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Posted: 13 years ago

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Guys thank you very much to all of those who read this. I am very happy with the response I have got because all of you read this yourself nobody forced you to read this and yet you decided to support me and read that. Thanks again because this response has been the most satisfactory to me till that i know you all will think that 13 likes is not a satisfactory response but trust me it is most satisfactory. well as i had promised here goes part 1.


Act ' 1 St. Louis College and starting of everything

(This story is from the POV of Swayam so you will only get to see the things the way Swayam sees and says)

Everything started after I got admission in St. Louis College. A college which was considered as the best college for the studies of Management and Computer Science Applications. There was only college in Mumbai that encouraged sports and other activities with these two particular syllabuses. Generally people from these syllabuses are considered to be studious and occupied with number games but here it was totally different as we had a sports team and dance team there. The only reason why I joined this college was that I loved playing Tennis and Dance and this was the only collage that allowed me to do that with studies that dad wanted me to get.

I was very happy to be here in this college as this was the most rocking place I could have been in my life. Everything was just perfect I got selected for Tennis singles tournament as one of the players to represent the college at state level and I was very happy with what I had achieved than. And that was indeed my lucky day as I got call from dance team as well to fill in the spot of Parallel Male lead dancer of the college.

But who knew that joining the dance team would change everything in my life. But because of dance team I met these two best friends of mine Bharat and Amar. I know you would be thinking that both of them are known as losers in the college than why I stand by their back but you know when I got in that dance team I didn't know that it was being ruled by someone who was part dance team and only his decisions mattered there. Bharat and Amar were somebody who was totally being out casted because both of them were not stereotype metro lover boys. Girls used to get uncomfortable with them being there and there were many boys like them who had to stay quit because girls did not like them.

Now the reason why those boys were out casted was Mr. Reyansh Singhania the famous lover boy cum hero of the college. He was also a General Secretary of the college. Girls used to drool over him like he was some honeybee. And Mr. Reyansh was always an attention seeker he loved the way girls used to call him and he had started to think that he was the ultimate protector of girls and boys whom girls are not comfortable would have to stay under threat called Reyansh Singhania and his chaadi gang Vicky and Nil. Vicky and Nil were the stereo type metro lover boys who used to pamper girls with their sweet talks and everything.

And the reason why girls used to be close to that group was more than Reyansh his twin sister Sharon Singhania famous dancers of the college and by batch mate. She had influence on most of the girls because of her fashion instincts and over the top behavior and with boys drooling for her because she looked very beautiful. Girls knew the company of Sharon was more profitable as it gave them many boyfriends with whose pockets their so called lavish life styles were going on and moreover they will get a protector called Rey.

Now the day I first went to rehearse with the dance team the incident happened that I saw with my eyes, Bharat was getting ready for his routine and he was doing some steps I guess he was trying to memorize the steps and Amar came to him to ask something and suddenly Bharat horsed that b-boying kick and Amar got imbalance and fell on a girl who was main lead female dancer along with Sharon. There was no fault of Amar because poor guy had just lost his balance because of a sudden kick he saw and fell who knew that girl would be going from there at the same time it was just casual accident but what happened after that really caught my anger management system.

The girl Shweta on whom Amar fell by mistake got up and blamed Amar for being pervert and trying forcing her. What next can you imagine yes our own Mr. Protector were here and started to tear apart the poor guy with punches and kicks round him without even listening to him for once. I waited for some time thinking that he is angry but he will listen to him for once but no I as wrong the boy was going on and on. He was not ready to understand anything and over and above his sister Miss. Famous Sharon was encouraging him to beat apart poor guy who was surely not able to defend himself. And Mr. Protector really liked this way to punish a person without even allowing him to explain the reason.

It was just out of control for me than, you know how much I hate lies and liars. I just got in between the things where now I could see even Bharat who was trying to explain the reason and protect Amar was also being beaten shamelessly and numbers game was getting heavy on him because 5 people were beating up two. I spoke to Sharon that allows him to explain himself why this happened I saw it was unintentional. But that dirty cat Shweta didn't allow me to say the whole thing and spoke that it was his pervert act and I am his friend that's why I am trying to protect him.

