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Hey pratik, thanks for scrap.. I am a lil inactive right now but I will read this soon..!!!
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Hello Thank you very much to all the readers for reading the Story. I am very glad to see such an amazing response from all of you. I am keeping busy with studies and all so i am not able to reply your comments but i have read them all so thanks again for such lovely comments. Tanya my sweet little pocket size power house take care of your thumb and i don't mind with the length of the comment but what is more important for me is you are liking the story and thanks for being ever excited to read this story.I had told you to end this story in this update but i am not able to do so because the story will need one or two more parts to reach the ending. But i can assure you that it will end in max two updates. so enjoy this and do leave you precious feedback.

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Hi enjoy the new part and i hope you all like it. Do Leave your feedback on the update because it makes me know where to improve. thanks and have a fun time reading it i hope everybody enjoy reading this.


ACT 7 New Found Friendship

I thought she ran away leaving a confused me there, I don't know why but there were so many questions running on in my mind at that time and I didn't had answers to any of my questions. It was seeing like somebody had dumb folded me.

But you know there is one fact which I started believing from that day. The fact was that "EVEN GOD WILL FAIL TO UNDERSTAND WHAT GIRLS HAVE IN THEIR MIND". You know why I am saying this quote true because she came back to me suddenly when I was about to go from Rehearsal Hall.

Now I was really amused to see her frankly. I mean after that kiss none of us realized what we were feeling and why we kissed each other.

I was still confused with my thought process not helping me to decide what it was that happened little while ago and why it happened?

And before I could realize anything or say anything, she came forward to speak something.

"Hey please don't think anything wrong like I love you or anything because of what I said to you little while ago" she spoke

God please help me to know what this girl actually meant by that. She kissed me and admitted that she felt love when I kissed her and she wants to be loved yet she wants me to understand that she doesn't love me. Girls I tell you never fail to play with your mind.

But there was one thing I felt relieved when she said she doesn't love me because I don't know I was not ready for something like that so early. Practically it is tough for you to love a person whom you hated more than anything else even though it felt like that I had a soft corner for her somewhere in my heart.

But I had to reply her something, so here I go with my reply "Actually I didn't think that you loved me or I realized something like that during our conversation. It is now that when you said that you don't love me and I feel like you really mean that?" I said making her wonder now.

But she was pretty smart I guess with her answers. She immediately came up with the answer "That's better that you didn't think like that and you are not required to derive the meanings of what I say. You just get this straight I don't love you" she said.

Now this was really arrogant of her. I just came here to help you feel better and now you are showing your attitude to me only that will not be tolerated at all. You know I stay away from girls just because of this kind of attitude of theirs. They do something what their heart says and suddenly regret what they did and then start blaming others for what they did.

"Ok cool. I get this straight as a line that you don't love me. That is what you had to say? Then should I leave now" I said

"Ya better. Wait- wait I am just half finished with what I have to say" she spoke

Now what the hell is left to say? This girl is really driving me nuts off.

"Ok shoot what you have to" I said arrogantly this time

"Hey watch it don't give me this attitude shit just because I came here to talk with you" she said

Oh God Jesus Christ… if she gives me that then it's ok but if I give then it's dire on my part.

"Ok, would please tell me what the other thing is miss famous?" I asked clearly irritated with her behavior

"Ya… You know what you are not that bad guy as I thought you were (Now I should be proud that she is giving me a clean chit bull shit it doesn't matter to me). And I think it's enough for us to be fighting everyday so I guess we should call it a peace once and for all" she said

Now what should I say to her. You cried because I was ignoring you so that we can keep peace and now you suddenly turned into a saint and want me to call peace where I have already called peace.

"Thank you very much first of all to call me not a bad guy, and second thing is that I guess I have already called a peace and I am trying to focus on my study" I said

"Aree re not like that baba I mean we can call it peace and become friends now and work together as even I have to study well and bring nice grades you know for myself and a better career" she said

Oh Miss Famous suddenly wants to study God save our professors now.

"Ok I am ready to call it peace but friendship with girls is a bit more uncomfortable for me you know" I said

"Why friendship with Girls is uncomfortable for you?" she said

"I don't have any specific reasons but I kind of feel awkward when I talk with a girl that's it" I said

"Oh really than what about Kriya, Diana, Neha and Vishakha, you are very comfortable with them" she said

What the hell she has to do with this now… I know they all are not those typical girls with me at least when they are with me and besides they all are like sisters to me.

