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Posted: 14 years ago
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(A scene in the airport. Manav all set to fly to Canada. Archana requests him to stay for some time)

Archana- kya main sapna dekh rahi hun? Aap mere samne ho !!!

Manav- kaash yeh sapna hota..sapne ki tarah sundar aur saral hota…haquiqat lekin kuch aur hai..tum aur main ab alag hain

Archana-sach kaha aap ne..ab mera koi haq nahi banta aap pe

Manav-mujhe jane do Archana..mujhe wapas jana hai

Archana- bas jee bhar ke dekh lene do ..phir kal yeh fursat mile na mile

Manav- dekhna to main bhi tumhe chahta hun..lekin archana shayad kudrat ko yeh manzoor nahi hai..

Archana-main bahut tadpi hun Manav aap ki yaad mein.. …aankhen band kar ke aapko dekhne ki koshish ki hai maine..aap ko meri yaad aati thi?

Manav- yeh bhi puchhne ki baat hai? Bahut yaad aati thi tum. Door aasman mein chand ko dekh ke yeh sochta tha..kya yeh wohi chand hai jo meri archana bhi Mumbai se dekhti hogi..

Archana- samandar kinare khadi hoke maine bhi lehron se puchha hai mere manmav ab kya karte honge …woh saare lamhe yaad kiye hain jo maine aapke sath biataye the..

Manav-apni jan se juada ho ke zindegi bitana kitna muskil hai..koi yeh mujh se puchhe

Archana-kaise guzare aap ne phir woh din

Manav- haath ke sahare 😆

Archana-chhi gande

Manav-mera matlab hai ..haathon se aansoon ko pochh pochh ke din guzare hain maine…tumne kya kiya jab meri yaad aayi

Archana- pehle to royi ..chillayi..lekin meri awaz aap tak nahi pahunchi door Canada mein to thaki haari apni kismat ko kosti hui din guzarne lagi

Manav-mein raaton ke bare mein puch raha hun.. 😆

Archana-chhi gande

Manav- chalo ab mere jane ka waqt ho chukka hai

Archana-main aap ko rok bhi to nahi sakti..Ovi aur Teju aap ka intezar karte honge

Manav-tum bhala mujhe rokogi kyun? Main bhala tumhara hun kaun?

Archana- yeh kya keh diya aap ne..aap mere hain kaun?

Manav-bilkul..tumhara mera upar kabhi bharosha tha hi nahi..isliye aaj hum alag hain..

Archana-mujhe jo kehna hai kaho manav….main shayad aap ki kaabil nahi..meri kismet achhi thi jo mujhe aap mile..

Manav-aur tumne mujhe apne se alag kar diya..aye meri flight ka time ho raha hai..main chalta hun check in karne

Archana-bye manav…ho sake to mujhe maaf karna

Manav- (thinks..itni hot lag rahi Archana..usse chhod ke kaun kambakht jayega)nahi kuch der baad bhi ja sakta hun..abhi 2 hr hai

Archana-manav aap ko chasme kab se lage? bahut cute lag rahe ho chasmo mein aap to

Manav-chasme hain tabhi yeh behtareen nazara aaj achhe se dekh pa raha hun

Archana-kaun sa nazara

Manav-jo mere aankhon ke saamne hai..jise chhune ko dil kare..aur chumne se raha na jaye

Archana- aye hello..yeh public place hai

Manav-jane se pehle mujhe ek baar gale laga lo archana..barson se taras raha hun main..

Archana- main bhi virha ki aag mein jali hun Manav.. jee to mera bhi karta hai aap ki baahon mein sama jaun aur aakhri saansein lene tak aap ki baahon ki qaid mein rahun..

Manav-tumhare honth ki chuan keliye mere honth taras gaye hain archana…

Archana- chii gande..aap bade woh ho !!!

Manav-jo bhi hun tumhara hun meri jaan…bhaad mein jaye duniyadaari..aa gale lag ja meri jaan…..(manav hugs Archana very tight & starts kissing all around)

Archana- (without trying to free herself from Manav)itne utawale mat ho..yeh kya kar rahe ho..sab log dekh rahe hain manav…aap ki flight ka waqt ho raha hai..chhodo na….bade gande ho

Manav- I love you archana

Archana- I love you too

Manav- yeh aag aise nahi bujhegi

Archana- aap ki flight miss ho jayegi

Manav-abhi 2 hr hai meri jaan..tab tak apne dil ki flight ko to land karwa lun

Archana- to 2 hr tak kya aise kiss karte rahoge mujhe..chhodo na..ummm…nahi…chhodo na..log dekh rahe hain

Manav- 2 hr kya mera bash chale to puri zindegi aise bita dun tumhare sath

Archana- chhod bhi do..haaila 5 baj gaye..aap ki to 4:30 baje flight hi..flight to miss ho gayi

Manav- tum itni hot lagogi to aaj ki kya… kal ki bhi flight miss ho jayegi

(Sulo come)

Sulochana- archu yeh to ku kya kar rahi hai?