So Miss. Famous blasted at me saying "what the hell do you know about us and this college it's just been few days you are here and we are here for months now and we know what is right and what is not. This jerk may have served you some wafers but that doesn't mean he is innocent. Get this straight and stay out of this"

I got that very moment that no one is going to listen to me here and I have to do something myself to get these poor guys out of trouble. So I went in between the fight and told Reyansh that stop he will not be able to tolerate such brutal attack but he than just pushed me on the floor.

Now this had totally taken away all my control that I had on my anger and now only God could save those 5 jerks. I went inside and started to hit them. Nil was the first one who came straight target of my straight kick on the face and he fell on floor in one kick only hahahaha bloody metro lovers don't have any strength to protect themselves from on jodhpuri kick. Than it was Vicky who was knocked down in one punch in stomach and he was done for good. The other two just backed off seeing what I did to Vicky and Nil. But Mr. Protector got all fired up and started to target me and I equally replied to him. None of us were ready to leave until the college security and students separated us.

We were taken to principal's office and we were questioned for our behavior where Mr. Protector told his reason and was trying to be a savior of that bitch. And I told sir about why I got in and what I saw and sir were convinced finally that all this was a misunderstanding and such things should not be repeated again.

But he doesn't know that something different was going to start in this college now. We got out of the office and everybody was waiting for us outside. As soon as we came out everyone thanked Rey for being supportive and standing up to task where as four people who were also part of dance team but stood different they were Amar, Bharat , Neha and Vishakha who thanked me for helping Amar.

Rey heard them thanking me turned around on me'..

"Hey you do you have any idea whom you have messed up with?" he spoke to me'

"Well I don't know but I am all ears please tell me whom I messed up with'" I replied'

"I am Reyansh Singhania the GS of this college and my dad is a big stake holder of this college" he said'

"Oh so you are trying to abuse me with all this?" I replied'

"No, I am warning you to stay out of my matters in future" he said'

"Ya- ya I know how you handle things being GS" I replied

"It was his fault he doesn't know how to behave with a girl" he spoke'

"Really I believe your girl doesn't know the difference between pervert and accident" I replied

"It was just an accident that unfortunately involved your girl in" I told'

"No it was not an accident, he knowingly did that to her" out came Miss Famous Sharon.

"And how do you know that, you were not there when all that happened. I saw what actually happened there and poor guy just lost his balance and ended up falling on ground it was just sad that the girl was just passing by at the same time" I spoke.

"Oh please don't try to act so innocent I know how these middle class boys and their mentalities are" she spoke

"Really than keep it yourself because I really don't care what the two of you think about this. I did what was right at that point of time. If Amar was wrong than I would be the first person who would have beaten the hell out of him" I said.

"How dare you speak to my sister like that?" there came Mr. Protector again

"Look it doesn't make any difference to me that this so called fashion disaster is your sister or anybody. I just replied her because she was uttering non sense and she was not even there when the whole incident happened" I spoke to him'

Now when I called Miss Famous a fashion disaster it really looked as if someone had put a big whole in some precious wood. Her mouth was wide open hearing this and Mr. Protector was also shocked because of this. Now I got an idea that somehow Miss Famous only will reply to this.

"Look you middle class fiasco of your family what do you know about fashion first of all? And second thing this is the latest trend in the market of Paris, you won't have any idea about where Paris is" she spoke out of her lungs and it was clearly evident that she was irritated because of that comment of mine and while she spoke Mr. Protector proudly stood with her as if she had stroked some gold.

"Oh ya how would this middle class agile fiasco of his parents know that what is the latest trend in the fashion capital of the world Paris. I really don't know that Paris is in France, Europe. And I really don't know that the outfit you are wearing now is the same outfit which was showcased on the Vogue cover page on famous model Taylor Swift" I replied

This was like I had dropped a hand gannet in enemy tank' They all were shocked with this'.