"Again I don't have any reasons for that but Kriya, me and Diana have grown together and Kriya – Diana are like second mothers to me because they baby sit me sometimes or most of the times that's why I am comfortable with them and they are elder to me as well and for Neha and Vishakha they are not those typical girls and besides I haven't touched them a single time and have just chatted with them casually that's all" I explained her and I don't know why the hell I bothered to explain her in full details.

"Oh ok so you didn't had any girl friends or something in school or previous college you were in" she asked curiously

"No I have studied in a boys school and in college I never got comfortable with any girls" I replied

"So you have not dated a single girl in your life?" she asked happily I don't what made her so much happy

"Yes perfect I haven't dated any girl yet in my life" I replied and saw her she was carrying those weird expressions on her face

"Are you gay?" she asked

"What the hell? No not at all, I am perfectly normal and by d way why are you asking me all this?" I asked

"So then you must be impotent right?" she told

"What the bloody hell? What do you have to do with my sexuality by d way? I am not impotent and you know that" I said

"No I need to know you hate girls and at that night I was ready to anything with you but you backed out which makes me wonder now why you backed out at that time" she said

Jesus what is this girl up to now? She doesn't love me but still she is encouraging me to prove to her that I am normal and I can enter in any girl. Wholly shit what she is up to really.

"I hate girls because of their weird behavior just like you are behaving now. And at that night I backed out because I am a gentleman and I don't sleep around with girls whenever I get excited. My "V" is the best gift that I will give my girl when I found one." I said

"What you call me weird? You psycho I am trying to help you nothing else. Oh you mean your virginity is the gift from your side to your girl. Ok that's fair enough which makes you loyal and trust worthy I can say" she said

"You are weird because you hated me up till today and now suddenly you want me to be your friend and exactly what kind of help are you doing to me?" I asked

"Ok look I never hated you in first place, ya I don't like to be second best that's why I was behaving like this with you. And now that I know you are a nice guy and have good values and most important you are not all pervert so I guess I can be friends with you. And you psycho I am trying help you by getting away your reservation in speaking to a girl" she said

And suddenly the arrogant diva had transplanted in to a cute bubbly girl and you feel you should listen to her all the time and let her speak because she was getting very happy in doing all this.

"Ok this was very honest I guess. So ok let's give it a chance and let's see how things work out in friendship for us. So friends?" I said offering her to shake hand

"Ya that's better now you talk like a mature boy. Friends" she said shaking my hands

Then we high fived each other and left for our homes.

This was really the beginning of many new things now. Everything was about to change there in college and in our lives also.

And that day not only me and Miss Famous became friends but it was the same day when you (Kriya) and Rey went out on your first ever date for which I came to know by way of a note that you left for me.

I still wonder how you (Kriya) and Rey gelled together and began dating. Anyways I hated Mr. Protector but much to my dislike he was not bad as a person so I couldn't deny you dating him. And it was totally your decision as to whom you like and date I have always respected your decisions.

But the point is things were changing rapidly because Mr. Protector got busy in you and Diana was looking after her uncle who were ill and that's why she couldn't come to college. And absence of Diana brought me and Sharon closer.

We were together most of the times in class or in rehearsals or in canteen for snacks.

Everyone in college was amazed to see me and Miss Famous having friendly time together. And what was more shocking was that I was with a girl which nobody expected because I never took interest in girls since the day I joined college.

Despite everything that people thought about me and Miss Famous, we started to build a good repo in ourselves and I was really getting out of my reservations and she was also changing from diva to a bubbly girl.

Now she was making me talk to her friends and one thing changed that was she accepted my friends they way they were thought Mr. Protector still had his reservations in dealing with my friends but he had to deal with them calmly because Kriya was also friends with them and now Sharon was also getting friends with them.

I guess somewhere Mr. Protector did not like the closeness between me and Miss Famous. But there was nothing to react for him because he was even getting close to someone who was my sister.

15 days passed away like this. All of us became busy with our respective buddies. Only time we all would meet would in canteen for snacks or in rehearsal hall when we all rehearsed. I and You (Kriya) started to have very short conversations and we met only on dinner table in home because in morning you were used to go with Mr. Protector in his car and I used to come on cycle so we were a bit distanced from ourselves then.

Mean time I and Miss Famous also were having time of our lives because I was helping her in her shopping and other stuffs and we went out for movies and on dinner and snacks to restaurants many times. It was becoming like we were getting addicted to each other.

