ARSHI OS-Life after death! Part 2 page 14 - Page 4

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Please continue and write in English please
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nice start
amazing and different concept
pls do continue and pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
Sounds interesting...

Waiting to see how the story takes place.

Will be waiting for the first part eagerly.

Thanks for the PM for this..
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seems interesting😊 plzz do continue😃
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LIFE AFTER DEATH 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢ab kya darane ka irada hai????but one vry serious question...iska experience kaha se aaya...i mean lyf after death😕...kuch toh garbarh hai😉
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hm.,..different...loved it...do write and pm me
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Wow dead plz dont kill them lool
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Dear All,

Here I am with a brand new FF-Life after Death...

Firstly i would like to thank my IF friends for liking my new concept and hiting the like button...it really means a lot...

Secondly i would like thank commenting

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Special mention about who always post their opinion and suggestions...who cries with me laughs with me and neve fail to comment on my each and every post...

navyalover240, kitzdoll, frenzy, newmoon2011,MeetPremeer,

Arjuhisis, darksydeangel, khirat_ali, hasvini, imaan, ipkknd-fan

neha.rasul98, lak4nithi, sneharege, chuky, priasweet, Usma55,

ranipriyanka, princessritz

Last but not the least

Ovi_Tanni for commenting always with loads of appreciation and views

Poonam786 for the first one to comment mostly...feels good to know how much you wait for it eagerly

Ann123 for being such a sweetheart and always make my day with your lovely comments...i eagerly wait for yourz

Ivishii, spoorthi, aakriti120, rkapoor1382, Gal_11 for follwing each and every posts of mine.

nimishakumar who never fails to pm me after reading every part of every FF

You all inspire me to write more and more'love you guys a lot'if i have missed any of your names please bash me...and also accept my apology.


PART 1


Arnav and Khushi lying silent on hospital bed, side by side...

So close yet so far...

Anjali was sitting outside the OT shocked...not moving...no tears...no sadness but blank...The two most precious persons of her life lie dead...The doctors declared both of them clinically dead. Multiple fractures and excess blood lose was the reason for khushi's death. and Arnav was hit hard on in head...due to hemorrhage on his brain he died.

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Arnav opes his eyes and find himself lying on the hospital bed. He first thing that came in his mind was Khushi. He looks here and there and find khushi lying beside him on another bed...He jumps up from his bed...

Arnav: Khushi! Khushi! are you ok.
No answer from Khushi...
Arnav screams KHUSHI!..suddenly his eye reaches on the moniter which records heart beat and see the graph lie flat. i was conneted to khushi's fingers...
Arnav couldnot believe in what he was seeing...
He became restless...
Arnav: Khushi you just cant do this to me...khushi you cant leave me and go...you just cant...its all my fault...i am the reason behind this condition of yourz...why why why did i drove the car so rash? Why was i fighting with you when i know...my deepest part of the heart always believed that you were innocent...I am soryy khushi...i have hurt you a lot by not believing you. you were always true...please khushi come back to me...PLEASE he screamed...Come back. I LOVE YOU KHUSHI...I LOVE YOU...please give me a chance to tell you this once...please khushi come back...

Suddenly someone opens the door...arnav sees the doctor and anjali...

Arnav: Di Di see khushi is not talking to me...please di ask her to talk to me...i cant i simply cant see her like this...please tell her to irritate me like she always do...please di.
Anjali didnot even see arnav...
Arnav: Di i know you are angry with me...i am responsible for this...Anjali stood like a statue
Arnav: doctor please do something why arent you doing anything? I cant see my wife like this damn it...you better do something please...
The doctor moves towards arnav's bed...
Doctor: Anjali ji i am sorry but we have to do this formality...i know its tough for you...here is the paper of the declaration...Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada's death certificate...
Arnav shocked. he saw him lying on the bed DEAD...he couldnot believe in what he was seeing...

Khushi was walking through the corridor of the hospital...suddenly she sees herself on a beautiful garden...she was happy to see beautiful flowers and smell fantastic perfumes of eternal garden...but she was feeling pain in her heart...pain of her belongings...she walk through the green...see could see a beautiful bridge and a saint standing across the bridge...she stops near the bridge...

