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Thank you to each & everyone. I'm relly overwhelmed by the response. Thank you loads for ur likes & comments😳😳



@sekhonpuneet : No not at all! Atleast in this story, Indian dresses are nt considered low. Geet loves Indian dresses! It's just that she felt odd as she was the only one who wore suit in the party so all were staring at her which made her feel uneasy! This will be discussed in the next udate😉

@ suhaarabia : You commented after such a longgg time😲😲😲.

@Deelight : I love ur dialogue😆 & it will surly come in the latr part of the story😉😉

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Part 25

The lights of the ballroom were dimmed...& it was better...infact the best that way as all the students were busy swaying in their own world that no one thankfully noticed Maan enter with virulent eyes & violent steps...

Just when Akshay was about to hold Geet's hand, he was taken aback seeing Maan's hostile figure materializing in front of him...His hands shivered to death seeing the coldness in Maan's eyes that he distanced himself from Geet...

Geet, on the other hand, was in for a 100 volt electric shock seeing Maan's destructive body language that her mind didn't even bother to think what was he doing here on the first place... A tremor shook her being when he turned his hostile eyes to her...& then without any prior intimation Maan grabbed her hand & held it tightly...tight enough that even her blood had to ask for his permission to reach her fingers...She had never seen him like that before...

Then he again turned his eyes to Akshay. The poor fellow didn't know how to return Maan's tsunamic gaze... But Maan was prudent enough to not create any scandal!



"Well, A person who practices martial arts, for example I, won't find it tough to break human bones! Sadly, this place is not apt for a live demo on you!"


Though Maan's voice was extremely calm, the eerieness of his words made a ghastly chill run down Akshay's spine, terrorizing every atomic part of his human body...

"S-S-S-Sorry S-S-Sir..."

Akshay was quick to diappear with his fumbling legs...

Even before Geet could wish to deduce the meaning of Maan's words, she found herself being dragged out of the balleoom by him without anyone noticing them...

"Ouch! Maan! Leave my hand! You're hurting me very badly...Ahhh!!"

Geet tried to wriggle out from his hold but pitied herself for even trying that!

"I am speaking to you Mr Maan Singh Khurana, not to the earless coridoors!!!!!"


With a swift he pinned her to the wall making Geet realize what a grand mistake her grander tongue had committed by complaining...His rugged breaths landed possessively on her face...Her heart filed her a petition to let it thud violently but it was not possible, given the fact that he had slammed himself on her...Though her fingers eased a bit as he loosened his grip miserly, but his terrific stares harshly refused to leave her at all...


"How can you hold someone else's hand Geet?????!!"


Maan asked ardently caressing the back of her hand with his hard thumb...She just kept staring at her blankly knowing that she wasn't in the least position to utter anything as their lips were hardly an inch apart...He wanted to calm himself down but even a faint thought of seeing another guy with Geet ripped him apart...


He once again tugged Geet behind him & walked with deft steps...


"Where are you taking me???? I just want to leave from this place now!!!!" she whined...

Geet couldn't comprehend what had come on Maan out of the blue & secondly she despised Annie for humiliating her in front of all...

Her bitter thoughts were put on halt when Maan ushered her in his client's party! The ballroom was romantically dimmed & all the couples were dancing...but it hardly mattered to Geet since she was very upset because of Annie...

"Dance with me."


His deep & compelling voice fell in her ears which made her sheirk a bit...He was about to pull her to the dance floor but she objected...

"M-Mujhe yaha nahi rehna.I am going."

Her refusal shook him entirely that he found his inner self collapsing...She was about to leave when he clutched her wrist & yanked her closer...

"You can dance with him & not me!!!! aisa kyun Geet??!!!!!"

His voice was roughly broken & his eyes were emitting sparks of jealousy...

"A-Akshay asked me politely & did not order me like you." said she dryly turning her eyes away from him...

Maan couldn't taken in her aloofness anymore which only heightened his unaccounted feelings to claim her...to have her all for himself...& as of now, a dance with her was the only way out...For the first time he was feeling helpless because she displayed extreme stubbornness...He could even force her as that wouldn't buy him her acceptance which was vital to calm down his inner self...Inspite of this, he hated himself to be helpless...

"Maan Singh Khurana gets what he wants , he never has to ask for any damn thing!!!!!!"

Geet frowned hearing his harsh voice.

"Done with your Private Display of Attitude??I can leave now, hai na? Bye."

"No Geet wait!"

He ardently blocked her way. She turned away from him with her arms crossed. She was making him hell desperate...To him , it was her payback for all his pranks & mischief... Maan had no other choice but do what she wanted him to do'request her for dance ... Somewhere he felt that he would do whatever she wished for'.

He stretched out his hand for her. She ignored him.

"Will you...will you dance with me." he said with greatest difficulty but still Geet did not give him any bhav!

"Will you dance with me????. Please say Yes!"

Finally Geet looked at him.Maan glanced sideways.She had that victory smile on her face. She gave her hand in his & the fire in him ignited once again...

He pulled her towards him'..Her breaths ditched her as he incarcerated her hazels with his dark & captivating eyes...His restlessness seemed to lessen a bit when her hand rested on his shoulder...Her heart began plotting ways of breaking the rib-cage when she felt his possessive arm around her waist...His eyes presented her with a snap-shot of the terrific feelings mingled with the alien fire surging within him but like Maan, even she couldn't comprehend what was happening to him...Instead, his utter closeness, his molten stares made her heart beat race erroneously'.

