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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing words dear
i love it

the way u describe geet's pain n her attempts to save her maan ...
👏 brilliant👏 ...👏SUPERB👏

n thank u maan ko thik karne ke liye

waiting for maaneet meeting
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome I hope Maan recover quick Geet live is strong nd do is Maan
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hats Off To You...

Mind Blowing Part



Waiting for 29th part


update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsm updt...
lovely..
geet selfless love is amazing😭
wtng for nxt


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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing.. Each & every emotion of Maneet portrayed well..Geet so much in love... If love pains then it cures the pain also... Awesome😊 waiting for next part.. Want to see Geet taking care of Maan...
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Posted: 13 years ago
speechless to comment its soo emotinal and sad one i m literally crying while reading hats off to neha mindblowing u made us cry
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Posted: 13 years ago

thanku guys for so overwhelming response i just loved each and every comment you made...keep supporting me always... thanku❤️🤗

PART 29

geet reached hospital in few minutes' armaan was shocked to look at her state' tears came in his eyes feeling the pain she must have felt' her burned hands and legs were dark brown showing the harm she had caused to them' her dress was badly torn showing few other bruises too' he went near her and tried to hold her but she was just waiting to the sole owner of her heart' she asked him about maan' doctors had shifted him in a private room' he showed her the way and she ran to see him' her legs were leaving a faint blood imprint on the clean hospital floor'

she reached at the door and felt her heartbeat race' the anxiety was finally going to end' she took slow steady steps as she opened the door' here he laid in blue hospital dress with his eyes closed and hands and leg bandaged' she seated beside him on the bed and caressed his forehead' he opened his eyes slowly feeling her touch' tears brimmed her eyes looking at her reflection in his eyes' he came back to his mishty her heart and mind screamed' he looked at her state her hands which were badly burnt and caressing him' he felt a lump in his throat seeing her condition' he was about to say something when he felt her closing her eyes and she fell on his chest losing her consciousness'

doctors rushed and checked her' her wounds were quite bad and the stress she handled in last few hours made her weak and lose her senses'he was getting worried by each passing minute while doctors were dressing her wounds' after few hours she gained her senses and found herself in a room with glucose injected in her body' she immediately pulled the needle out and went in search of maan' he was in his room waiting to get any news about her'as he saw her he gestured her to come to him' she took each her step slow trying to capture his face his small warm smile in her mind ever' she came and sat beside him on bed'

he tried to sat but was having difficulty' she slowly pulled him with all her little strength and helped him in sitting position' he immediately took her in his arm with his well hand and kept patting her back trying to sooth the pain which was in her heart and assure her of his presence' she immediately submitted herself to him and cried her heart out' do you know how I felt in those few hours' I thought will lose you forever'"sob" I' I' don't know what to do those doctors said you are not reacting' I felt earth slipping off me'"sob" dare you do this warna dekhna I will not talk to you ever again how much ever you try'baby I am ok jaan shhh don't cry' you don't know what went through me' thank god armaan was there or I would have don't been able to be here at time'"sob" I will not leave that bloody truck driver dekhna I will kill him'"sob" jaan its ok chalo don't cry now bacha see ' your single tear pains me more than these wounds' she slowly caressed his fractured arm' is it paining badly she asked making a puppy face' not more than your burns'

now he was back in angry msk mood' what have you done to yourself ha just 2 days I was here and you made such harm to you god knows what have you did in that trip' us badtamij trip ki to naam b mat lo sab kuch uske karan hi hua huh' or I should say sab kuch happened because of you only' na you would have been hell bent on making me go and na ye accident hota she said with fire in her eyes' accha baba I won't send you away again'promise' promise mishty' now tell me yeh burns kaise hue are they paining a lot and doctors said even your knee is badly bruised they were even shocked that how are you walking so easily a normal human would have not been able to take a step forward ' nothing maan aisehi' oh so aisehi ye sab ho gya he asked sternly' she snuggled herself into his neck inhaling his smell' wo I just prayed for you maine mannat mangi thi and I don't wanna talk on it' please' ok jaan but promise me you will never harm yourself' they were still in each other's arms relishing each other's togetherness'

after few minutes there was a knock on the door and armaan came' he smiled looking at geet snuggling into maan ' she looked at his teasing gaze and dipped her face inside maan's neck more' maan knew he was geet's friend as he had seen both together in college'. he came and pulled geet's ear' so madam is here and I was searching you in your ward' she screamed armaan dard ho rha h and looked at maan with pleading eyes' he laughed a little as his jaw was paining'he backed off saying I am not interfering' she somehow freed herself and asked kya h' I had bought food for you' you hadn't had anything since two days ab to kha le see he is fine now' maan gave her a glare which she ignored and asked about maan's food' he can't have solid for few days kiddo so mai soup le aya chal have it you both'.

he unpacked the containers and gave maan his soup who was having difficulty to drink it himself' geet looked at his condition and started feeding him with her bandaged hands' armaan looked at the cute love between them' maan eyed him to give geet's food' he opened geet's food and gave it to maan who made morsel from his well hand and gave it to geet' both were feeding each other lovingly and armaan was admiring them sitting on the stool' geet looked at him staring at them and asked him to come there' she took a morsel from maan's hand and gave into armaan's mouth' tune bhi to kuch ni khaya aur hme yha khila rha h' she hugged him tightly and thanked repeatedly for his support'his care his presence which held her strong' he wiped the lone tear that escaped from his eyes before anyone can notice but how can maan's piercing gaze can missed it who just loved there relation

after their food armaan bid there bye and said he will come tomorrow to meet them' when he reached at the door' maan spoke' thanks armaan for being beside geet at the moment' I could never imagine what went through her at that time and I know you were the one who took care of her' I am glad she has such an awesome friend who loves her so much'. thanks again armaan' armaan smiled and said' she is not my friend but my kiddo and I can do anything for her' I am amazed to see both of your bonding and I hope you will take care of her forever' he was about to go out but turned back and said' and ha don't forget both of you had to tell me your story after you get discharged' and gave his infamous smirk' and left them alone'

Doctors came and checked maan and geet' Mr. khurana you are doing fine and if you showed this type of improvement we will discharge you in a week and Mrs. khurana you need rest and please ensure you don't stress your body much especially your injuries' they will take time to heal and you are already discharged' both thanked doctor and the doctors left them alone' maan you lay down you need rest I will sit on sofa' she helped him in comfortable position and was about to settle on couch but maan halted her holding her arm' he patted at the place beside him and signaled to lay there itself' she smiled and made herself comfortable making sure she doesn't hurt his bandage' both rested in each other's arm waiting for the next morning and surely a new beginning in their life'

Precap: sponge bath

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Edited by neha512 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome Fab ... loved it
do con soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Neha 🤗...thank u for the lovely update and PM...Maaneet scenes were so sweet and emotional...glad they both are ok...they are so lucky to have a friend like Armaan...plz continue...TC 😊




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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update dear..
finally maan is all well

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