeps everyone around her happy. Whatever the situation may be you will see her smiling always. She is one cheerful girl who motivates you to think that whatever you go through but in the end you will end up smiling.

And Neha was a management student so I guess she knew well how to handle situations when they are worst for you. She had this calm nature which can bring piece in you right away when she talks to you. So I was glad that Neha met me first because now I guess my day will be good.

I went in the college met all the friends and we had a little joking session of ours. As usual Neha and Bharat were the two who were providing us with some laughs. Then we went ahead for classes. But found out that some faculty and trustee meeting was going on so lectures were free so I chose to go in the library and read few books that can provide some information about .net software development system.

You know how ever we think the beginning was good and everything will be good. God shows us that it's never the case about what we think. And that day I realized that God is really here.

Generally my dance rehearsal was after the college time but today was a different case. Today the college was free so dance rehearsals were re-scheduled and I got this text saying the dance rehearsals are in morning.

I reached for dance rehearsal in the rehearsal hall as soon as I got the massage. But when I reached at the rehearsal hall to my surprise everybody was there and doing their routines. Even Nil and Vicky were there who are very popular for their never in time attitude. But today was different I was late than them.

I saw Mr. Protector looking at me smiling. I thought now he has got the golden chance to insult me in front of my friends and he will not leave that.

But to my surprise he didn't say anything and continued doing what he was doing with his partner. This was a bit weird for me to see that he left a chance to insult.

But then I saw Miss Famous coming at me smiling. I could make out that she was tempting to say something and now I realized why Mr. Protector did not say anything to me because he had left alone that thing for his dear sister and my newest enemy in the college Miss Famous.

"Oh nice to see that you came finally, my eyes were searching for you from long time, why did you take so long come here today?" she said standing right to my face.

I knew that she has got this perfect opportunity to take out her all frustration on me because I bloody late and she had hit the jack pot.

I was just thinking of what to reply and was lost in myself. Just than

"Where the hells are you lost? I am talking to you and look at me when I am talking to you. Where were you? We all are here from 10 AM for dance rehearsals and you are coming now. If you don't understand what I want then listen this in straight words I need an answer that where you were for so long" she said shouting at me

And here I was thinking that I was late by 15 minutes when I entered because I saw that Massage on 10:50. But now I found out that I was late by 60 minutes and that why Nil and Vicky are also there and I am not late but very late. But how can this happen I mean I got Massage saying Dance Rehearsals at 10:45 and I read that on 10:50 and she is saying that rehearsals were to start from 10.

But then suddenly something stroked to me and I was like oh Jesus Christ why I didn't realize that Mr. Protector was smiling on seeing me just because of this. Wait a minute he only used to send the massages for rehearsals that means he intentionally gave me wrong time so I could come late. May be yes it was. Not may be surely yes he can do that where sister can make such a disgusting plan than why her brother can't plan something. And he had right revenge because I beat him.

"I was in some work so I got late, I am sorry" I said

I said sorry because I cannot shout at her saying that I had received massage that said rehearsals were at 10:45. I mean I could have confirmed the timings with my friends once when I got the massage but how they were already here they didn't knew about that. But somebody should have called me saying about it whatever but I just cannot accept in front of her that I was fooled by them.

"How convenient answer is this. You were busy than what we all are doing here, you think we have gathered here for a bloody time pass. You know everyone had started their rehearsals only I was sitting here idle and why because my partner was busy with something. This is what you do when you know very well that how much dance rehearsals are important for us" She yelled at me showing that fake anger.

This girl was really a damm good actress I tell you, it never looked like she was acting and she didn't know that I won't come on time. In fact she gave an Oscar winning performance in that speech really.

Everybody stood there in the way they were. My friends looked at me like they were asking me the reason why I was silent when she was taunting me. But what could I do I was late and bloody helpless.

And what was more frustrating was that she scored one up on me by that trick.

"Look it was urgent I was in principal sir's cabin regarding my admission procedure and some certificates were required so I was submitting them. Now can we go ahead with practice without wasting much time if you are done with your speech" I said in lighter tone just to give that impression that I was right in my place.

And with my answer her place got down and I could see that the smile of Mr. Protector had also vanished because they looked convinced that I was in principle sir's cabin and doing that thing. How dumb were they actually. They didn't realize that college was free because faculty and trustee meeting was going on then how would I be in principle sir's cabin.

I tapped myself on back because they looked convinced with my acting. Wow Swayam dude you can act. And in mind I thought to myself that if that Miss Famous can give an award winning performance than why I can't because I was simply better than her. Here you go Miss Famous one all here between us got you in your own trap and gave myself an evil smirk at that.

"Ok fine but now you would have to stay here until we finish our steps. You will only be allowed to leave when we are done with everything" she said giving me the evil smirk

I got that she was up to something but I was equally up to task so let her do what she wants to.