His eyes were heavy with passion feeling her violent heart beats & he knew it was for him...only & only him...& for no one else...He twirled swiftly...He lifted her elegantly but at the end of each step he made sure to lock her in his passionate arms'

Geet was forced to ponder whether she took a right decision to dance with him, given the fact that she had lost herself somewhere with her senses leaving her in oblivion with him...She had resigned long back from managing her heart valves & now blinking was a rarest phenomena for her dazed eyes which stuck at him...She suddenly began to sing praises for corporate parties...perhaps because she didn't feel odd as all other women had worn outfits similar to her or most probably his warm breaths & cozy arms contented her being'.

The restlessness in him finally disappeared as Maan successfully coaxed himself she was close...very close to him...His mind wanted to hold a debate whether being bereft of senses for a long time was good for human body or not...

His trance at her finally subsided when Geet reached to his ears for a soft whisper...

"Ma-an...W-Woh Dadima t-told me to c-come back by 10..."

They left the ballroom & were walking along the coridoors...Geet felt some changes in her which were not entirely revealed to her...On the other hand, Maan was back in his mischievous mood as his conscious didn't bother to think what had happened with him...He was about to strike a conversation when both of them came face to face with Annie...

Annie was shocked to see Geet with Maan...She & Geet grimaced at each other...Maan was a witness to the rueful stares both the girls were throwing at each other!

"Bhai, what are you doing with this Geet, you were supposed to be with Simi--"

Annie just realized the blunder she had committed. Geet was even more enraged now.

"Annie ki bachchi!!!!!!! Samajti kya hai aapne aap ko haan???!!!!!!!Trying to fix Maan with Simi!!!!!!!!"

Maan looked at her sister very sharply...Annie fumbled...

"B-Bhai, a-a-actually'" Annie turned to Geet, "Sab iss Geet ki galti hai!!!! She---"

"Anwesha!" Maan raised his hand signalling her to stop, "May I know what motivated you to mislead Geet for the Freshers???"

His voice was very stern. Annie remained silent, glancing sideway. Then turning to Geet, he smirked,

"You musn't enter my territory Anwesha because only I have the copyright to trouble Geet & no one else!"

His voice was very husky. Geet pouted very angrily & staged a walkout from there! Maan was about to follow her but Annie stopped him! Smirking, Maan stared at Geet until she was out of sight...Shocked, Annie realized that Geet never tailed Maan, infact it was the other way around...

"Bhai, Look at me! She is gone!!" Annie shook his arm

He turned his attention to Annie.

" Kya aap Geet ko pasand karte ho?" she asked in a dejected voice.

"Henceforth I do not wish to see Simi in my surroundings.Am I clear?"

"Do you love Geet?" she asked in disbelief.

Maan smirked.

"Are you in a hurry to share the special place that you occupy in my life?"he asked promptly

Annie didn't know how to reply.

"Now if your KBC is over, can we leave from here?"

Annie nodded slowly...

"Babaji!!You know sometimes I think how much hard work you must have put into for creating a human being like Maan!!!!And then you gave him a boon in the form of a contract to trouble me, hai na???!!!!Excellect!!! Fantastic!!!! "

Geet was cribbing when Maan came & joined her in the car. She frowned seeing him smirking.

"You don't have any copyright to trouble me, samjhe aap?????!!!!!"

He slowly began leaning closer to her...She forgot how to inhale air...Maan whispered in his rougish voice,

"Yeah! I shouldn't have said copyright...After all tumhe pareshan karna is my birthright!"

Her nose soon turned red & she pushed him away!

"Pata hai, he thinks as if he is some great soul to ever walk on the face of this Earth & the best part is there is no one who can clear his misconception!!!!! God knows who is rewarding him Nobel Prizes for his pranks & mischiefs!!!! Chaddo!!!!"

Her mutterings were clearly heard by Maan which made place for some extra smirks on his face!

Geet's eyebrows notched up when she saw Annie enter in the car & sit in the back-seat quietly!

Maan began driving the car. Everyone refrained from speaking which made the journey silent!

They reached the Mansion & Annie got out of the car almost immediately & headed inside. Maan found Geet fast asleep on her seat next to him...He was about to wake her up but something within him ordered his eyes to keep looking at her & his mind was threatened if it allowed thoughts to enter it...

Maan slowing began leaning towards her...His hands were skillful enough to free her from the seatbelt without disturbing her...Geet's eyes unexpectedly opened & seeing Maan so close, she just stared at him blankly...



"Aww...With great "difficulty", I had planned to carry you to your room. After all, your Daarji is not around this time!!!"

Mischief was playing in his eyes. Geet frowned.

"D-Dekhiye I-I-I am warning you!!! A-Agar aapne mujhe ar pareshan kiya na, then I will complain to Dadima about you!!!!"

She got out of the car & trotted inside the Mansion!

"Hmm...So I just received a warning from Mishty!"

Maan smirked, a passionate smile lingering on his lips...


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Okay, so the part where Geet refuses to dance with Maan is a shade of her bold nature that occurs only on a blue moon day😉 ( See Character Sketch😆)


And one more imp thing, I will be able to give the next part in the next week only as I am very busy with college assignments this whole week!😡🤢 But it will be a longg update😃😃. Hope all of you will give me your continued love & support😳😳😳




Edited by _Rashmi - 12 years ago
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Huummn Loving this jealous Maan..It's high time Annie should realise that her bhai.. is in love with Geet... Not Simi...😉 Nice update.
Edited by CutieTeju - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
rashmi di
it was fantastic
finally annie came to know abt truth
maan cleared it
oh so i love geet's complaints to babaji
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum update

maan literally scared tat poor akshay

and geet she was too good

finally maan warned annie abt simi
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
anni ki achi band baji
aww my poor cute geet maan kitna pareshaan karta hai 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
loving this tom & jerry show..
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Awesme update.loved maans possisiveness.Finaly annie came to know d truth.
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this was the awesomest update!!!!it had everything in it!;!! Cool!!!

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