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sona rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#301

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi
that was absolutely fab everyone
amazing, totally awesome
loved it
do cont soon
btw, sona jaan twist ki jagah thode bade updates de😆

😆ok i'll try kya yar TWIST pasand nahi ayae kya😡😆

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reni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#302

Awesome parts sona and bindu di..really good..

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sona rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: leverne
Awesome parts sona and bindu di..really good..

thanks yar🤗🤗

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craziekudi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#304

i am writing... anyone else doing the updateing????

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sona rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#305

Originally posted by: craziekudi
i am writing... anyone else doing the updateing????

phewww thanks god koi too aya😆

hi deepu🤗

jaldi update ker😆agar main ghayab ho gayai too samajh jana LIGHT GAYAI😭😆

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honeygrape

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Posted: 13 years ago

#306

Originally posted by: craziekudi
i am writing... anyone else doing the updateing????

go ahead chechiii👍🏼

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craziekudi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#307

guys.. a small probs happned... give me some more time.. i had typed in eveything something happened with my lappy... i have to redo again...

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craziekudi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#308

PART 9

( by craziekudi a.k.a deepu😉)

Geet was enjoying the dancing and entertainment... 'wow this man is good ' they kept on dancing and Geet was laughing ... Maan was enjoying dancing with her... he looked at her flushed face... her cheeks pink with all that dancing and jumping... He undertood.. she loves danicng... Maankeeps looking at her...'she makes me forget my plan...' comes out his thoughts and 'Maan Singh khurana never forgets anything...'

Geet was enjoying very badly... maan stops and looks at her... ' So u love dancing huh.. Ms Handa...'

'Yes Maan... i love dancing... its my passion and my hobby'... Maan looks at her... They excahnage their phone numbers and numbers... Maan keeps it a habt to call her twice a day and talk to her.. She was also warming to him... their friendship grew... after two weeks... One day Maan called her and asked her to meet at Sam's Cafe for lunch...

Geet comes in a little late but Maan was laready waiting for her.. He Gets up and greets her with a hug...and they ordered their food and geet was continously talking about her shopping and was laughing...'waise Geet there is something i need to ask you...'...'hmmm'...'woh will you come with me to a dinner tom...' geet looks at startled... 'what?'

'Woh Geet... we havent gone out for a dinner since becoming friends... so i thought it would be agood outing'.. whats say...'...Geet looks at him ' Woh Maan i nam not sure... i have to ask my family...'

'waise geet.. there is not need to be scared of me... i am not gonna eat u...if that what u think'... Geet laughs.. 'hey... i trust you maan.. its just my family...'..

just then something tugs inside his heart... he just ignores the warning bells...

'But please try geet... its just a dinner date na...'... 'date??? wow.. arent u jumpimg a bit high? ... and laughs...' Maan looks at her...' yeah i will be going out with the most beautiful and a sexy woman... yeah its a date for me...'.. Geet blushes...'ok i will surely try and let you know.. maan...'.. They part their ways.. on going home... Geet was in thoughts... she was excited that Maan asked her for a date... she was having goose bumps... suddenly smacks her own head with her hand and walks off...

At night.. she thinks of telling this to Brij veerji.. but hears him scolding her sister for talking to a boy at night...' 'hmmm.. woh rastha bhi band!!!! babaji.. help karo na...'

Even though Handa's are modern family, they still follow strict stringent rules for the ladies in their family... Geet thinks of lying tat she will be in Pinky's house...

Maan mean while was wiating impatiently for her call.. he had his plan in action.geet- disc-drunk- seduction - and all.. he laughs loud... all set.. he is not taking her for dinner... he is just gonna seduce her... and for that he just needs to get her drunk..

She calls up maan and confirms her coming... ' Maan u pick me at 8 pm from Pinky's house...' Maan understands that she is lying to her family about the dinner...' this is the best time to action his plan...he grins...

the follwing day.. she reaches pinky's house with all her makeup and all.. She gets ready and waits for him.. Maan comes at right 8 pm looking dashingly hot and sexy... in a limo...

She gets inside the limo .. on the way maan says.' waise Geet we are not going for dinner.. we are going somewhere else...'... 'What... Maan... no ...where are we going'.. He smiles...

He stops the car and she gets out... sees that it is one of the best discs in town... she gets excited...'wow maan...'...'well u love dancing... and i love your flushed face after u dance..'.. Geet looks at him and blushes... she just turns her head down...

'Plan A successful'

'Chalo Geet...'.. tehy get inside... the song...'ooh aaah.. paint it red... ik junoon( ZIndagi na milega dubara) was playing... Geet was really excited...Maan smiles...' welll i a surprise for you Geet.'... this will clear all our scores... he grins..

she literally dragged maan to the floor and started dancing...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZQwLMnaZq6k[/YOUTUBE]

she was so into her dancing... then.. a waiter comes... and offers her a drink...she hesitates... but maan insists her to take it...

she smiles and gulps the whole drink in one go... she turns and feels a dizziness and streches her arms to call maan... but falls directly into Maan's arms...

Maan smiles...' Plan B succesful'...

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Edited by craziekudi - 13 years ago