"Whatever you mind your work and don't try to come between our works" spoke the frustrated Mr. Protector and walked out of the place with his Miss Famous sister who was still shocked with my reply.

And we moved to the canteen and also took a bandage because Amar needed some medical attention as he was badly hurt in his hand.

We were seated in a round table in a canteen where we were having tea and some snacks. They were telling me everything about collage atmosphere and the partial attitude of Reyansh and Sharon towards such students. So finally I got to know Mr. Protector and Miss. Famous very well.

They told me that I was the first one in the collage who dared to step up against Reyansh and I should be bewaring of the consequences I have to face because of that. They were trying to make me realize as if I had some big crime or something. Only because he was dominant they feared him and this was not good.

So I told them to be calm and relax as I know how to handle such things. Hearing me say like that you know they felt relived somewhat I don't know why but I could sense happiness on their faces.

"What? Why you all are staring at me like this, something special on my face?" I asked

"Nothing actually I am very happy now finally somebody is here to step up with us against Reyansh" spoke Vishakha

"Ya we are totally disgusted with all this stuff of them and we are not in big numbers so nobody listens to us" spoke Bharat supporting Vishakha

"Ok so Mr. Protector and Miss. Famous are making your life hell basically" I asked them smiling.

"Nothing to smile about in this, do you even from what we have to go through every day to just stand tall in this collage" Neha spoke

"Whatever you saw was just a trailer of things that we have to go through all the time" Amar spoke

"Ok may be I don't know what you all are going through but you all should not follow them and oppose them that's the only way you all can survive I guess" I spoke like a leader somewhat.

"And what do you think?" Neha spoke

"That they we will allow us to oppose them openly" Vishakha spoke

"Ya they will beat us like hell if we do that" Amar Spoke

"Sometimes I feel like punching head off those bustards but his father is a trustee and if I do anything to him that means I am making my way out of the collage" Bharat spoke out of frustration

So that was it I could sense how much they feared with this eviction thing if Reyansh or Sharon get hurt. And I could see that they were just riding high because they thought nobody will go against them because their father was trustee.

But little did they know about me. Actually nobody knows me well in the collage till then and they were the first people with whom I sat in college after 3 months of my admission.

And as you know how much I hate such things and the reason why dad got me out of Howard University and sent me to India followed me here also. You know I realize one thing that girls were the main problem here especially because all of them came from rich background or were girlfriends of some rich studs so they thought they rule the college and especially when Mr. Protector was around they had all the reasons to be happy.

Frankly I hate girls because of this reason. It's not that I don't respect girls or anything. I know many girls who are decent just like Neha and Vishakha seemed to me in the first meeting itself. It was just that I hate girls who use all this showoff clothes and expensive accessories and all. Neha and Vishakha were also rich as the other girls were but they looked so into their own backyard. They were just like all of us with no attitude and fun loving persona. But girls like Sharon who knew just one thing and that is fashion I really hate them. And the boys I don't know why drool over such bitches and later find that they were using them just for the money they had and then those boys become helpless and could do nothing but just to see the girl they loved roaming around with someone else.

So I told them to calm because I was there with them and till the time I am with them nobody would touch them. But they were still worried because of the fact that Reyansh's father was the trustee.

So finally I had to disclose this fact that I am a Shekhawat and my full name is Swayam Shekhawat which was just a shock for them. Because the sudden shock was unbearable to them. Actually as you know dad is the owner of Shekhawat group of Companies who owns the total stake of the collage trust and the one of the major donor to the collage trust and most of the collage properties were donated by Dad and his company.

