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An Unwanted Desire

He took slow steps towards his room, which he would be sharing with her from now on. The feeling at the pit of his stomach kept on pestering him, he tried to fight it back but failed. He didn't know why he was feeling nervous, he was supposed to be aggravated after what she had done, instead he was having a hard time controlling an unwanted desire.

A desire that he couldn't hold back. This was frustrating him even further, he drastically opened the door to their bedroom only to see the most beautiful sight sitting on the bed with her eyes downcast.

Arnav Singh Raizada was at a loss of words.

His anger subsided, his frustration disappeared, and his unwanted desire proliferated. Closing the door behind him, he walked towards the bed in a trance. He noticed her hands were clasped together so tight that her knuckles started to change color. He took in the colors of her beautiful lengha, red and green. Two of his favorite colors.

Something inside him wanted to yank the pieces of cloth off her and make himself her object of attention.

The jewelry she was adorned in was making him a bit envious, he wanted his lips to place soft kisses wherever the pieces of jewels were touching her.

Her huge doe eyes made him want to drown in them, he wanted himself to be the only person conquering those beautiful orbs. Her pink quivering lips were too tempting to handle, he had a sudden urge to steal a kiss from those trembling lips.

Finally reaching the end of the bed, he sat in front of her, still staring at her as if he'd never seen such a magnificent sight before. Raising his hands, he slowly took off her dupatta, noticing how her doe eyes flared up into questionable ones. He was still in a trance, as if he was upon a spell. He cupped her face as he stared down to her luscious lips.
Bringing his face closer, he closed the distance between them, only to hear a gasp coming out of her mouth..reality came hitting him hard on the face.

He closed his eyes shut. This wasn't supposed to be happening. How could he suddenly lose control of his emotions?

Without saying a word he got up and rushed to the poolside, trying his best to settle down that sudden unwanted desire..

Andd this is the result of a two month long writer's block :P Woot! LOLYeah, you can all throw tomatoes, anda's, jootha's at me for writing such a crappy OS :P and this is probably the most shortest thing I've ever written! I honestly don't know what I've written, it was written in less than 30 minutes, I actually wanted to portray what Arnav might be going through when he sees Khushi on his - oh sorry - their bed on the night of their Suhaag Raat! ;) But I've obviously failed at that :P Please do leave comments and criticisms! (: Oh and don't forget to press the 'Like' button!

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--Garima


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautifully written..must be exactly how ASR must be feeling right now!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This was definitely not crappy!!
It was amazing actually!!
Loved the way you penned down Arnav's feelings and emotions!!
Superb OS!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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U have described Arnav's feeling so beautifully! Loved it totally! 👏

Thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Arnav will b going thru thesame turmoil that u have written!!!
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Lovely description of asr feelings
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Beautiful dear 👏 bechara arnav 😍
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I woder how Khushi should be feeling.. again an interruption :(
but I loved the OS, thank u for the PM :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome OS. Exactly described Arnav's position now. Poor guy. Do PM me in future.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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writer's block? Yeah righttt 😛

This was so perfect Garima <3 It must be exactly what he's going through. Such a whirlwind of emotions.

You've written it beautifully, seriously Gari, each sentence was perfect and your use of adjectives is loveee :D

Love you,

Meera 😳

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