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Rabba-Ve-Delena

@Rabba-Ve-Delena

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: CDlove
LMAO so who are these people performing top notch adultry? 😉

My first impulse was Khushi cheating with Salman Khan. But Sallu Miya in a suit?

Anyway, Rafa - loved the start. Marriage vows contrasted with some hardcore adultery! Smart chick, now go sleep and kill that exam tomorrow!

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farheen75

@farheen75

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

A very different but interesting concept...both of them r cheating their respective spouses and r really twisted.

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karisma

@karisma

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

You've really upped the scale Arisai!! I've got so many thoughts in my mind now I don't know where to start..

Now that was a very strong intro!

Frankly, I had thought this would be about the basic needs of the human body only (read sex) but this very much turned out to be about the human mind ..and I'm already hooked!

Mind and Body actually..the way we live it.

The sombreness screams out from the writing!!Definitely character-led..and You better keep that up!!!!😡

Khushi is powerful..I like her. She clearly knows what she wants and that grabbed my attention. She's a strong woman so of course she'll attract trouble (*wink*), especially man trouble (sigh! lucky girl) but she'll be remembered for it!

Not to mention the "is there anyone out there koz it's getting harder to breathe" lyrics. This made me reflect upon the whys...not many write about adultery upfront so I'm interested to see where ur story will lead ..btw luv the title..intoxication! (n yes now m thinking of drugs, brainwashing,society, power,corruption n the lies that come up when man is threatened...ummm i hope there are more lies in there...goshhh u gotta keep those themes up!!!!)

I love what u're writing now Arisai..u're still chak dum dum chaking but with our thoughts this time...wooo!!!!

kind of a long comment i know..deal with it!😡

can i post a song? see how society changes..there was a time when i bet THIS song (which I find a bit weak now..) would be hurting the ears of the masses

today there are worse...

and I love them!yep!

To girl power!!!

hugs!!!💔

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fv8SuJioddE&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]

arisai's song disclaimers apply!!

Edited by karisma - 13 years ago

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Aisha

@asha...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Rabba-Ve-Delena

My first impulse was Khushi cheating with Salman Khan. But Sallu Miya in a suit?

Anyway, Rafa - loved the start. Marriage vows contrasted with some hardcore adultery! Smart chick, now go sleep and kill that exam tomorrow!

Somebody else have a core 4 exam tomorrow...pleaseee tell me its core 4!!!...okay i've lost it...3 days of non stop revision ...and your posting random things, where they don't belong ...

Great start... :D

Edited by asha... - 13 years ago

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.Euphoria.

@.Euphoria.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: asha...

Somebody else have a core 4 exam tomorrow...pleaseee tell me its core 4!!!...okay i've lost...3 days of non stop revision ...and your posting random things, where they don't belong ...

Great start... :D

OMG AISHAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!