One day we were sitting in canteen and Miss Famous was just discussing about how to comment on a girl's figure. And suddenly she said that best part commenting on a girl is ranking her on the base of her bums. And I was shocked to hear that. A girl was making me rank other girls on the base of bums.

"Are you out of your mind or what? How can you make me rank a girl on the base of her bums you silly" I said

"What's wrong in that? I am not saying you to lay down with any girl you dumb" she said

"Oh no please don't start again" I said

"Ok If you want me to don't start that then rank Payal" she said

"What? No-no ways I mean I don't know how to give a rank so first you give it then I will give, is it deal?" I said

"Ok Fair enough… You know Payal is totally slim and you can hardly make out where her bums are so I give her 4 out of 10" she said

And it brought smiles on my face. Just imagine a girl was giving other girl rank based on her bums. God it was damm hilarious me.

"Oh hello now don't smile like a maniac and start ranking other girls let's how sharp are you?" she said

She wants to check my sharpness in analyzing bums of girl. What do I do with this girl really…?

"Ok that one in the corner I guess I can rank her 5 out of 10" I said

"Eeuu she is worst than Payal I would give only 3, bad judgment now next" she said

"Just than a super hot girl passed by us and I just took an opportunity and said man she deserves an 8.5 for sure" I said

Suddenly I could make out the change in her expression. And then instead of commenting on what I said she just stood up and went away for a few distances from me.

"Now Rank me?" she said

"No ways how can I rank you? No I am not doing that" I said

"Do it right now you don't have any option. You don't rank me now then forget your treat for today" she said

"Hey that's not fair, we had a deal for treat and you cannot use it against me" I said

"Everything is fair when it's on my terms… now don't wait rank me otherwise forget you snacks for today" she said

"Ok fine…here you go its 6" I said

She just thrower whatever she got in her hand listening to this on me and spoke "You Jerk I taught you all this and you are underscoring me only, now do hell with your treat" she said

I caught the can and was laughing like a maniac when she said that.

"I told you don't force me into this and now you are being spoil sport in not giving me my treat" I said

"You jerk does my bum look to you so average that you underscored me" she said.

"Oh my god somebody is getting jealous now" I said

"Yes I am jealous because you think that bitch looked better than me. I don't like anybody scoring out my looks" she said and this time she was looking at me like a hungry tigress

"Ok-ok I give up… I was just teasing you and you can score a minimum 9.5 any day" I said

Now she became relaxed and got normal.

"I don't like anybody teasing me by using my figure get this in to your head you dumb boy. And I am hungry let's grab some snacks now" she said

We went to the counter and ordered some snacks and came back to our seat.

We were all ready to attack the food which we ordered and that was grill sandwich, white pasta and coke.

Just then You (Kriya) came from behind and sat on our table and followed by Mr. Protector

"Oh you guys started the meal, just wait and let me grab some snacks for us also" and you left

And just then Miss Famous left us because she had a phone call.

So I and Mr. Protector were sitting alone for the first time after all this change.

I was so damm sure that Mr. Protector would say something but till the time we both were silent and looking in other directions.

"So you have become friends with my sister" spoke Mr. Protector breaking the ice

"Ya I guess we have become friends and so do you have with Kriya" I replied

"Hey don't act smart with me. Kriya and me is altogether a different issue" he said

"Oh is it so" I said sarcastically

"You jerk she is my sister and if you bring any harm to her then just wait and watch what I can do to you" he said

"Oh I completely forgot that you are Mr. Protector and she is your sister" I said again sarcastically

"Don't act smart with me" he said

"Ok then let me get this straight to you. Kriya is also my sister and you are dating her but did I warn you any day? No, because I trust Kriya that's the only reason you haven't face anything from me. And now you are saying this to me that mean you don't trust your sister like the way I do. Or you are trying to say that I am a big fool that I allowed Kriya to go on with you" I said

"Oh please don't compare me with yourself because I am not jerk like you. I respect girls for what they are so there is no way I can harm any girl and I trust my sister fully do you get this but I don't trust you. And I love Kriya get this into your head" he said

"Oh ya I forgot you are the ultimate savior of girls so you cannot harm any girl. And even I don't trust you Jackass but I am tolerating you because I know if Kriya trusts you then she might have seen something worth in you and that is called trust on your sister that I have and you don't. And as far as me and Miss famous go we are only friends who help each other with study and college activities ok" I told him

He went numb hearing this. He wanted to reply me but he knew that statement was way true to his belief and he didn't have anything to reply then. And his luck saved him because you (Kriya) came back.

