If Only You Saw Me (1)

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Mwaahahahahahaha. ^^^ This was my panic res-ing


Edit, finally:

You know, I tried to reply to this about five times but continued to be left at a loss. What to say when everyone has said it all?

Firstly, a slap on your wrist for trying to keep this from the world! We should hack into your computer and periodically check to see if you've been hiding any other works of genius from us.

I loved it. Honestly, loooveeed it. The boy smitten, the girl demure, the words written with the wisdom of a thousand love stories. It was like sitting on the floor, listening to a fable with your elbows propped on your knees and a cheerful fire burning in the background.

They're young, they wear jeans, they marvel at simplicity, they hide behind books and yet there is nothing but the faith of a genuine, truthful, lasting love here. I credit that entirely to you, Mariam. You've stripped young love of all the pitying goggles of condescension we see it through when we pass that stage and you have revived it to the very tender thing it is when you're living it in the moment. I can't applaud you enough - I'm too tired to clap for eternity.

Take a bow, Maiyya ji and don't forget to give that wrist a slap! 😆

I turn another page, and pause a beat when you enter the class. You think I don't observe you when you enter the class. You think I don't notice you when you look at me that way, you think I am oblivious to you, your laugh, your talks, and you around me.
You would've known better if you'd stopped once to observe why wouldn't I turn a page for so long when you're around.
You'd have known better if you've wondered why would I take the longest route to class, which would pass through the ground where you play. You'd have known better only if you've raised your eyes from the book you try to hold in the last moment. Only if you've turned once, you'd have seen me smiling at the book which you're holding upside down.

He he desperate attempts to push some thoughts in your mind. I lub you Mayya Mayya

tat was sweet dear

bt is it the end

Originally posted by: sdlife19

tat was sweet dear

bt is it the end

Maine toh Pehle hi kaha tha It's Awesome 😉

Originally posted by: Thesaurus

awesome.👏

Lo Zarin I tyaaged the first place cuz I already read the story na, so thought why not give u the pleasure of being first. Ja bacha apni zindagi jee le :P

Ps: Another title that stuck my slow brain:
If only you saw me
Eeks cheesyyy

Originally posted by: TheBrat

Lo Zarin I tyaaged the first place cuz I already read the story na, so thought why not give u the pleasure of being first. Ja bacha apni zindagi jee le :P

Ps: Another title that stuck my slow brain:
If only you saw me
Eeks cheesyyy

Bratty why dont u get typing😡