OS: An Unwanted Desire

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-Garima-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: chupachup
Beautifully written..must be exactly how ASR must be feeling right now!

Thank you soo much! 😳

Originally posted by: 2future
Beautiful

Thank you! (:

Originally posted by: littlemoi
This was definitely not crappy!!
It was amazing actually!!
Loved the way you penned down Arnav's feelings and emotions!!
Superb OS!!

Awww thanks! <3 I'm glad you enjoyed it! (:

Originally posted by: --Anna--
U have described Arnav's feeling so beautifully! Loved it totally! 👏

Thanks for the PM!

Thank you soo much! Glad you liked it! and np! (:

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu
Arnav will b going thru thesame turmoil that u have written!!!

Thank youu! (: and yes he will be!

Originally posted by: pri12
awsomeee

Thank you! (:

Originally posted by: taniks
Lovely description of asr feelings

Thank you! (:

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-Garima-

@-Garima-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: SereneLady
Beautiful dear 👏 bechara arnav 😍

Originally posted by: Lyraa99
awesome os garima👏

Thank youu! 😳

Originally posted by: Doc_Manaal
I woder how Khushi should be feeling.. again an interruption :(
but I loved the OS, thank u for the PM :)

Thank you! (:

Originally posted by: Bhavapriya
Awesome OS. Exactly described Arnav's position now. Poor guy. Do PM me in future.

Thank you so much! (:

Originally posted by: indiandoll89
writer's block? Yeah righttt 😛 Pshhht, I so had a writer's blockk :P

This was so perfect Garima <3 It must be exactly what he's going through. Such a whirlwind of emotions. Thank you soo much Meera, I know right? Poor guy soo many things going on with him at once! :(

You've written it beautifully, seriously Gari, each sentence was perfect and your use of adjectives is loveee :D Gaahh you make me blush so much Meeru 😳 😆 I'm soo glad you liked it ahh yayy finally someone said I use good adjectives, I hope my English teacher gives me better scores now :P 😆

Love you, Love you times a million <3

Meera 😳