"Hey Rey there is an issue our Strategic Planning lecture is re-scheduled and we have to rush to it now" You (Kriya) said

And with that you both left.

And in the mean time Miss Famous came back after attending the call.

She was looking glued up and eager to share something with me.

We started eating our meal and I asked "What is it? You look eager to share something"

"How do you know I want to share something? Does it look so evident on my face" she said

"Yes" I replied

"Ok got it. Now listen to this our lecture for Database resource set up has been cancelled and we are free for today now" she said excited

"Oh that's great. Means I can head to home now for highlights of the Barcelona V. Arsenal match in Europa League" I said

"Ya that's great we are free but no you are not going anywhere" she said

"And why is that so?" I asked

"Because we are going for a movie which I have been waiting for many days to see, finally today I have the full address of theatre and we are going there" she said

"A film and you didn't ask me whether I want to go or not? And which is the film that you had to find the address of the theatre" I asked curiously

"Ok I didn't ask you because it's a kind of film where I cannot go alone and none of my friends will come or allow me to come so only you can come with me and you are coming with me that's final" she ordered me

"Hey what kind of film is that? And why anybody else cannot come with you in that? Where is the theatre" I asked

She asked me come near her and told me in the ear that:

"It's an adult film and its name is "Halkat Jawani" and now you know why nobody else can come in that film because I cannot share it with anybody. And the theatre is in Khar somewhere we will find it" she said excited

"Are you out of your mind or what? I am not coming with you in this. That is not a right place to go and that to with a girl in an adult film no ways" I replied back in her ear

"I didn't give you any option. You have to come with me" she said and pulled my hand up from the table and dragged me outside.

Oh god this girl will drive me nuts…. What will happen there only god knows…

(this story is narrated by Swayam to Kriya.. so it is totally being told how swayam sees everything and whenever Kriya is there he is using you and because of my poor grammar I have mention in bracket whenever that you was meant for Kriya, to avoid any confusion)

Edited by pratik54000 - 13 years ago
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Awesome update :-) love how SwaRon have become good friends
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Haha,...tht was quiet hilarious in the start...bt i must say i m loving the new bond bw swaron...
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Ahh I never thought that this story will take this new friendship turn.
Lol please give them some brains,after kissing each other soo many times,after confessing the fact that they both r attracted towards each other but still they don't want to accept that they are in LOVE.
Friendship,finally atleast they take next step.Lol sharon is a pervert 😆.The way she asked swayam that he is a gay or impotent n at the same time encourage him to do something was hilarious..:p
Things r changed now swaron r friends but one thing is constant rey n swayam's rivalry.They still don't like each other.
I really liked this new bubbly sharon.She really trust swayam n morever she found someone with whom she can share everything.N swayam too knows that what he meant for sharon..:)
Lol sharon swayam ko bigaad rahi hai 😆 she teach him to rank on a girl's bum.God she is crazyyy.I pity swayam
Now sharon wants to see adult film lol god knows what will she do there..:p
Waiting for next part
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Loved their Newly found friendship ,looking forward how their friendship will transform into love.
Awesome update 👍🏼
Edited by swaron_pk - 13 years ago
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It's great to see the budding friendship between SwaRon. Now, now, the Rey-Swayam conversation was the highlight! Continue Soon Bhai, you ROCK!
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Love to c these both sharing good friendship
Eager to know wat will happen in theatre do update soon
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Yippe, one more update..!! As soon as I saw the pm, I was more than exited.
Thanks that u updated early this time...!! :) :) And double thanks k this isnt the last chapter..!! :)
Coming to update,
In the begiining, when Sharon explained him that she doesnt love him, I was kinda shocked and it was a treat to read confused Swayam.
My happiness knew no bounds when I could see frienship blooming between Swayam nd Sharon..!! Its nice to see that they both now have become very good friends and they have become addicted to each other. Soon, they will realize their love I guess.
Convo between Rey and Swayam was the highlight...
I hope soon even they become friends. :) :)
I am eagerly waiting for next parts, I wish sab parts ek hi din mein mil jaate..!!
Anyways Awesome job, I must say.!!
Edited by riafulwani - 13 years ago

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