We started dancing to our usual steps. And we were just at more distance from others just because we had started the practice later.

"Nice trick there to insult me. Bang on" I said to her smilingly

"Really, thanks for compliment" she replied and jerked my hand with too much weight.

Ouch it felt like my hand would come out from bones. Then she took turn and came back at me. (We were dancing salsa so these moves were going on)

"By the way you also smarty handled that trick" she said

So she was not that dumb as I thought her to be. She knew I was lying to her.

"Thanks, anything from you is most welcome on my side" I replied winking at her.

Just then I intentionally made her take turns in more than usual speed. Here you go bitch you tried to jerk off my hand this is what you get when you mess up with me.

We were just doing that whole time. One time she would hurt me and in reply other time I would do something to payback her.

We were not dancing actually but we were hurting each other in a way.

Then suddenly she kicked my feet suddenly and I feel on the ground. She held my hand to help me to get up and while doing that

"How was this boy?" she said

Very next moment I got up and held her from waist pulled her up and moved turns with abnormal speed. It looked like everything was running when I stopped.

"How about this girl?" I replied her winking at her.

This really made her angry. She felt like whatever she did was bouncing back on her.

And why not if you try to act smart with me than you have to pay for that and she was just paying off for that. The bitch thought that she is smart enough to handle any boy but lesser she know that I am something that is really hard to handle.

She was really getting desperate to teach me a lesson the frustration was clearly evident in her eyes because everything that she tried doing didn't work.

She wanted tear me part and but I was equal to the task.

Now in between everybody was done with their rehearsals and it was getting dark almost in noon. Everybody was planning to leave because their rehearsals were over.

"Hey Shar lets go now… complete the rest parts tomorrow" here came Mr. Protector who definitely thought that one day I will eat his sister.

"No Bhai you carry on and go back home I will stay here to finish the remaining part" she said

"No Shar it's getting dark and seems like it would rain soon. I cannot allow you to stay outside in such weather" spoke awesomely worried Mr. Protector

"No Bhai I really need to finish this thing today" she spoke

"But if it will rain then electricity will go off and you know rehearsal hall doesn't have enough windows from which some light can come in hall. And you will not have any of this lights and music then what is the point in staying back" Rey spoke

"Bhai let me do that till the time it remains in working conditions" she spoke

Well how she could leave like that, when she herself challenged me to stay back until we finish the dance today. And moreover she just cannot accept defeat against me if she cannot do that thing.

She was very desperate to stay back. First I thought she was not backing down from the promise that she took me to stay back till that. But no there was surely something that was popping up in her mind. She was planning something to do with me and it was the time I needed to be aware of her now because she was up to something that I didn't know.

She had this evil smirk going on every time she told Mr. Protector that she wants to stay back.

Boy o boy I need to do something very early and before she does anything that can harm me.

But what was she up to be the question in my mind and the answer to that was not coming out from anywhere. Gosh this girl was really driving nuts out of me.

"OK then you doesn't leave this place. I am leaving the car along with kaka here and I am going with Vicky. You come back when you are done with this thing" he spoke breaking strings of my mind.

Mr. Protector was constantly glaring at me as if I am gone do something to his sister oh no sorry-sorry his princess. Oh God why all these mushy-mushy things suit these kinds of people most.

"Ya Bhai no need to worry I will back once I am done with that" she spoke looking me instead of him.

Both of them were looking at me while talking. I am his sister wanted to stay back that too with me where was my fault in that, then why were glaring me like I was the one who was holding her back.

God why don't you give brains to these useless creatures of yours, I am sick of them. It didn't look like Mr. Protector was in mood to leave his princess with me because he felt I would harm her. God damm yes I will harm her if she does anything that drives me nuts off.

Well finally Mr. Protector went out. And we started our dance or say little war of us. But suddenly something hit us and we were lost in the music. I think that music was just so good and first time I heard a Hindi song being played in our rehearsals. The song was "Tum Se Hi" from Jab We Met.

We were dancing in sync. Our movements came from time to time with each other. I had lightened my grip on her and even she was looking seductively in my eyes. Damm she was beautiful. This was first time I realized how beautiful she was. For that moment I forgot that she was my enemy or I hated girls.

Her eyes were talking to me. Suddenly it felt like she can read my heartbeats, and I was seeing her through her eyes. Than we moved on, we separated from each other and went in opposite directions, but we were looking back in each other's eyes.

I was really out of my trance now because I didn't know what music was playing on and what lyrics were going on. The only thing I knew at that time was what her eyes were saying to me. And suddenly we both turned and first time our eye contact broke and it felt like the whole world slipped out of my hands just in a single second.