"What? You are Swayam Shekhawat, son of Ran veer Singh Shekhawat and grandson of Mr. Bhairon Singh Shekhawat?" Vishakha spoke in excitement

"I mean you people own one of the biggest IT & computer hardware companies in the world right." Amar spoke

"Yes you are right. I am son of Ran veer Singh Shekhawat the famous business tycoon from Jodhpur and now in London and owner of Shekhawat group and stake owner in Hewlett Packard. And yes Bhairon Singh Shekhawat ex-home minister of India is my grandfather" I replied to their curious questions.

Now they were relieved that somebody very strong was standing with them. And they agreed to stand by with me in everything.

But as you know I had to make them understand that this was a secret and nobody should know that who I am and what connections I do have with the Shekhawat family because my dad wants to see me earn everything myself and I believe that I like living life of common people where you have friends who are for real and with you because of you. So they understood the thing and we became friends. So this was the first end of first eventful day in college after my shift.

But I was very glad that finally I got friends who were not show off and easy to understand people.

I came home very happy that day and I felt proud of myself that I helped a person.

I had most peaceful sleep that day because now I knew that I had friends in collage and I would not be alone.

Next day I reached college and was just getting out of the parking when suddenly a car came and stood before me.

And very next moment Miss Famous got out of the car.

Seeing that I thought to myself that oh no why god? Out of all the people why this irritating girl was the first one to meet me.

She came to me in the same old Diva style which I had seen many times in Howard.

She thought she was making some impression on me by wearing latest outfit that was in trend I guess it was and stood against me.

"Don't you have manners?" she spoke loudly

"What?" I replied

"Don't you see that our car is coming and how dare you come in our way?" she spoke with full attitude

I was just seeing around and checking other things because I was least interested in that bull shit of her in the early morning. I don't know why she enjoyed exposing so much and talking loudly.

"Where the hell are you seeing? See here when I am talking to you, answer me now" she said

"Well I was just searching that if there is any notice board which says that it's your way and nobody is allowed to walk on this" I spoke

"Puh lease don't try to act smart" she spoke

"I am not trying I am smart" I replied

"What do you think yourself haan I will show you what it means to mess up with me?" she spoke

I just walked on from there saying "Dream on". I wonder why she had to waste so much of energy on me because I am not gone follow any of those orders of her.

She looked very disgusted with this behavior of mine.

But little did she know that everything changes with time and it was time when they need to understand somebody is there to stand up against them.

I had decided to cut down every wrong thing that they did.

I joined my friends and went to the class as it was getting late.

In the way we all were enjoying the chat which happened between me and Miss. Famous in the parking lot.

Actually the reason why they were laughing because they had never seen Miss. Famous get outcaste by a boy like this, almost every boy in collage liked her or I should say drooled over her.

So avoidance was first time experience for her because till date she had avoided everyone.

I don't know why but I just hated her they way she used to arrogant and lame with people. She was a good student who had almost all the capabilities to go places. But you know what as Dad say when you think that you are the best and you know everything, it's the time of beginning of you to go down to the bottom.

She was just the same to me.

Guys I have tried to be innovative with my story telling style i hope you all enjoy that. And please provide the same response that you gave the concept. All the criticisms are invited.

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ACT – 5 Changing Equations at St. Louis

After that I drove back to home and you went in the college to complete the admission formalities.

But you know what one thing was constantly going on in my mind and that was why the hell everybody got jealous seeing you around. I guess they had not seen a pretty girl in long time except Miss Famous but I guess seeing her everyday made everybody used to her beauty so you were like breath of fresh air to them.

(While saying this Swayam got hit on his shoulder by kriya because he was in a way was making her shy by complementing her like that, I know girls like complements but when your own brother says something like this then they surely go shy)

Then suddenly I thought about the kiss I shared with Miss Famous it was delicious I can bet on that. She had one hell pair of juicy lips yar.

"Wait a minute did I kiss a girl?" Oh god "yes I did kiss a girl, and that too the arrogant bitch Miss Famous"

I didn't have done that I mean kissing her was not bad either but you expect your first kiss to be with a person you love most and I didn't love her for sure. Why the hell I wasted my first kiss on her.

