New FF:The light in Darkness/pt 8 at pg 12 updated - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi i just read all the parts in one go! please add me to ur pm list...your ff is very nice!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome concept
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 8:
Next morning Geet is sleeping on the bed.Maan comes in her room.
Maan:Geet
Geet stands up.
Geet:Maan sir u here??
Maan:I love yoy Geet!!
Geet:I love u too.
Both hug each other.
Geet wakes up.She was seeing a dream.
Geet thoughts to herself:What was this Geet!!You hve completely gone mad.
Pinky comes in her room.
Pinky:Geet! There was a phone call of Maan sir.
Geet(in excitement):What?What he was saying?
Pinky:Why are you so anxious?Nothing special.Today is the dinner with Mr.Arora and he called me as I am his secretary.
Geet:What!
Pinky:Yes!Why are you so worried?
Geet:Nothing so you are going tonight.
Pinky:No.I said to him that Geet will come at dinner as I am not feeling well.
Geet:Oh yes!(laughs)
Pinky:Geet you are not looking right.
Geet is smiling.
Geet:But Pinky you are absolutely fine.
Pinky:Oh yes I am But who wants to go with that angry monster.
Geet:Hey dont say that!
Pinky:SIt here Geet.
Both sit down.
Pinky:Look I am ur friend more then a cousin.I think you are in love with Maan!
Geet keeps looking at her.
Pinky:Are you?
Geet:No...yes...but no.I dont know Pinky.
Pinky:Well I f you are then you should say him!Its my advice..but be careful
Geet:hhmmm...

Its night.And Geet is getting ready for the party.Geet takes out the green colour sari.
Geet(to herself):No its not good.
Then she takes out a black sari.She puts it on herself.
Geet:Yes its perfect and its Maan sir's favourite colour also.(blushes)
Pinky comes in her room.
Pinky:Geet Maan sir have came...Geet you are looking fabulous!
Geet:Thanx.
She walks out of house.Maan 's car is there.She sits in.
Geet:Hello Maan sir!
Maan looks at her and keeps looking at her.
Geet blushes.
Maan:Lets go.
Geet:Oh yes

They reach the hotel.Both go in where Mr.Arora is standing to welcome them.
Mr.Arora:Welcome Maan and??
Maan:Geet...her name is Geet.
Mr.Arora:hello Geet
Geet:Hello Mr.Arora

They come where a party is going on.
Maan:Geet I am going to meet other friends.
Geet:Ok
Maan goes and Geet keeps looking him.
And the song starts "Kuch to hua he ,Kuch ho gya he" (from Kal ho na ho)
With BG song:
Geet is looking at MSK.MSK comes to Geet and ask what happened.Geet shooks her head.
Geet is going but her sari's palu stucks in the nail.
Maan comes and takes out the palu.Geet keeps looking.Mr.Arora bring both Geet and MSK on dance floor.
They do a light couple dance and then MSK goes with Mr.Arora.Geet keeps looking at him with a smile.

Guys next part is going to be disaster!!It will completely change the story so keep in touch.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
just read all the parts!
superb!
continue soon!
pls add me 2 ur pm list!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome part...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Cuteee
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome update
cnt w8 2 find owt wats gna appen plzz cont soon x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice concept...wonderful updates...y did u stop updating...plz try to update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it dear
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice ff
pm me when you update it

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