She had started running towards me and suddenly I could feel that she is going to jump at me so I turned around at her and the moment I turned around she jumped and I caught her. She held onto my waist by spreading her legs on my waist. I was still holding her and we were looking into each other's eyes.

We were going closer and closer to each other. We were so close that I could smell her and feel her breaths on my face. There hardly any space between our lips. We were about to kiss, we were just an inch away from kissing or say our lips were about to touch when her phone rang.

Damm we were back in reality. What was I doing? I was about to kiss my enemy or the girl I hate most in this world. How weird it felt. I was still holding her with puzzled look because I really didn't know what to do or why we were in that position.

Then I leaved her on the floor and she went to attend phone call and I ran in to the fresh room that was in right corner of rehearsal hall.

I quickly got water and washed off my face to realize what I was doing. Damm thank god that I didn't kiss her. Man how can I get carried away with any girl or especially her out of all.

I was just thinking all this while the power suddenly went off and it was very dark inside the hall. And guess what Miss. Famous was afraid of dark.

Boy o boy did I strike gold? Yes I did strike gold now. But now what can I do to cash in this opportunity somehow this is the best time to get revenge for morning trick of her.

I was thinking something… suddenly my split personalities emerged in front me…

Swayam 1: what are you thinking? You will not get any better opportunity than this to scare her….

Swayam 2: ya right buddy and I know you never miss on to such things

Swayam: yes I want to cash in but what can I do? I cannot find anything or way to scare her.

Swayam 3: oh that's the thing than you forgot something…

Swayam: what?

Swayam 4: You have a ghost mask in your bag. And you can use it to scare her.

Swayam: but from where did that came in mine bag.

Swayam 3: Are duffer you remember one day Bharat one day was trying to scare you with it and you took it from him and kept in your locker. Today only you took it out to give him back but you have forgotten to give him back.

Swayam: oh yes-yes remember that… so you guys think that I should use it to scare her? But don't you think that would too much? I mean girl can have nervous breakdown or can faint?

Swayam 2: are if she gets faint or nervous break out then throw water on her face she will come normal again.

Swayam 1: now don't lose time and go ahead do what we say scare her.

Swayam: Are you sure?

Swayam 4: I will beat you up now if you don't go.

So after this brain storming session with my split personalities I finally decided to scare her using that mask of Bharat.

I went out silently without making noise and took my bag. Then I took out that mask and wear on my head. Then I took out my mobile and used the torch effect that it had to highlight the mask with light so that it can look scarier.

She was very feared and shouting my name time after time but I didn't reply her for once. I went and stood behind her and shouted her name.

She got scared with that and she turned around on my face. As soon as she turned around I put torch on my mask and shouted hhowww….. It was damm scary man even I got scared at the time of making that noise.

She got scared very much and shouted with full stamina and she spoke that typical Hindi movie dialogue "Bachao-Bachao Koi hai?"

I was really having fun doing that to her it was giving me a pleasure like heaven. I was having fun to see her scared face.

But then suddenly something happened that I had not expected to happen and which actually gave me a shock. That was very big shock I guess.

Suddenly she got arouse shouting and hit me a kick me at bottom of waist right at the sensitive place and ouch I went on floor. Damm that really hurt me a lot, Miss Famous really had strong legs.

"Ouch, Sharon it's me Swayam" I spoke removing my mask in pain lying on the floor keeping light on my face.

"So you were trying to scare me" she spoke

"Yes god damm it don't you get that. But who hits such strong kick when he/she is scared?" I shouted in pain

"I hit them who scare me" she spoke proudly

"Oh gods please save me" I spoke

I suddenly remembered all the gods in one go. The pain was really unbearable damm this girl from where she got such strong legs and what was the need to hit here only she could have hit on legs or feet also, Crazy girl.

"Don't try to mess up with me you understand" she spoke and went outside.

Just while going out she saw at me spoke "I am 5-4 up"

Damm she was also counting I thought.

I mentally cursed myself for trying this worst idea on her. The pain reduced after sometime and drove off to home.

That was one eventful day that finally came to an end with me getting kicked by Miss Famous. She must be smiling still thinking what she did to me. She was 1up on me now and I need to buck up fast now.

Just wait and watch Miss Famous I am not going to leave you so easily for this, Ouch it still hurts.