I never had kissed a girl before and I never thought I would kiss anyone like this. But I don't know what forced me more getting Mr. Protector to fight with me or making Miss Famous realize that she was girl and she should know what a boy can do when he gets dirty.

But hold on she was not afraid or shy to me instead she enjoyed the kiss. I mean I was trying to teach her lesson by kissing her and she was enjoying the kiss that was really not done yar.

Though I also liked the kiss it was really nice. She surely knows how to kiss and drive a man crazy for another. Look at her lips they are so juicy.

Arghhh what am I thinking now? She is a rival and I should be thinking what next to do but instead of that I am enjoying the taste of her lips. That was really very shameful of me.

But why do I need to plan for tomorrow because I have this surprise called Kriya with me which is enough make Mr. Protector go weak on his knees. Did you look at his reactions today at kriya? He was drooling all over her. Ya may be Kriya can be a great help to me.

I should go and talk to Kriya.

"Hey can I come in?" I said to Kriya

"Hey Sam sure, why are you being so formal today?" you asked

"Well nothing much I was going through the corridor and saw your lights still lighted up so I thought to ask if you need anything" I said

"No I am fine and I was preparing my dress for college tomorrow. It's my first day so I should better look my best tomorrow what do you say?" you said

"Oh ya you should look your best tomorrow after all you are my sister and you come from Paris, so it should look on you that you know the trends better than anyone else" I said complementing her (You know I tell you one thing that taking a favor from your sister is more hard than taking revenge from your enemy because you have to pamper her and agree to all her conditions )

"Ya correct. Hey wait a minute why the hell I did not realize that you complement me only when you have something devilish running in your mind and you want to involve me into that" you said

"Perfect, now that's why apart from you I hate all the girls because they are dumb. You are the smart one because you know whose sister you are but anyways that's not the thing, ya I need your help to teach lesson to those siblings you know about them right" I said

"Oh please shut this butter shop for now and listen to me for once and all that we are here to study and by study I mean only study and co-curricular activities attached with college. So you will not be in this revenge game and all ok" you said

"I am not the one who has started this. They started it by scolding my friend and you know I cannot bear any injustice to anyone" I said

"You are not chief justice at court that you cannot bear that ok. Swear on me that no more revenge games from now on" you said

"Hey that's not right. This is emotional blackmail. Ok fine I can swear that I won't start anything from my side but if they do anything than I swear on you that I will not leave any lose ends than" I said

"Ok I can permit you on this ground. But leave this aside you know what my best friend Diana" you said

"Ya what happened to that lizard" I said

"Eww she is not lizard and nothing has happened to her. She is coming here for some days to St. Louis College for some project work of hers. I have submitted her application today with Principal and he approved immediately" you said

"What lizard will come to here wow that will be fine, we will have a blast than you me and her will have a rocking time here" I said

"Ya sure but look I am in management section and she is here for her project on IT students so she would be working in your section so you have to take care of her" you said

"Oh ya sure don't worry I will take care of the lizard very well" I said

"Oh please and don't do anything mischievous to her" you said

"Why the hell you think that I can do only mischief. I can be a good boy" I said

"Ya I know good boy who can beat anybody anytime right?" you said

"Please they had started that I didn't and don't taunt me for that" I said

"OK-ok now let's head to sleep. We have to go college tomorrow and ya we have to pick up Diana from her uncle's home on the way" you said

"Lizard is already here wow that's amazing. Ya we should surely get some sleep because tomorrow is a long day" I said smiling mischievously

I had promised you that I will not do anything first but I didn't said that I can't force them to start a tiff. Gosh I am so evil but what can I do they have not left a way for me.

Mr. Protector and Miss Famous be ready because seeing Kriya got out this reactions from you then I wonder what will Diana's inclusion will lead everything to. But one thing is sure I am going to have full fun of this situation.

Next morning as it was decided we took Diana along with us from her uncle's house and went to college.

