Interesting and maybe cliched moments ahead on the show...
I just wanted to give my two cents worth...
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Part I
He slammed the door, and strode into his room...
He heard a gasp... he turned around to find her sitting on the bed. Her body was hunched over, her arms wrapped around her drawn up knees that cradled her beautiful face. She looked away immediately, unable to meet his gaze... her eyes staring vacantly at the floor, her lips quivering.
She couldn't get over it! This morning, he'd been the perfect gentleman, helping her at lunch. He'd later said he wanted to talk to her, a gentle look in his dreamy eyes. A look that had changed in the evening... and had her wondering what was wrong all of a sudden. And when he had finally spoken, it was the worst proposition she'd ever heard...
Tears rolled down her cheeks...
He couldn't breathe for a second... his hands clenched, and he looked away. He still couldn't bear to see her in tears. He'd have to get over it!
He walked towards the closet and pulled out his clothes, and slammed the bathroom door. He returned a few minutes later, all cleaned up... a navy sweater pulled over a white collared tee, and grey trousers.
Her breathing quickened as she saw him heading in her direction... Hai Devi Maiyya, yeh idhar kyon aa rahe hain?
She cast furtive glances in his direction... her hands fidgeted with the silken folds of her lehenga... and her body instinctively moved back.
He stopped in his tracks. She's scared. Or maybe she's repelled by the idea of me touching her? After all, it's that bas**** Shyam she wants.
He frowned... All those moments... them by the pool, her innocent glances in his direction... that conversation they'd had by the door after she'd kissed him, her insistence of finding out if he had bought her those bangles.. something didn't sit right...
He changed course and headed to the French windows... stood there gazing at the pool, his arms outstretched, resting on the glass. Was he misreading her role in this? Or had all those moments nothing for her? Had she been using him, in the process of trying to get that creep to leave his Di for her?!
The very thought that she could stoop so low made his blood boil! Had he been played? How could she be so friendly with his Di, and yet be involved with her husband?! It didn't make sense... but nothing did! The man he thought was Di's soul mate had betrayed Di's trust... the conniving creep, @##$#$**!
He gritted his teeth and punched his clenched fist on the glass, unaware that it had shattered and let his hand go right through... the jagged pieces cutting through his skin. He was so caught up in his thoughts, he felt no pain...
He'd make them pay for this deception... she was after all, now his. And she'd said just earlier that day that she would do anything. And he had no qualms anymore... an eye for an eye.
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She nearly screamed when she saw the blood on his hand... he stood there, as if in a trance. She instinctively got up and rushed to his aid. Grabbing a towel that lay on the chaise lounge, she wrapped his hand gently.
"Iski koi zaroorat nahin hai, Khushi," he said, wrenching his injured hand from her hold but continuing to keep it wrapped.
Their eyes met... the pain in his mirrored in her own. His Adam's apple bobbed, and his lips curved inward as he gritted his teeth. Damn her! She was making this tough!
He took a step back, as if he couldn't bear to be near her.
She held back her tears... hurt by his action, even more than his words. She gulped, her eyes downcast as she stepped back. Her heart was still pounding in her chest, her breathing still ragged, from the shock of what had just happened...
Worse, she was even more heartbroken now as realization dawned on her... She couldn't see him hurt... even after all that he had done today, forcing her into this unholy union, she still cared.
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Hope to continue it - please LIKE and/ or COMMENT... and motivate me! 😊
Happy to PM the updates as and when they happen... but be forewarned, I'm lazy 😉
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My other attempts at writing
Tum theek ho na? (2-part SS)
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2758856&PID=52566862
And then he shut the door (OS)
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2749279&PID=52266803
And it's payback time ( ArHi on same team FF)
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2753098&PID=52377401
Edited by adeeti10 - 13 years ago
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