I have tried my best to make this one entertaining... i hope you all enjoy this one as you all did last two parts...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Res
Unres
I M FIRST [:D/] Yayy 😎*patting my back*.I kinda stalked this ss 🤣
Coming to update
Did I have to say that how much I love this ss
It was Amazing update
Hehe poor swayam can't even sleep coz of his Miss famous.Ahh he will soon get answer that why he think about her soon much..:p.I really liked swayam's pov n loved the way how u described every little thing through his pov whether it was about neha,his group,girls or about his new rivals.
New plan well swayam is smart enough to payback this afterall he is a SAVIOR.They both deserve prize for their superb action+dance war. 🤣 🤣 Mr protector is really worried about his princess n again swayam pov rocks hehe don't worry he will not kill ur baby sister 🤣
Ahem so finally dance make its way n they lost in each other.Why man makes cell phones.. :p
N then comes my fav part rofl sharon is sharon who kicks when he/she is scared 🤣 never in swayam wildest dream he thinks about it next time be carefull boy he is not any other girl😆.As I said earlier I really loved this jungli swaron...:)
Looking forward to next part n pls update it ASAP.
Edited by sadiyaswaron - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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U N R E S E R V E D.


Prathik Bhai! 😆😆

What an update bhaiyya. I loved it throughout sachi mucchi.😃 I am loving this story in Swayam's point of view from now not that I didn't like before but now I am enjoying more. 😊Poor soul Swayam kept thinking about his bitch. Sharon girl you really made his mind about yourself being a bitch very bad for your future girly! 😉Wink Wink!😛

Ahh,Sharon just want the God damn revenge on him because he insulted her in college especially when she was showing him attitude.. Now that sounds more bitchy-ness. LOL! 😆


Swayam you do that or this you have to see your bitch face very first one day or other and mind me you would love it! 🤣

Hahaha.. Swayam couldn't open his mouth when Sharon insulted him for coming late.. I loved that Swayam thinks that Sharon should be awarded an Oscar as she also is acting but she is not and I love this attitude wali..angry wali Sharon all the time but innocent wali works good too lots of time.. and I hope we get to see some may be a very little innocence in this story too. Are we going to get to see that Bhaiyyaaa?? 😕😊


Rey don't look at OUR Swayam like this OK! Chuck it dude..he won't eat up Sharon rather he can be a nice meal for her quiet soon.. 🤣🤣


Awww,Hahahahaha.😆😆. That still hurts..🤣 Swayam will think more than thousand times again when he will try to scare his bitch..😛 She do some good work out yaar.. 😛😳Tight kick there.. Poor Swayam.. He will need some icing there..😆😉 I can come along to help Swayam baby! 😛☺️

Now I am expecting more fun..entertainment(not dirt film wala please).😆.romance too on between this kicked soul and tigress bitch.. 😃

My mind has already started thinking that what Swayam will be doing to her.. NOW! Tchh tchh Sharon you better look out.. you have done a deadly sin on him! 😉


P.S: Bhaiyyyaaa please next update kal hi kardena.. loving this story..ROFL!😆 I am going nut case for this story.. 😛 Hahaha.. and please iss baar aur bara update aur jaldi bhi! 😊 When will you update??😊😕

P.S 2 : Sorry if you mind about the perverted joke on swayam's icing and me helping him! 😕

-Tanya-


Edited by Tanya_Swaronluv - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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r4es Done
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
fullon enrgy🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
plz plz plz plz update soon plzplz 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Tanya Congo on become Goldie👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wonderful pratik!!!
Fantastic job!!!
Thnx for the pm too.
Loved the way how swayam scared sharon nd got a kick in return!!
I also loved the almost kiss nd he seeing sharons beauty not her arrogance!
Do update soon:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Pratik...

i know i am commenting the first time on this FF. But i did read all the chapters all are just brilliant.

You are back with a amazing concept. I loved all your concepts. This one is just superb. I am loving this one.

the best part when he scares her and she kicks him back..this was so different unless other times where a girl just hugs the guy or cries over it.

i like the way you are developing their characters. Something new to read.

Get set go... i am all set to demands updates for this.

On the whole... Splendid job.

Nehal
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Posted: 13 years ago
Bro!!
Awesomee updatee!
Sharon is giving sleepless nights to swayamm...poor guy..didn't even slept properly..!
I liked neha's character description...it was niicee!
Then haha rey's trick worked on swayam!
Siren sharon!! fullonn!
But both are neck to neck with each other in terms of insulting...especially in the dance moves...
and then loll rey was actually so protectivee..!!
Aur fir maskk! scare ko bhi scared kar diya sharon ne...haha poor swayam..got a kickk!!
Freakingg funn!!

Waiting for the next one :-)

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The days of friendship and love Season4 Part 1 Thank you very much Sydell for the wonderful cover page. This SS is inspired by various films...

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Posted by: sarveshjoshi42 · 9 years ago

Here are Characters of the Story Ritik : elder brother of Shivaay , Ranveer , Sanskar and love interest of Shivanya Shivanya : elder sister of

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Posted by: sarveshjoshi42 · 8 years ago

Ritik Mehra : Business Tycoon and Elder brother of Raghav Shivanya Kapoor : Doctor and Elder Sister of Naina and love interest of Ritik

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