But did you know one thing that this was the first time I reached college late from the usual group time of ours and that was just because of you two. I don't know why you take so long to get ready.

Anyways as you know I was waiting for the moment to reach the college and we just reached the parking lot and what did I see Mr. Protector had taken my parking just because you got late.

But no worries today is my day the parking very next to Mr. Protector was empty so I got my car parked there.

But after that as I had expected just as the two of you got down from the car everybody in the parking were looking at you like fools. I mean they were also wondering that any girl except Neha and Vishakha talked to me in the college, and I don't know why but Neha and Vishakha were not counted in the normal girl's quota of the college.

But today was a different day two of the most beautiful girls they would have seen were getting down from my car and not only that both of them were coming with me to the college.

You should have seen that place everybody was curious to know who you were and more than that why you two were with me and not with the Famous Mr. Protector for whom girls used to drool.

Well to my surprise my group and their group everybody was there outside at the entrance. I totally forgot that Bharat had told me that it was dance team meet in the morning itself.

But anyways you should have seen the look on the face of Mr. Protector and Miss. Famous seeing us arrives to them.

And you know what Mr. Protector who never noticed much girl was seeing you like a maniac I didn't notice him looking at Diana as he was looking at you. But rests all were blown away by you two.

I saw Mr. Protector was only interested in you because I don't know somehow he felt that Diana was way out of his reach or league and you can figure out seeing Diana that She can't be handled by anyone because she was flirty highly and she had this naughty face which was enough to make anybody realize that you cannot catch her and I know Mr. Protector was Smart enough (though I hate to admit that but its true) to understand which girl can suit him more.

So I intentionly introduced you first to Neha and all by saying that guys meet

"Kriya Ghai my one and only sister and cousin from Paris, and yes she here to complete her Business Administration degree. She holds a degree in Fashion Designing and Diamond Designing. She is a dancer too so she is joining the dance team too (this one made a happy strike on Mr. Protector's face)" I said introducing you.

And I met you with Neha, Vishakha, Bharat and Amar and also Miss. Famous and Mr. Protector and their team because I knew they were bowled away.

"Kriya meet Mr. Protector I mean Reyansh Singhania and Miss. Famous opps sorry Sharon Singhania. Both of them are the leads along with me for the dance team and now you will be joining this team too so meet them and their gang of Nilesh, Vicky, Simi and Rinni" I said while making you introduce them

I Saw Miss Famous was jealous and she was wondering who the other girl was so I went to Diana and held her in waist intentionally.

"Guys Meet Lizard" I said

And everybody got scared seeing here and there but Miss Famous was constantly looking at me because I was holding Diana and she was prettier than Miss Famous and I know Miss Famous couldn't stand that fact for once.

And lizard hit me on the shoulder saying "Stop it Sam you Cockroach"

"Relax guys there is no lizard here. Meet Diana Matthews, she is also from Paris and best friend of me and Kriya. Diana is here for a project on IT students in India for her university grades in correspondence course. She is a writer and dancer and so she can be some help to dance too till the time she is here" I said

"And Diana you have already heard everyone's name when I introduced them to Kriya so here is the gang and meet Bharat and Amar because only this two will be with us in the IT Section and rest will join Kriya in management section" I said

Just then I don't know why but out of desperation or what Rinni spoke up "We will also be there with you, if you need anything"

And then the look on Miss Famous face was so pleasing to me because she got angry and hit Rinni with ankle indicating her to back out.

But it was too late because I already could sense that both the girls were dying to discuss about the clothes she was wearing which were designed by Kriya.

"Well guys Swayam said almost everything about me to all of you. So here I am joining the college from today and I hope we get along well in the dance rehearsals and in the class also" you spoke shaking everyone's hand.

Then everybody left for their respective sections and classes took on. While Diana was with me every part of time today and I was enjoying the time showing her around. But there was somebody who I guess did not like this new side of me.

Well the day passed without any event for the first time but I didn't realize that time because I was too busy with Diana.

