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Posted: 13 years ago


guys am so sad no one remembers my character sketch and first part… I clearly mentioned maan niharofying a girl in it and it was cleared later that was geet still none remembered it…😭😭

PART 42

geet was still in maan's arms hugging him tightly while he kept her close to him… none kept the track of time for how long they were in each other's arm… office was nearly over and all the staffs left to their not bothered about their boss and his love… finally maan spoke… geet we should also move to home its nearly 9 pm… geet then realized that they were there for more than 4 hours and still she didn't wanted to move… geet hided her face in his neck inhaling his strong muscular scent while her other hand stroked his chest above the cloth… maan was so much losing with her magical touch… today he wanted to break at least some barrier between them… he looked at her dazed form… he so much enjoyed his effect on her…

his thoughts were broken when he heard her spoke… maan today is my last day in office its been a month and from tomorrow your trainee will join back… maan then realized that how fast the time passed between them… he so much loved the time with her in office… she would keep haunting him whole time still would provide the relaxation he need… he didn't wanted to lose that time with her so he thought of an idea…

mrs khurana from tomorrow you are appointed on permanent basis in this office… geet looked at him shocked… its not that she disliked the idea but how will she work here… but maan on which post will I work from tomorrow… she asked curiously… you will work as my personal trainee said he smirking… what she was shocked not understanding the true meaning… ahh I mean as my trainee and my personal assistant too as I need one due to excessive work… he said trying to cover up… but maan from tomorrow my semester will start again and then I will be busy with my new assignments… she said disappointed…

you can come after your college with dev and its not necessary for you to come all days… when you have extra classes or many assignments you can stay at home I am not forcing you to be here jaan just be with me when it would be possible for you he said the last words softly… I knew these days we get less time with each other and I want to utilize most of it we have with each other… he said each word lovingly trying to make her agree… she just gave one of her sweetest smile in response of his lovely appeal…

they reached home where others were waiting for them on dining table… they freshened up and joined them soon… maan so much wanted to be back to outhouse soon as shyna's presence was making him feel uncomfortable but he didn't wanted to tell about that to anyone as knowing geet she won't even think once before burying shyna for laying her eyes on him and he knew she had been disturbed due to that sasha so thought of handling the matter alone till it won't get overboard…

they settle down on dining table and this time maan ensured that geet sat on his right only… the dinner was silence affair till it was broken by shyna… you know guys today I got call of avni's mother and she said that avni was missing us too much and was crying whole day for us and specially maan… she even said that they are shocked how she got so much attached too him so much in few hours as avni is very introvert girl… said shyna eyeing maan while maan felt pang in his heart for the little girl and that was not unnoticed by geet… she wanted to hold him but can't as all were present their… their eyes met and they comforted each other silently…

but their eye contact was broken with dadibua's voice… by the way maan geet you both guys are married for more than 7 months now what have you both thought about kids… maan looked at geet who seemed way to much uncomfortable with the topic… maan tried to make an eye contact with her but she casted them down shielding the inner turmoil within her… dadima saw the tension within the environment and spoke… sheela they are so young and they need to focus on their careers at the time kids at now would be so fast… and they are married for only 7 months it's the time for them to understand each other not to bind themselves with kids

but dadibua said before dadima completed… savitri we used to have kids within a year of our marriage and kids make the relation strong and didnt you saw the love maan have for kids ad if geet is an loving wife she should understood her husband's wishes too… its a wife duty to fulfil all her husband's demands now maan was seething in anger to hear something against his geet and his fury doubled when he saw his mishty's eyes in tears… he tried to held her but she excused herself and left for outhouse… dadibua its our personal matter and I won't like others to discuss it and most importantly no one has right to say anything about my geet… what she is no one can know better than me… and if testing about her loving me then she loves me to the extent that she won't mind killing others or let it be giving herself for my happiness… I hope now I am clear about that… he roared like a lion leaving others shocked and dadibua silent and excused himself to go after his mishty…

savitri is this the way to talk elders… cribbed dadibua once maan was out of sight… sheela I think whatever maan said was perfectly right and it was you who tried to cross your limits… with the said she to left the table leaving dadibua…

maan reached to outhouse and it was quite silent and dark… no one would say that someone is present their… he rushed to their room and saw geet standing beside window looking outside in dark sky… geet sensed his presence still dint made any move… maan went toward her and kept his hand on her shoulders… she neither turned nor pushed his hand away… she was exceptionally a way too silent… she was always expressive let it be her anger her hatred her sadness or her happiness… but this time she was blank… there was no expressions on her face which worried him more… he felt it as a silence before huge storm…

