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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG! Is that Vita? *rubs eyes* Yes it is HER!! And she is here commenting on my post! 😲

Kidding, good to see you here. Missed you! 🤗
How have you been? Pretty busy I guess. Really wish we could have you all to us but life doesnt go our way and work comes first. :)

Thank you so much for the lovely comments. I'm just so surprised to see you here that...I'm just surprised but pleasantly. So will reply to those beautiful comments araam se. Just happy to see you right now. Now please dont disappear so suddenly again. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Anu: Really really glad to be back here for some time, sacchi mein tried to get online last night but people were over at home till 2 in the morning so no chance there.

Wow but really really glad to see so much on the forum! Seriously speaking, there's been an explosion of posts and really wonderful SS' from everybody's point of view:) There's no doubt we're all feeling like they deserved a much more happy ending there, and that's pouring out all the way here:D

Haha well I probably won't be around too often or too long I suppose, but I definitely always keep my tabs open just to see all the things you guys post up here and on the AT:)) So keep on posting, and fantastic piece once again Anu, loved it:D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Morning Tantrums

Phulwa entered the kitchen and immediately got to work, preparing his favorite breakfast and puri saabzi for lunch. While she was at it Gauri and Thakurian entered the kitchen.

'Kya hua jijiya aaj itni dair kaise hogai?' Gauri asked Phulwa worried.

Thakurian came to her and gestured her about Abhay. Phulwa started to answer but another voice cut in.

'Hum yahan hai maa.' Abhay said entering the kitchen. Again Thakurian asks them the reason for being so late that morning.

'Kya kahein maa, yeh aap ki bahu kisi ki kaam ki nahi hai. Hum ne tu kaha tha jaldi utha karo, maa ki sewa karo. Par yeh hamari sunti kaha hai.' Abhay said grinning at Phulwa who went red with embarrassment and anger.

'Badi Thakurian aap...aap nahi jante saari ghalti inki hai. Yeh...' But stopped as she did not know how to continue.

'Hum kya Phulwa?' Abhay asked her teasingly.

'Kuch nahi. Aap jaein hum aapke liye nashte late hain.' Phulwa said to him with a miffed expression.

Abhay leaves laughing while Gauri and Thakurian also share a silent laugh.

*

'Chalien ab aap jaien bhi!' Phulwa said to Abhay almost pushing him out of the door.

'Theek hain hum jate hain par...tum kuch bhool nahi rahi?'

'Hum...nahi sab te tu de diya, nashta tiffin...ab kya?' she asked him confused.

'My goodbye kiss!' he answered grinning.

'Kya cheez?'

'Oh woh...hum batate hai na..' he said pulling her towards him but she again pushed him back now understanding what he really meant.

'Bus Abhay ab aap jain.'

'Theek hain hum jate hain.' Abhay started to leave disgruntled when she called him out. He stopped and looked at her just as she held his face and placed a quick kiss on his cheek and then pushed him out of the door, now a big smile adorning Abhays face.

*

'Itni dair hogai…kahan reh gaye hain yeh.' Phulwa said to herself while pacing around the room. She looked at the clock again as it stroked 12. The whole day had passed and Abhay busy at station had not gotten a chance to call Phulwa and at haveli a worried Phulwa paced around the room thinking about him.

'Pura din gizar gaya aur ek call bhi nahi ki. Aur jab humne ki tu call uthai bhi nahi. Ab hum kya karein?'

She wondered to herself just when she heard footsteps approaching. She hurried to the door expecting to see Abhay but when she opened the door her face drooped more.

Edited by Ameres - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Anu! !!😃Wonderful piece. 👏 haye kitchen scene is one you cant ignore really!

'Kya kahein maa, yeh aap ki bahu kisi ki kaam ki nahi hai. Hum ne tu kaha tha jaldi utha karo, maa ki sewa karo. Par yeh hamari sunti kaha hai.' Abhay said grinning at Phulwa who went red with embarrassment and anger.

Very Bad Abhay! Apne kartoonton ke liye wife par ilzaam😳😆 Sounds so real though *sigh*

'Badi Thakurian aap...aap nahi jante saari ghalti inki hai. Yeh...' But stopped as she did not know how to continue.

Oh oh, poor Phulwa, she can't even defend herself. Baat hi kuch aisi hai that she can't share🤣

Theek hain hum jate hain.' Abhay started to leave disgruntled when she called him out. He stopped and looked at her just as she held his face and placed a quick kiss on his cheek and then pushed him out of the door, now a big smile adorning Abhays face.