It was time to go to rehearsals now so I was about to go to change when Diana informed me that she has to leave early today because she needs to reach somewhere that's why she and Kriya are leaving and Kriya has told her to inform me that She will attend the rehearsals from tomorrow and she has told this to Reyansh also.

After saying this Diana left

I got ready and went to the rehearsal hall for the dance rehearsals. But I was surprised to see that nobody was there. So I went in and sat there for some time to wait if somebody may come or something should have got them late.

But it was getting late and I was wondering what the hell was wrong why nobody came. So I called to Bharat to find out that Rehearsals got cancelled today and they had received the massage from Rey.

So I thought Rey might have told Kriya to inform me and Diana had failed to listen to full massage of Kriya. Since I was there, I thought to dance for some time alone.

As soon as I started the music Miss Famous came there. And I was wondering what she was doing there because the Rehearsals had already been cancelled.

"What the hell are you doing here?" She spoke to me

"Hey relax ok this is rehearsal hall and I didn't get the message that rehearsals were canceled so I was here on time and thought to dance for some time" I said

"So you think you can dance?" she said

"Sure I can dance and you remember that day I danced with you" I said

This surely made her cheeks go red and from all the way she came back to her arrogant self.

"Oh that was nothing more than a random act that worked but if you think you can dance then show me now by dancing with me in Contemporary" she said

"Jive are you sure, you want to dance with me on Contemporary?" I asked

"Ya I am sure I can dance on Contemporary" she said

"Ok so bring it on" I said

She hit the track and I was like what is she up to she wants to dance Contemporary with me on the track "Jism hai tera"

We started dancing on the song. It was a sensuous song so I had to be in sync and close with her. We were moving everywhere together. She was hell close to me.

She was jumping sensuously on my back and waist. She was holding me like she is going to lose me if she left me. She was jumping around me but she never left me or I say she never left my hand in one way or other doing all that.

Her dancing made sure that she stays terrifically close to me and dance. This was the first time I was dancing with a girl so closely. The smell of her deo and even her sweat was driving me crazy.

I hate to admit this but she was leaving an impact on me. I was not able to stop her from coming close to me. And she was lost in the song completely.

The song ended finally and we stood still holding each other looking into each other's eyes. We were so close to each other that we were literally able to feel each other's breaths.

Our faces were like super close to each other it seemed like we were seconds away from catching each other's lips. She had already closed her eyes and given up in me.

And we began to kiss each other eventually. It started off as a soft kiss but it was getting wilder and wider.

I told you that I liked her juicy lips too much. I was just enjoying the kiss as much as she was. She surely knew how to seduce any guy.

Suddenly she tarred apart my t-shirt and was going wild. And I suddenly realized that it was going out of limits and I should not be doing this.

So I just broke off the kiss and went away from her. But we both were still sitting on the floor. I was just blank out with all of sudden happenings of the things.

I was just trying to recall everything and get into correct mind frame to deal with the situation that was going on.

She was looking at me and smiling at me weirdly. This caught my attention.

"Why are you smiling like this?" I asked

"Because you just kissed me" she said

"No get it like this, we kissed each other" I said

"Ya whatever, you know I had asked Rey not to send you message for cancellation of rehearsals" she said

"What? You said that to Rey. But Why? And wait a minute that means you knew from start that I will be in the rehearsal hall" I said

"Because I wanted to be here with you so I asked Rey to give me and you some time to get our steps right" she said

"And why you needed to be here with me" I said

"Because I wanted to know that with whom you are attracted to much me or Diana" she said

"What?" I said

"What? – What? I know you were holding Diana close to you because you saw me getting angry when you two were close. So I wanted to check that are you really attracted to me or Diana" She said

"Oh really and what did you find out then" I said

"That you are attracted to me because if you were attracted to her then you would have gone with her when she said she needs to go somewhere" she said

"That means you were stalking me" I said

"Ya I was stalking you and I did that to find out what is in your mind and now I am sure you cannot resist me and my kiss more than anything" she said

I was just looking at her

"So now don't pretend too much with Diana because I don't care it now as I know you cannot forget my kiss now" she said

Saying this she went away and just turned to smile at me seductively.

