New FF:The light in Darkness/pt 8 at pg 12 updated

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Thank you namita and maneet56

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Posted: 14 years ago

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wow i loved the start !!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

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nice start

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Posted: 14 years ago

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nice starting...

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all for ur encouragement and response.I 'll update soon guys

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

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nice start...:)
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Posted: 14 years ago

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wow...
This ff sounds interesting...
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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part 2:

Next morning Geet wakes up and sees the sun and smiles.She goes to take bath.
After taking bath she steps in the kitchen.Geet starts making breakfast.
Geet:Pinky...Pinky!Where are you??
She gets no response.Then she goes to Pinky room and again calls out her name.
Then she gets a piece of paper on bed saying
"Geet I had to leave early for work.you were not feeling well last night so I did'nt woke you up"
Geet smiles and goes back to kitchen.
Geet(to herself):Pinky,you are so caring.
Maan is in KM reading business letter.Vicky comes to his room and knocks the door.
Maan:Yes Vicky come in...
Vicky:Good Morning bro!
Maan:Good Morning Vicky!
Vicky sits quietly staring at Maan.
Maan:Yes Vicky!What can I do for You?
Vicky:Yes bro!no bro! nothing...
Maan:Tell Vicky...I am your bro and I know that you want something from me.
Vicky:How do you know it bro??
Maan:I have brought you up Vicky (smiles)
Vicky:Actually bro...I want lift to my college
plz bro plz All drivers have gone to some work plz bro!!!
Maan:Ok Vicky I shall drop you
Geet leaves from her home and is walking on the road in search of auto.
A car in fast speed runs on the road,due to which muddy water on the road falls on geet clothes.
Geet:Babaji what is this my clothes.(is near to weep)
Geet looks at the car and shouts.
Geet:Blind idiot stupid can you see.If you cant see then why are you driving??
The car stops and Maan steps out with an angry face.He walks towards Geet.
Geet:you you again...
Maan:How dare you to call me all ths rubbish!!!
Geet:I will say what you are
Maan holds her both arms and smacks her in the tree behind her.
Both keeps looking in each other eyes and a MAHI background music.
Geet:Leave me!
Maan leaves him.
Maan:Listen you girl Dont you dare to to say me anything.I am Maan Singh Khurana,the owner of Khurana constructions and you...Whats your status??A girl which all time is walking on the road
Geet:Excuse me !
Maan:excuse me what???You are nothing in front of me.
Geet:I am assistant manager in Agarwal Constructions.
Maan:Oh AC (laughs)
Geet:Whatever you are you dont have any respect for anyone.You dont have any manners.How poor are you!
Maan:I 'll show you what I am!!
Maan goes back to the car.Geet finds an auto and goes away.
Vicky:What happened bro??
Maan:Nothing.(in his heart)I ll show you what I am...

Edited by sliaan - 14 years ago