Aww sweet sweet sweet!! Abhay acting like a baccha and our phulwa manaoing him😍

'Pura din gizar gaya aur ek call bhi nahi ki. Aur jab humne ki tu call uthai bhi nahi. Ab hum kya karein?'

Worried wife? That's our Phulwa. Ab toh in front of Abhay, she'll hide her soft self *coughs at the word* and give him a lecture about not taking her calls😆

She hurried to the door expecting to see Abhay but when she opened the door her face drooped more.

Wow! Suspense too? Great! Cannot wait to see who is there. You are really being bad now Anu. Leaving this hanging like that! Pata nahin when we'll get to know.😳😉
🤗for this

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Anu nw dont scare us ...yaar...hows at the door??? some constable fr om the PS...informing that he will b late or something????
yeh kya kiya Anu,,,how will i sleep?😕
'Kya kahein maa, yeh aap ki bahu kisi ki kaam ki nahi hai. Hum ne tu kaha tha jaldi utha karo, maa ki sewa karo. Par yeh hamari sunti kaha hai.' Abhay said grinning at Phulwa who went red with embarrassment and anger.
this part is supr cute..loved it can totally imagine Abhay doing this...sigh we never gt much scenes of Abhay teasing phulwa...one was the scene abt medicine and then after his operation and then the holi one😊...honestly gauri and thakurain stop pestering them na...after all nayi nayi shaadi hai😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ameres

Morning Tantrums


Phulwa entered the kitchen and immediately got to work, preparing his favorite breakfast and puri saabzi for lunch. While she was at it Gauri and Thakurian entered the kitchen.

'Kya hua jijiya aaj itni dair kaise hogai?' Gauri asked Phulwa worried.

I know she just wanted to tease Phulwa. Else ye koi puchneka badh hai kya?

Thakurian came to her and gestured her about Abhay. Phulwa started to answer but another voice cut in.

'Hum yahan hai maa.' Abhay said entering the kitchen. Again Thakurian asks them the reason for being so late that morning.

'Kya kahein maa, yeh aap ki bahu kisi ki kaam ki nahi hai. Hum ne tu kaha tha jaldi utha karo, maa ki sewa karo. Par yeh hamari sunti kaha hai.' Abhay said grinning at Phulwa who went red with embarrassment and anger.

Are inhe kon ACP bahadhiya? inhe tho Lawyer hona chahiye, Chalak!! (in a sweet sense of course)

'Badi Thakurian aap...aap nahi jante saari ghalti inki hai. Yeh...' But stopped as she did not know how to continue.

Ya she is such a stupid girl, Kuch tho seeko apne pyare pathi dev se, How trick fully he placed the sentence and u decoit rani always starts talking and stop in the middle!!!!! Oh no Phulwa Think before u go fr... apko Abhay se eska bathala lenahi hoga. Ek kam kijiye aj rath unse kahiye ki "muche maji ka seva karna he, My hubby wants me to do that so I wanted to get up early, isliye chup chap so jayiye"... Eske badh dhekna he wont ever dare to take mukabila with u like this...😆 😆

'Hum kya Phulwa?' Abhay asked her teasingly.

Bechara unhe kuch yad nehi he...

'Kuch nahi. Aap jaein hum aapke liye nashte late hain.' Phulwa said to him with a miffed expression.

Abhay leaves laughing while Gauri and Thakurian also share a silent laugh.

*

'Chalien ab aap jaien bhi!' Phulwa said to Abhay almost pushing him out of the door.

'Theek hain hum jate hain par...tum kuch bhool nahi rahi?'

'Hum...nahi sab te tu de diya, nashta tiffin...ab kya?' 😛 she asked him confused.

You deserve this Abhay...😆

'My goodbye kiss!' he answered grinning.

'Kya cheez?'😆

Anu this is too good I just can imagin Abhay that time how eagerly and romantically he asked fr that and rude Phulwa 😆 😆 sub par pani dala...

'Oh woh...hum batate hai na..' he said pulling her towards him but she again pushed him back now understanding what he really meant.

'Bus Abhay ab aap jain.'

'Theek hain hum jate hain.' Abhay started to leave disgruntled when she called him out. He stopped and looked at her just as she held his face and placed a quick kiss on his cheek and then pushed him out of the door, now a big smile adorning Abhays face.

You dont have to give this. He teased u this much and... Apne Pathi ko keaise aise jane dhiya Decoit rani?

*

'Itni dair hogai'kahan reh gaye hain yeh.' Phulwa said to herself while pacing around the room. She looked at the clock again as it stroked 12. The whole day had passed and Abhay busy at station had not gotten a chance to call Phulwa and at haveli a worried Phulwa paced around the room thinking about him.

