FARZ-TH2-UPDATED PT 23 PG 07

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FARZ




STORY SO FAR




Geet is an CID officer but she's shunted to the corner becoz of her bro's reputation & was doing peon works in the office.Geet's brother was Brij Singh Ahluwaliya who was an army officer in military intelligence.Geet was ill-treated becoz her bro was proved as traitor.But she was saved always by Arjun who loves Geet as his sister & can't see in trouble.But she comes to know from her bhabhi Dolly that Brij was caught in conspiracy.Then after knowing everything abt her bro,she comes to know that the higher officer's are involved in this for her bro was working for.On that time PM calls Arjun,Geet & Dolly & gives a mission to spy on the defence minister of India who is unfortunately Dolly's father.Geet also comes to know that Dolly & Brij was married in register office & knows the truth that her bro was cheated by his senior officers.


Geet couldn't bear this truth but somehow consoles herself.Meanwhile Geet comes to KMA as Cadet to protect Captain Maan Singh Khurana who has come there to protect nuclear trigger & search the spy who has come here to theft the triggers.During her works she first time feels something for Maan which she's not accepting becoz she's in the pathway of duty.Meanwhile Maan doubts on Geet that she's the spy.

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congratulation for the new thread
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PART 22


A phone call came to the KMA near reception & an orderly received it,"Jai Hind Kanchenjunga...!U want to talk to Geet Singh...just hold on pls...!!!"Meanwhile Geet passes,then orderly said,"Cadet Singh,u've a phone call...!"Geet said angrily,"Bola than ki mujhe koi phone calls attend nahin karni hai...!"Oredrly said politely,"Haan...yeh phone call toh hospital se hai...ur grandmother is ill...!!!"Geet thought that is it from bureau & took the phone from orderly & said,"Hello!!!"


Geet's mother said in panic,"Geet,someone had phoned to home from academy...!"Geet didn't want to make her mom panic but she knew that Maan only dialled to her home & said said dismissively,"Do u know who r they???"Geet's mom said,"I don't know his name,he himself was telling that,he is from a credit card company...!!!worriedly."Geet said angrily,"And u thought from academy...maa...how do u know???"Geet's mom said,"Am telling u that phone was from academy becoz,I was listening a siren sound when Brij was dialling to me from academy.That siren was same Geet.Be careful,Geet...!!!"Geet said calmly,"Yeah take care...I'll find out who's that...!!!"Geet's mom said,"Yes dear...!!!"


And Geet kept the reciever & went to talk to Arjun.Geet explained everything to Arjun.Arjun said calmly,"So,Maan had dialled to ur mom...then Geet...be careful yaar...!!!"Geet felt that there's no hope & said,"I've to ready myself to be kicked out of this academy,"sadly then smiled dismissively,"Maan also thinks veerji as s traitor,Arjun.U know his wish of protecting his best friend who thinks Brij veerji as a traitor...!"


Arjun said lovingly,"Geet...ummeed mat chodna...there's always the hope...trust urself & ur babaji...ur wish will never go waste...ur attempt will never become futile...now let's think abt our test...!"Geet said sadly,"What's the use of taking the test when am going to kicked out of this academy???"Arjun said softly,"Don't feel bad...some way will come,jo tumhe yahan tikne ka mauka dega...!!!And maked u fulfill ur last wishes of ur bro...trust me...!!!"He stroked Geet's hair lovingly.


Arjun goes from there giving the consoling words to Geet.When he enters then sees Kunal who's studying his course book & asks that he has hoisted the flag in front of Dr.S telling abt his love life.Kunal says innocently that he has come there to study & become officer so he's studying his course book.


On that time senior come & ask for the party to first yrs.Kunal tries to become smart but ends up caught in the situation by by Malik that he gives the party.Then senior fix the location as the party will be kept outside the academy at 7pm on saturday which makes the sweaty face of Kunal.


Meanwhile Maan is angry on something enters the cafe to take some coffee.Dr.S calls him to join but he was abt to go saying sternly seeing Dr.Sen that no thanks to Dr.S.finaaly Maan talks to Dr.Sen directly,"Dr.Sen...mujhe nahin laga tha ki aap itni jaldi doosron ki haan mein haan mila degi...!!!"And he was abt to go but Dr.Sen tries to convince him that what she did is right.




But Maan not listens to her & walks further with attitude.Next morning,all Cadets r exercising in gym room.Geet was exercising her hand in dumb bells while Pooja was using tread mill.Malik was cycling while Arjun was boxing.Kunal was weight lifting.Malik came near Pooja & asked,"Look punjaban,I've no time...pls give me 10 minutes in the tread mill...i'll use it & give u...!!!"Geet saw Malik with disgust.Pooja answered him angrily,"Ok come on,let's do it both...come on sit on my lap...I'll exercise instead of u...!!!"


