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Abi

@PepsiGirl101

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

LOL Her husbands outside...OH GOSH! 🤣! This is some deep mess they're in. LOVE IT!!!! Awesome start, its amazing, your details and dialogues have me hooked!!!! Now "hook" me up to your PM list!!!😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

RESS

haha wowww rafa!
Where have you been hiding this woman!?
Loved it
the whole secret affair going on!
I mean are they arnav and khushi or someone else!
I cant wait for it to be continued!
It was awesome dont know why you were so nervous!

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

Hi arisai!

Okay, I know I am late and all, but this is how I roll!😉

Roll, my foot! Stuck in office, and then got home and had to get you-know-what ready for all you hungry biotches!

Anyway, loved it!

The contrast between the vows and what they were doing, actually come to think of it, they were breaking each one as it was said.

Loved it! I'm gonna go to the next one!

Edited by BlueMystique - 13 years ago

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@PersieV

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

Yey you posted it!

Wow! That was absolutely amazing, there was simply nothing to worry about.

Ohh So Khushi is cheating on her husband? Was the guy Arnav? Or is her husband Arnav?

This seems intriguing!

Edited by Aveiro - 13 years ago

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Aarti

@aartipartyy

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

resss

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That was amazing!! So arnav is cheating on his wife? Its really unique!! I love it!! Cant wait for more :)
BTW love the song u added!

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Cetronia

@Cetronia

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

What was that?... Nice!!!! I have goosebumps reading this...please PM me...

I am loving this concept, very different...

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oh.petite.one

@oh.petite.one

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

hmmm interesting start... eager to read what happens next...

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Rhysenn

@Rhysenn

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

Omg, it's totally true to the title! Continue please!

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.Euphoria.

@.Euphoria.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

res baby ;)

A/N: Well that was fun to write. Feel free to drop a Like or a Comment to let me know what you thought. This chapter is dedicated to everyone who knows me as Sachin a.k.a. Aaliyah's Lezzer Hit List. I'll be sure to send you all hampers of moustache bleach, arm hair wax and creeper repellant for your birthdays in the hope it'll be as special as mine. 😆

Lmao, LOVE the authors note.

You wrote it all beautifully, I loved how they were remembering their vows with every move. There's guilt, there's pleasure, there's chemistry and suspense.
I is bare hooked bruv 😉

Edited by .Euphoria. - 13 years ago