'Pura din gizar gaya aur ek call bhi nahi ki. Aur jab humne ki tu call uthai bhi nahi. Ab hum kya karein?'

She wondered to herself just when she heard footsteps approaching. She hurried to the door expecting to see Abhay but when she opened the door her face drooped more.

This was really unfair, hoping that like our Cvs u r also not started to fill the story with jatkas... When will u post the next part...For my minds peace I will continue it a bit more "as she opened the door she saw a man standing with a bunch of Red roses he handed it to her and give her a note... in that note its written that ..."

Beautiful work Anuji... PhAb is still living in our memories. For this one a thousand 👏 👏 👏

fr u... Really feeling 😭 😭 😭 now. But as always everything is fr good...

Yesterday I have done a research on Ajay and Sargun, Sargun was last seen in Geeta before Phulwa it was ended on March 2011, then she enterd in Phulwa on augest a long time after 😭

But about Ajay he was in Anhoniyon ki andhera before and ended in July 2011 and enterd Phulwa in August 2011... He has two projects infront of him at that time and he ended up in Phulwa (thank God) so since Phulwa surely give them more fame and fans( I do believe so or rather want to believe so) their coming back will not be too late expecting to see them soon But together 😕 ya that is the problem!!!!!!!

But any ways very good work anuji...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yay!! Part 2:DD

]Morning Tantrums

Phulwa entered the kitchen and immediately got to work, preparing his favorite breakfast and puri saabzi for lunch.

Awww, the thought of her making puri and saabzi for him is so sweet - it truly was such a bonding moment for them:)

@Kitchen scene: Aww poor Phulwa's always being made fun of!!😆

'Theek hain hum jate hain.' Abhay started to leave disgruntled when she called him out. He stopped and looked at her just as she held his face and placed a quick kiss on his cheek and then pushed him out of the door, now a big smile adorning Abhays face.

Ooof!!👏👏 I loved this scene, could absolutely imagine it playing out exactly like this, first disappointing him and then bringing him in just for that quick peck:)) So sweet!:D

She wondered to herself just when she heard footsteps approaching. She hurried to the door expecting to see Abhay but when she opened the door her face drooped more.

Okay wow, cliffhanger!!:O
So what's it gonna be?? I'm really really intrigued - placing all my bets on drunk Abhay, but is it another officer or something of the sort??

Really really waiting for the next part!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow, the last really seemed to do the trick. Honestly I just added that part on the last minute wasn't planning to it include it in the update but now I'm glad I did. You guys seem to be so curious. 😆😆

Mimi- Yup I loved the teasing bit too, esp the way he was teasing her during the shaving scene. My fav! Wish we had gotten more.

Ami, Mimi, Athira, Vita- THANK YOU so so much for all the appreciation. You guys are the best! 🤗

Sorry, I'm busy so cant reply to individual comments. But please keep commenting because it really makes me happy! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ruthna Mana'na

She opened the door ready to reprimand Abhay for coming so late but the one standing before her was not the one she was expecting.

'Surje...aap is waqt. Khariat?'

'Jee choti thakurian woh Abhajee ka phone aya tha woh keh rahe the ke aaj raat woh ghaar nahi ayein gey kaam bahut hai. Aur kaha ke aap ko bata doon.'

Phulwa simply nodded and asked him to leave. Feeling more annoyed at Abhay she just decided to go to sleep as there was nothing else she could do. Turning and tossing she found herself unable to sleep because while waiting for Abhay to come home she had not eaten the dinner in the hope that they both will get to do dinner together. And the news of Abhay not coming home tonight had made her even more restless. At last she decided to get something to eat and went to kitchen.

*

'Khud tu pait bhar ke kha liya hoga aur hum yahan bhooke pait maar rahe hain. Khali pait tu neend bhi nahi ati. Kuch kha hi lete hai.' She thought to herself as she entered the kitchen.

Opening the fridge she searched the food items but nothing looked appetizing or rather she didn't feel like eating anything as the thought of eating alone did not please her at all. Finally she decided to have a bit of milk and took out the milk carton and poured it in the glass. But just as she reached for the glass a hand came over her. She quickly turned back to meet his gaze smiling down upon her.

'Abhay!' she exclaimed wide eyed. 'Aap ne tu humein dara hi diya.'

'Kya baat hai hamari dacoit rani ab bhi hum se daarti hain?' He asked her with a mischievous grin.

She pressed her lips together and shot him an angry look. Then without an answer she took the milk glass and went out in the lounge with Abhay following her. She sat down on the sofa in the lounge and Abhay placed himself next to her trying hard to diffuse her anger.