Malik dug his finger inside his ear & said...,"What's the problem with u girls...u girls start fighting for a word to word.Is it not Phoolan...?"Geet saw him angrily & left the dumbbells down onto the floor.Malik remembered her punch & said immediately,"It's ok phoolan...don't say anything to them...neither i had bet with my mother nor i had come to academy & fight with these girls...!"Arjun said angrily,"Nor with us also...!"Malik said angrily,"Yaa qaidi tum humesha phoolan ki taraf daari kyun karne aa jaatha hai...!kai tum dono ke beech chakkar toh nahin chal raha...!"


On that time Arjun raised his hands with clenched fist to punch Malik on that Kunal came between them & Malik went from there.Pooja wacked Malik's head & said,"Zara tumhaari zubaan ko lagaam de...!Bada hi shock se kehta hai doosron ke saamne ki tum dude ho sabki aur yahi haina tumhaare dude ka matlab...!"Malik didn't say anything & started lifting the weight from his both hands.


Meanwhile Ali came there & said excitedly,"Bhaayion kasrat chodo aur notice board pado...!"Everyone read the notice board while Malik said coolly,"Small unit search aur destroy drill...search it & destroy it...attack...!"Mocking like Geet & said to Geet,"Phoolan ye tumhaare liye best drill hai...aur waise bhi Pooja dhoond hi rahi hai...!!!"Pooja said angrily,"Aur tumhe khatam kar dethi hoon...!!!"Mlik said sarcastically,"Mein toh dar gaya...!!!"Ali said,"Yeh mazaak nahin hai...har test ke liye humein marks diya jaatha hai...!"


Arjun said sarcastically,"Tab toh achcha hai party toh saturday haina toh saturday ko hi tum baahar chale jaoge...!!!"Malik clapped appreciatively but Kunal said proudly,"No way chief,I won the first drill & i'll win this drill only.Arjun noticed Geet who stood there thoughtfully.


Next morning all the Cadets assemble in training grounds for the test.Major Nair explains the drill that they have to carry the sackful of haystack & climb the mountain.Nair trickily makes Geet lift the sackful of sand so that becoz of the downpouring of the rains that sand absorbs the water.Nair makes Geet to go in the short cut where the road is difficult.Malik saw this & taunts Geet that Nair is so favourable to her.


Geet comes in time but Nair tricks her that she has reached after 45 minutes while the time was given for 25 minutes.Geet collapses on the ground feeling helpless & asks her Brij veerji in her mind,"Kyun veerji mein itna kamzor ban gayi hoon ki mein aapke aakhri khwaiash bhi poori nahin kar sakthi...kya mein kiss kaam ki nahin hoon...!!!"


Everyone come to the mess completing their test except Geet which Arjun notices.Arjun goes in search of Geet & consoles her when she was found in the training grounds only.He encourages her to not to lose hope & makes her to come to have the lunch in the mess.Meanwhile Nair gives the marks of the test & makes Geet fail in test.Arjun sees this & feels something fishy that Nair is making Geet fail purposefully.


Here Dr.S plans a date for Dr.Sen on saturday & Dr.S says yes for the invite.Next morning Major Nair taught how to use rifle.Major Nair,Cadets aaj aap log rifle operate kaise karna hai seekhenge...jo log can't lift the sackful of sand will have the oppurtunity to score the marks.In front of u there's a rifle which is called 303 rifles.U're going to practise it with this rifle only.U r going to start with this rifle...!"


On that time Kunal said lifting his hand,"Sir,303 rifles r not used in the army right???"Nair said bossily,"Yes cadet lekin aap log issi rifle mein shooting practise karenge...!!!"On that time Maan asked politely coming to him,"Sir,aap mind toh nahin karnege na ki mein aapka drill dekhoon...mein nahin jaanta tha ki aaj aap rifle chalaana sikha rahe hai...!!!"U know that firing & mein...!!"


Nair saw him & ordered him to explain how to use these rifles.Maan nodded politely & explained,"303...303 is an long ranged rifle & one of the heaviest...303 chalaana aur bullet motor cycle chalaana ek hi baat hai...it is not so easy...!303's recoil is too strong toh uske liye aapko apne right kandhe ke paas rifle ka butt pakadna hoga aur apne left hand ko uske neeche...dhyaan rahe u've to grip it carefully...zara si laaparvaahi aur aapka khanda will be fractured...


Precap-Geet to Maan,"Cadet Singh...Singh is my official surname sir...!!!"
Edited by geetsrir.maan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow me first
first time
but i just loved this story
this story reminds me of left right left show
but anyway nice update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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why nair wants geet to fail...so much conspiracy...

beautiful update...


loved it...

thank u very much fr dis lovely update n also fr d pm...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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awesome update...

Maan teaching cadets to handle rifles...

geet failed in one test...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...

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