Saint: Hi Khushi
Khushi: Hi!
Saint: Howz your wound?
Khushi: Wound? She sees here wounds all over her body but she was not able to feel the pain...Its fine.
Saint: Good...do you feel pain on any of your wounds?
Khushi: No
Saint: Are you sure?
Khushi: No but somehow i feel as if my heart is bleeding...I feel as if i have left something somewhere but i am not able to recollect.
Saint closes his eyes...a ray from his hand penetrates in khushi's mind. Now?
Khushi sees arnav's body lying dead on the bed...
Khushi: Arnav ji! Whats wrong with him?
Saint: He his no more
Khushi: I can be...he cannot be dead...he cannot leave me...he is everything to me...i cant leave without him...my life means nothing without him.
Saint: But i suppose he has hurt you a lot...he has always misunderstood you.
Khushi: Yes but that is because of me. it was me who unintentionally hidden the truth about Shyam and my engagement. It was not entirely his fault. i am equally responsible for it. Weeping badly she says GOD please help me. give me a last chance to confess the truth and my love. I love him GOD i love him.
The saint turns to a beautiful handsome man wearing white. he was glowing...he whispered
Khushi my child look here.
Khushi looks up...
Khushi: Who are you? and where is that saint?
GOD: I am god who came to you as a saint.
Khushi: GOD?
GOD: yes khushi
Khushi: Where am I?
GOD: this is my house HEAVEN
Khushi was extremely surprised
GOD: Khushi you are free from all the boundaries of the material world. Your soul is now in heaven. He showed her, her dead body lying beside arnav.
Khushi: I am dead?
GOD: you are right khushi.
Khushi: and so is arnav ji. where is he? why is he not here with me?
GOD: Khushi he has done a lot of mistakes in his life. he didnot believe you when you were a pure soul. he has hurt you without your mistakes. he didnt obey a pious relationship like marriage. So he will take time to reach me. You have done a lot of good work in your life so you are here my child.
Khushi: But god its meaningless for me to be here without him. i am his ardhangini (better half) whether i deserve it or not i have taken oath that i will walk with him always during his difficulties and his good times. so why such difference god?
GOD smiles. you are a god soul khushi. i am happy to here that from you. ask anything you want from me
Khushi: Make Arnav ji alive.
GOD: what will he do without you? He loves you madly and i have witnessed it. he can never be happy leaving without you and thats the reason he is dead today. Both of your hearts beat together.
Khushi: Make him forget everyhting but make him alive...his di needs him the most. she is all alone. she will die without him.
GOD: smiles well khushi i grant you his life.
Khushi smiles.
GOD: if i ask you to ask another wish
Khushi: Please cure anjali di's legs.
GOD: Well khushi i grant this as well but this will get cure in due course of time and anjali's effort. and another thing it seems like you are still attached you your near and dear ones and you have accepted that there is still something left for you to do in your life. I would like you to complete your responsibility which is the confession of the truth and your love to your husband. I grant you life.



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Suddenly khushi recollects how the accident happened...they were having a fight over shyam and khushi. Arnav was driving rash and khushi was continuously asking him to drive slow but arnav was furious. He speeded...and suddenly when their car was about to collide with a truck khushi screams "ARNAV JI"

Arnav opens his eyes and the first name he takes is KHUSHI. His eyes still. Just then khushi's monitor's graph starts going up. Khushi starts breadthing

Doctors: Its a Miracle...they are responding...anjali who was like a statue burst out in tears...

My journey with Arnav and Khushi Starts :)

Hey guys please let me know how was it. Was it too dramatic? Give me your suggestions i would love to know...this story is very close to my heart.

Ann123 here is the answer to your question...well i have never had a death experience but i have read and heard that people do get death experience like i have made khushi have it here. its very much true not my imagination. this part of the story is derived from some of the stories i read on life after death on net. :)


Edited by Appy_Indy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hell ya DRAMATIC! But totally loved it!!! loved your ending "Journey with Arnav and Khushi starts" Looking forward to being a part of it 😉
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awesome! do continue soon! :D

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