If Only You Saw Me (1) - Page 4

Originally posted by: had2bu

Its just a hobby and I don't normally put it out there.Actually we forcedMariam to write this and since I was the one twisting her hand so much I felt I should compensate.

Agree that she is a sweetheart and a great commenter.

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

Beautiful Avi 😃
👏
Thanx to Maryam, v got to read yew 😃

Originally posted by: NoorFatima

moi second moi second *dancin* :D .. gal dat was an awsome piece of work 👏👏.. and that too ur first story in the forum i guess .. congrats :) .. loved itAbsolutely amazing.. and i thought wat shika thinks of open endings wont be the case with me.. but u proved moi wrong.. i totally loved it.. but do cont if you wanna :) .. and if u do cont with this then it'll be something to read .. and thanku for puttin u ur work :)
Noor

Originally posted by: mayyo13

I'm not sure yet how it's going to be continued so let's see. 😊

Originally posted by: TheBrat

I turn another page, and pause a beat when you enter the class. You
think I don't observe you when you enter the class. You think I don't
notice you when you look at me that way, you think I am oblivious to
you, your laugh, your talks, and you around me.
You would've known better if you'd stopped once to observe why wouldn't I turn a page for so long when you're around.
You'd
have known better if you've wondered why would I take the longest route
to class, which would pass through the ground where you play. You'd
have known better only if you've raised your eyes from the book you try
to hold in the last moment. Only if you've turned once, you'd have seen
me smiling at the book which you're holding upside down.

He he desperate attempts to push some thoughts in your mind. I lub you Mayya Mayya

Originally posted by: Diva7

ohkk m a vry patient person so i'll wait😆

so a vry patient reader of urs is waiting 😆how u r goin to continue it n how d story will take shape😉

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Perhaps knowing a patient reader is waiting will make me write more sooner than I otherwise would! 😃

Originally posted by: mayyo13

Perhaps knowing a patient reader is waiting will make me write more sooner than I otherwise would! 😃

Originally posted by: had2bu

In that case I am waiting too...