I have no idea how did this happen and what do I do now because my plan had backfired on me.

I need to think of something now.


I don't have time to send Pms so please somebody sends Pms on my behalf.

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Prathik bhai, i am really sorry mujhe pagal ki tabiyat kuch ziada hi kharab hai tu this time you won't get big big comment for me!!I! so wanted to comment big wala like always but sorry!😔

But i think my this comment and even like can show how much i like this update, will it? 🤔

Update was super duper awesome!!🤗 I hope next update iss bara ho aur jaldi aye but still take you time as you are busy with studies which is quiet important! 😃

Sharon is naughty! 😆 she knew he will come in rehearsal hall and that kiss!!! OMG! ☺️

I want to see Swayam and Sharon together sharing some more kisses soon!! LOL i am such a cheesy pervert! 🤣

Update soon and PM me.😊
Edited by Tanya_Swaronluv - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey Pratik...😊

How have you been...missing u here ...sachiii😳...chalo will move towards ur update...this particular FF is one of my fav write up by u ...as the rustic language..the character sketches ..the way u handle the characters is just beautiful...I love SHREYAM charcters here...and loving kriya for the twist in the tale...loving the new found realisation ...
Loved the RH scene...when sharon acted like a boss ...poor swayam..just the moment he thought he is having all the control it slipped out of his hands...lol...
Loving the Mr Protector and Miss Famous..her arrogance..his attitude..mahn..u just hit the right strings ...i wish i could write like u someday 😊
The inner tumoil of Swayam after the kiss...aha...amusing..

"Wait a minute did I kiss a girl?" Oh god "yes I did kiss a girl, and that too the arrogant bitch Miss Famous"

I didn't have done that I mean kissing her was not bad either but you expect your first kiss to be with a person you love most and I didn't love her for sure. Why the hell I wasted my first kiss on her.

told you that I liked her juicy lips too much. I was just enjoying the kiss as much as she was. She surely knew how to seduce any guy.
Loved the way u have portrayed...SHARON ..THE DIVA...BOLD N CAPS...

"So now don't pretend too much with Diana because I don't care it now as I know you cannot forget my kiss now" she said

Saying this she went away and just turned to smile at me seductively.

I wont say sorry for delay in commenting as i am tired doing that...seriously going crazy with work load...lovely update dear..keep writing..thanx for writing this FF on my request ...mene inna formal comment diya..not cool😆
Pratik..u rock👏...
Luv
Deep
Edited by deep_Tanha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
RES
UNRES
SORRY FOR UNRESING SOO LATE.EXAM TIME..:(
COMING TO UPDATE
SWAYAM IS A EVIL.HE STILL WANT TO CONT. HIS FIGHT WITH REY AND SHARON 😆.HEHE REY TOH FULL ON FIDA OVER KRIA N HERE SWAYAM IS ALL SET TO TAKE ADVANTAGE OF THIS SITUATION..:P
AHEM AHEM SWARON KISS AGAIN LOL SWAYAM'S PLAN BACKFIRED.SHARON IS MORE SMART SHE KNOWS HOW TO HANDLE SWAYAM N SWAYAM CAN'T RESIST HER N HER KISSES. :P.
I M JUST LOVING THIS FF MORE AFTER EVERY UPDATE
WAITING FOR NEXT PART
UPDATE SOON. :)
Edited by sadiyaswaron - 13 years ago
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Sorry double posting! 😛
Edited by Tanya_Swaronluv - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved d update... Plz update d nxt part soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesme upd8

btw sharon's character in this ss is realy weird.
But i love this sharon.

Bcoz i never saw sharon's this side in any os ff ss or in d3.

You realy create a new sharon by urself.
And sharon's charcter is amaging.

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