New FF:The light in Darkness/pt 8 at pg 12 updated - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey all friends!

Thanks 4 liking my FF so much.And if you want that I shall pm u every part so plz kindly send me buddy request. 4om Sliaan
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Promo:
Maan gives Geet a bundle of files and says to complete them till evening.Then again calls him and says to complete the project in 1 hour.Geet is all tensed.Then both are coming 4om opposite sides and and bump into each other and geet falls in MSK arms.
Background voice:Will the hatred continue between 2 of them??? Or love will knock at their hearts!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice start... rude maan bubbly geet... continue soon ... pm mee too plz

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Originally posted by: maansee

nice start... rude maan bubbly geet... continue soon ... pm mee too plz

Thank you maansee ok adding you in the pm list😃
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Part 4:
Maan steps out of the car with black glasses on his face.All the security guards are standing behind him.
Maan walks towards the gate with Adi and security guards following him.He enters the office and takes off his glasses and sees towards Geet.
Geet is shocked to see him.
Geet thoughts:Babaji! help me please.I cant bare him.
Everyone welcomes him whole heartedly except Geet.Maan comes towards Geet and says
Maan:Would you not welcome me Miss...???
An office man:Miss Geet
Maan:Miss Geet(smiles)
Geet:Yes sir,No sir I mean ofcourse sir.
Maan:Where is my office?
Office man:There sir
Maan goes to his office.Adi follows him.Geet is not in her senses.Pinky comes to her.
Pinky:Are u ok Geet?
Geet:Yes I am ok Pinky.
Pinky smiles and goes away.Adi comes outside.
Adi:Excuse me Miss Geet.Sir is calling you.
Geet:ok I am coming
Geet is in a great tension.
Geet(to herself):Now what Geet?? You are all gone!
Geet knocks at door.
Maan:come in
Geet comes in and sees him sitting at his seat.
Geet:Yes sir You called me.
Maan:Geet I need full information of this office till 8 pm.
Geet:But sir..
Maan:I have not comleted yet
And I need the cvs of each and everyone in this office.
Geet:Excuse me sir.This work is of secretary not an assistant manager.Why dont you say this to ur secretary?
Maan:You are right Geet.This work is of secretary.Ok then we shall give this work to you.
Geet:What do you mean?
Maan:From now on u are my personal secretary!!!
Geet:But sir...
Maan:Thats it!Now go and do your work.
Geet is going that she bangs herself with chair and is about to fall.
Maan:Geet!
Maan picks her up and now both are looking into each other eyes with mAHI BG.
Maan holds Geet tight and moves her more closer.Theyare very close.
Adi comes in.
Adi:Sir!
Maan and Geet are back in thier senses.Geet goes outside.
Maan thoughts:What was I doing???Why I was moving her more closer??Maan come into your senses.You HATE her!!!
Adi:Sir Now what??
Maan:Yes Adi first of all change the name of the company.Khurana constructions!!!
Adi:Ok sir
Adi goes away.Geet is sitting in her cabin all lost in her thoughts.Remembering Maan holding her.
Phone rings.Geet comes back from her thoughts.She picks up the phone.
Geet:Yes...Yes sir is in office.You can meet him at 6 pm.
Geet put off phone.
Geet:Why are you thinking about him???He is monster understood Geet!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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part3 was gud yar...
N part was wonderful again...
Omg maan...kuch toh hua h kuch ho gya h lolz
Monster ???? Omg lolz... 🤣
Ab bara mazza aayaiga...
So update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey nice ff buddy

i just come to read ur ff today
must say brilliant work

continue soon
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Part 5:
Geet is sitting in cafe with Pinky all lost in thoughts.Pinky sees her.
Pinky:What happened Geet?
Geet:O yes Pinky nothing.Just thinking that these 2 days were so hilarious.
Pinky:If you are thinking about that Maan Singh Khurana then you are right.
Maan:Not Maan its Sir,Pinky.
Both Geet and Pinky stands up and look behind where Maan is standing.
Pinky:Now I am gone!!!
Geet:Keep quiet.
Maan:And you miss Geet come in my office.
Geet:But sir its our lunch break.
Maan(in loud):I said come in my office!!
Geet:Yes sir
Maan goes from there and Geet follows her.Both comes in the office and Maan sits on his seat and says her to sit also.
Maan:Geet i want a big party.
Geet:Ok sir but why sir???
Maan:Because Maan Singh Khurana has taken over AC.
Geet(to herself):Not Maan but Monster has taken over AC and now it will turn into hell.
Maan:What? What did you say?
Geet:Nothing sir.
Maan:No you took my name and said something like monster.Didn't you?
Geet:No sir not at all.
Maan:Ok leave it.I want a big party tonight.
Geet:Ok sir.
She is going to leave that suddenly she turns.
Geet:What? tonight...But sir...Its not possible sir...
Maan:I know its not but you will make it possible.Now get to work.
Geet leaves.
Vicky is sitting in living room reading magazine.Dev enters KM.
Vicky:Hey bro!
Dev:Hey! what are you doing?? looking for girls in magazine (laughs)
Vicky:no bro just reading it.Well from where you are coming looking very happy.
Dev:yup today I went out with Natasha.
Vicky:Now whose Nastasha??
Dev:My new girl friend.
Vicky:16
Dev:What 16?
Vicky:Girl friend number 16 (Laughs).
Dev also laughs.
Geet is busy doing all decorations.Maan comes to her.
Maan:Is everything ready?
Geet:Yes sir nearly.
Maan(to himself):Oh no.I thought that she Can not do this.
Geet:Sir I can.
Maan:What?
Geet:I know that you were thinking that I can not do this but I can sir.
Maan:Look I have to go.
He goes away.
Geet:Geet he always has done bad to you but why You are liking him,control urself Geet.Control!
Adi,Pinky and other staff reaches the party location.
Pinky:Wow the decorations are so beautiful.
Adi:Yes Pinky You are right.
All are in the party.Maan also comes there.He is wearing black coat with red tie.And looking dashing.
All girls are looking at him.A business friend comes to him.
Bus. friend:Mr.Maan the party is beautiful.But who has organise this party?
Adi:Geet
Bus. Friend:And where is she?
Adi:Dont know.
Maan also looks here and there in search of him.
Adi:Sir do you know where she is?
Maan:No I dont know.
Adi:O there she is.(points towards enterance)
Maan also looks towards the enterance.
So guys do you like it,dont forget to press like button and do comment.
Will Geet fall in love with Maan?What will happen in the party??Keep reading😉😉😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awsome ff luve it
cn u plzz add me 2 ur pm list x

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