'Kya hogaya Phulwa hum se naaraz ho?' Abhay asked.

Phulwa did not answer and just sat slightly turned away from him holding the glass of milk.

'Par hua kya? Acha aaj dair se aye isliye na? Acha baba maaf kardo sorry ghalti hogai. Agli baar nahi hoga.' Abhay said while pouting slightly.

'Humein aap se koi baat nahi karni aap jain.' Phulwa said in a miffed tone.

'Arey Phulwa is baar chod do na...waise hum ne bhi sham se kuch nahi khaya.' Abhay said looking at the glass of milk.

Phulwa turned and looked at him for a moment then taking the glass of milk gulped it down in on go. Then turning towards him said, 'Nahi khaya tu hum kya karein?'

Abhay looking at her started to laugh. Phulwa looked at him puzzled and asked, 'Kya hua aap haans kyun rahe hain?'

'Woh...woh tumhari moo...' He tried to point towards her face where milk marks had made a moustache.

Phulwa didn't understand and continued to look at him confused. Finally Abhay stopped laughing and leaned forward, Phulwa held her breath as he removed the milk moustache with his thumb. For a moment their eyes locked, they stopped there but quickly composing herself Phulwa got up and headed upstairs with Abhay following closely behind. In the room Abhay continued to apologize to her but she refused to listen and cut him short by saying that he simply didn't care for her and went to stand by the window.

Abhay paused for a moment then went towards her, taking her hand in his he looked deep into her eyes and asked, 'Aisa kya karna hoga ke tumhara ghussa kaam hojaye?'

Phulwa looked at him as in the dim light of the room the contours of his face made him seem so childlike, with a genuine apology in his eyes. Seeing that her own features softened but then she stared at him with a slightly irritated expression because Abhay knew that no matter what she couldn't stay mad at him for long and he was playing the move quite well.

Trying hard to hide the smile that was now forming on her lips, she replied, 'Aap hum se vaada karein ke aap din mein dus baar humein call karein gey.'

Abhay simply nodded as an answer. Phulwa continued, 'Aur yeh bhi ke humein din mein kam se kam su baar tu yaad karein gey. Aur yeh bhi vaada karein ke haar raat ka khana hum saath khaien gey.'

Abhay smiling broadly and said, 'Haan haan hum vaada karte hain ke jo hamari Phulwa chahe hum wohi karein gey. Khush?'

Phulwa smiled brightly nodding.

But then Abhay looked at her with a serious expression and said, 'Ab tum bhi hum se ek vaada karo, chahe jo bhi ho tum hum se kabhi naaraz mat hona.'

Phulwa moved by the affection in his eyes and the concern his voice held along with a hint of fear, couldn't help but tear at that point. She nodded and then placed her head at his chest, her favorite place to be. She closed her eyes letting herself feel protected in the warmth of his embrace.

*

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Oh Anu! Beautiful piece. You made me go all gooey there *sigh*

'Kya baat hai hamari dacoit rani ab bhi hum se daarti hain?' He asked her with a mischievous grin.

This bit reminded me of the time he was scaring phulwa. This scene is in the same place but so contrasting in emotions. Loved it Anu.

Phulwa turned and looked at him for a moment then taking the glass of milk gulped it down in on go. Then turning towards him said, 'Nahi khaya tu hum kya karein?'

Haha, good good Phulwa. He thought he was getting a sip of it na? Very well done😆

In the room Abhay continued to apologize to her but she refused to listen and cut him short by saying that he simply didn't care for her and went to stand by the window.

Aww, sweet. Can just imagine that. Yes yes, pati dev should definitely make up for this mistake

Seeing that her own features softened but then she stared at him with a slightly irritated expression because Abhay knew that no matter what she couldn't stay mad at him for long and he was playing the move quite well.

My PhAb😍 *sigh* some scenes remind them of you so much really. That's one of them. Would have loved to see such situations cropping up. Unfortunately...oh no use dwelling on it again.

But then Abhay looked at her with a serious expression and said, 'Ab tum bhi hum se ek vaada karo, chahe jo bhi ho tum hum se kabhi naaraz mat hona.'

Uff, My Abhay is perfect pati dev mode is so touching. Feels like hugging him there🤗

She nodded and then placed her head at his chest, her favorite place to be. She closed her eyes letting herself feel protected in the warmth of his embrace.

😍😍Yes yes, we know Phulwa. It's our fav place too❤️ You belong there.

Anu, this idea of FF is just perfect really. Feels like we are getting to see all the situations that could have arisen but which never got the time to. THANK YOU🤗

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