New FF:The light in Darkness/pt 8 at pg 12 updated

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Characters:
Geet:A bubbly girl of age 23 who used to live in Mumbai but now lives in Delhi with her cousin Pinky in Delhi.She lives her life to full but is very emotional
Maan:A harsh boy full of attitude and anger,known as MSK a business tycoon.He is of 28.He has no emoticons for any one except his two brothers.
Dev:A stylish dude who spends money like water.But loves her bro very much.
Vicky:A college going boy,very sensitive but smart.
Pinky:Geet's cousin,very helpful but foolish
Part 1:
There was darkness everywhere.Thunder and lightening were the most frightening things.
The rain was so powerful.There was no one on the road but a girl.She was all drenched.
So beautiful and looking like a princess walking on the road,all helpless.She was Geet.
Geet(to herself):Oh Babaji,Pinky left me in that shop and now her phone is also not working
What am I going to do now hhh... Pinky I 'll eat you up
Then suddenly Geet listened a voice of car and saw two head lights walking towards her.
Geet:stop!stop! I need help Please...
The car continued moving.
Geet:Babaji! How rude is this???
Then car stopped at once and reversed back to her.There was a boy of 28 age sitting in it staring at Geet.
Geet:Thank God You stopped.I need help plz can you drop me home plz...
Boy:Ok get in fast I don have time to waste.
Geet:Thank you
She open the door of car and sits in it.
Boy:Where you want to go?
Geet:_______ road...
My name is Geet and I am from Mumbai.Thanks for you help.If you were not there then who has
helped me..
Boy:Here it is!
Geet:What?
Boy:your home(angrily)
Geet:O thanks
She gets out of car and is walking towards her house.Suddenly she slips
Geet:Ouch!! Babaji what is this???
Boy(thoughts to himself):O This girl.She ll get me mad!
The boy gets out of car and picks her up in his arms and an eyelock...
Pinky:Geet! What happened??(walks out of her house)
Pinky's voice bring them back into their senses.
Boy:She fell down.
Geet:leave me.I am ok now.
The boy throws her down.
Geet:Ouch!Dont you have any manner you...Whatever you are!!!
Boy:(Stares at her and is going to leave that suddenly his pone rings)
Hello! Yes it Maan Singh Khurana here...Ok I am coming
Maan sits in the car and then look at Geet gives him a Hot stare and off he goes
Geet:Stupid man ouch! my back
Geet and Pinky walks in the house.
Pinky:Who was he??
Geet:I dont know what Maan singh whatever.
Pinky:He was very rude.Am I right???
Geet:Yes but leave him.You YOU left me there.I ll kill you Pinky
Pinky:I am so sorry Geet.Actually...
Geet:Actually...What? I ll tell you
Geet rans after Pinky and both laughs.
Geet:A A Achooo!!!
Pinky:I think you have catch up cold.Go get some shower I'll make soup for you
Geet:Yes...Thanks Pinky
Geet goes to take shower and Pinky goes into Kitchen
I hope you all like it.Its my first ever FF.So tell your views😊😊😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yippee me the first one...
interesting...
nice start...šŸ‘šŸ‘
do continue...
add me in ur PM list...😃
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Originally posted by: butterfly.tanu

yippee me the first one...

interesting...
nice start...šŸ‘šŸ‘
do continue...
add me in ur PM list...😃

Thanks for encouragement
Yes you r first one hahahaha
Adding you in pm list
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@abhinash079:
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@amzu32:
Ok will continue and thanks to u 2
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nice update
continue soon
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Originally posted by: sliaan

Thanks for encouragement
Yes you r first one hahahaha
Adding you in pm list


Thanx Dear...😊
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good start .keep writting.😊
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Originally posted by: urmita

good start .keep writting.😊

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o wow awsome continue it

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