he turned her toward him while she kept her face down not at all facing him… he tried to spoke but she silenced him and said… I am sorry maan I knew whatever dadibua said was totally right… I am neither a good wife nor a good partner… I never fulfilled my duties as your wife… I had always kept you away from me in one way or the other… I know earlier it was a different thing at that time I hated you but now you know its nothing like that… and its your right to be physically close with me too… geet its ok baby maan tried to stop her as he saw her breaking but she stopped him… no maan I know you want our relation to move forward to take few steps more I myself had seen the desire In your eyes… its not that I am saying its wrong you are absolutely right on your part but its my who is lacking… maan tried to hold her In his arms but she moved away… maan i know you love babies and you dream of them too but its not only dream its our dream… its not that I don't want to be a mother or something its just I had something to tell you before we take next step in our marriage…

geet looked tired and tears were continuously flowing from her eyes… she looked so vulnerable that his heart felt needles pricking him with her each tears… he felt his heart stop when he saw her falling on floor and sobbing loudly… he felt his heart shattered seeing her in such position… maan somehow took her in his arms and soothed her… he kept rubbing her back till her sobs subsided a little… maan I want to tell something about me which made me shattered… which make me broke into so many pieces that till today I feel I am not able to collect myself… I had never let anyone come near me after that incident but god knows when you broke the wall around my heart that I was not able to control myself to give into you…

maan felt her body shivering as she spoke… maan it was the incident when I was just 11 years old… I was so small so innocent didn't knew anything wrong about the world… my life was really like a fairy tale until until that that incident happened… maan felt her chock with tears and her body turning cold with fear… he tried to calm her but it felt she was going back into her past… he was scared to lose her the way she was reacting… maan you know you know what happened that time and she was not even able to complete before that she fell unconscious…

maan was shocked with that and lifted her in his arms and laid her on bed… he didn't knew what made her so vulnerable but he will never let her go away from him… he kept her in his arm whole night while she kept holding him tight in fear to lose him… it was nearly morning when he felt her move… he kept holding her till she opened her eyes… they were swollen and she looked pale and weak… past memory made her so weak that she loosed all her color…

she slowly looked at him when last night incident flashed in her eyes leaving her in tears… she tried to spoke but words were not leaving her mouth… he closed her mouth with his palm and said softly… mishty I can wait till you feel comfortable to speak about past… I will never force you to speak up I will give you time and strength so that you can depend on me and till I am with you no one can harm you ok… she nodded feeling little relieved… and if you are worried about babies… geet you are still in college and there is time for that to finish and before that I don't want you take any responsibility relating to family… remember I said I want you to see on the top and for that just concentrate on studies for now and if about our getting physically close… geet I agree I too need you that way but its not the end geet… I can wait for you eternity and I will never force you for anything and we will overcome your fears together jaan… I don't want you to think too much for all that…

she felt so relieved hearing him… he actually can cast that magic on her which no one else can… she could see the pure love in his eyes and that's what make her fell for him all over again… she hugged him tightly keeping close hiding herself from all the bad memories which still haunt her… she knew some day she would be able to open up to him and he would wait for that too… their sweet moment was haunted by a phone call…

Precap: a new entry again

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update.
I am not understanding what is this shyna is trying to do. its so confusing.
geet crying because of dadibua's words and maan gave her a perfect answer.
some people dont have any work other than poking their nose in others matter.
what happened in geet's past is something terribilly bad. feeling sad to see geet breaking down.
but maan have the magic to make her feel free and good.
new entry me thinking whereas its male ya female, negative ya positive
waiting to know that.
Edited by J.Rahman - 13 years ago
nida6 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yahoo me first today awesome updates
Niharika.Nair thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Dadibua ne princess ko rula diya😭😭 Maan was correct it stheir personal matter...
Something very bad has happened in Geet's past, hope she will share it with Maan so that he can help her to come out of it...ab ek aur new entry?? yeh kon aa raha hai!!!
nida6 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Asuperb n awesome updates n eagerly waiting 4 know about the past of Geet Maan is very caring n lovely husband
mandymore thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice prt...smthng terrible in her past which made her so vulnerble
t_areeb thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
what is disturbing her

,,, and she needs to get rid of those divorce papers
d_sonia thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Eagarly waiting for next
Contionue soon
swetha10 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update..
erhh tht aisha.. wht is she upto???
hmmm curious to knw abt geet's past..
luved the way maan comforted her..
continue soon
indiegirl thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice update although a little scared that It will be some bad person entry...
Thanks

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