Manav- kaun hai yeh kabab ki haddi

Archana- meri aai hai manav..aise nahi kehte..

Manav- ram ram aai..aap abhi mari nahi? Khair koi baat nahi. meri flight to aaj miss ho gayi..kya main aaj ki raat aap ke ghar ruk sakta hun…

Archana- oh wow..maza aa jayega..chalo na manav..i love you

Sulochana-nahiii

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Manav- ram ram aai..aap abhi mari nahi? Khair koi baat nahi. meri flight to aaj miss ho gayi..kya main aaj ki raat aap ke ghar ruk sakta hun

🤣🤣

SD👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -SD-

(A scene in the airport. Manav all set to fly to Canada. Archana requests him to stay for some time)

Archana- kya main sapna dekh rahi hun? Aap mere samne ho !!!

Manav- kaash yeh sapna hota..sapne ki tarah sundar aur saral hota'haquiqat lekin kuch aur hai..tum aur main ab alag hain

Archana-sach kaha aap ne..ab mera koi haq nahi banta aap pe

Manav-mujhe jane do Archana..mujhe wapas jana hai

Archana- bas jee bhar ke dekh lene do ..phir kal yeh fursat mile na mile

Manav- dekhna to main bhi tumhe chahta hun..lekin archana shayad kudrat ko yeh manzoor nahi hai..

Archana-main bahut tadpi hun Manav aap ki yaad mein.. 'aankhen band kar ke aapko dekhne ki koshish ki hai maine..aap ko meri yaad aati thi?

Manav- yeh bhi puchhne ki baat hai? Bahut yaad aati thi tum. Door aasman mein chand ko dekh ke yeh sochta tha..kya yeh wohi chand hai jo meri archana bhi Mumbai se dekhti hogi..

Archana- samandar kinare khadi hoke maine bhi lehron se puchha hai mere manmav ab kya karte honge 'woh saare lamhe yaad kiye hain jo maine aapke sath biataye the..

Manav-apni jan se juada ho ke zindegi bitana kitna muskil hai..koi yeh mujh se puchhe

Archana-kaise guzare aap ne phir woh din

Manav- haath ke sahare 😆

Archana-chhi gande

Manav-mera matlab hai ..haathon se aansoon ko pochh pochh ke din guzare hain maine'tumne kya kiya jab meri yaad aayi

Archana- pehle to royi ..chillayi..lekin meri awaz aap tak nahi pahunchi door Canada mein to thaki haari apni kismat ko kosti hui din guzarne lagi

Manav-mein raaton ke bare mein puch raha hun.. 😆

Archana-chhi gande

Manav- chalo ab mere jane ka waqt ho chukka hai

Archana-main aap ko rok bhi to nahi sakti..Ovi aur Teju aap ka intezar karte honge

Manav-tum bhala mujhe rokogi kyun? Main bhala tumhara hun kaun?

Archana- yeh kya keh diya aap ne..aap mere hain kaun?

Manav-bilkul..tumhara mera upar kabhi bharosha tha hi nahi..isliye aaj hum alag hain..

Archana-mujhe jo kehna hai kaho manav'.main shayad aap ki kaabil nahi..meri kismet achhi thi jo mujhe aap mile..

Manav-aur tumne mujhe apne se alag kar diya..aye meri flight ka time ho raha hai..main chalta hun check in karne

Archana-bye manav'ho sake to mujhe maaf karna

Manav- (thinks..itni hot lag rahi Archana..usse chhod ke kaun kambakht jayega)nahi kuch der baad bhi ja sakta hun..abhi 2 hr hai

Archana-manav aap ko chasme kab se lage? bahut cute lag rahe ho chasmo mein aap to

Manav-chasme hain tabhi yeh behtareen nazara aaj achhe se dekh pa raha hun

Archana-kaun sa nazara

Manav-jo mere aankhon ke saamne hai..jise chhune ko dil kare..aur chumne se raha na jaye

Archana- aye hello..yeh public place hai

Manav-jane se pehle mujhe ek baar gale laga lo archana..barson se taras raha hun main..

Archana- main bhi virha ki aag mein jali hun Manav.. jee to mera bhi karta hai aap ki baahon mein sama jaun aur aakhri saansein lene tak aap ki baahon ki qaid mein rahun..

Manav-tumhare honth ki chuan keliye mere honth taras gaye hain archana'

Archana- chii gande..aap bade woh ho !!!

Manav-jo bhi hun tumhara hun meri jaan'bhaad mein jaye duniyadaari..aa gale lag ja meri jaan'..(manav hugs Archana very tight & starts kissing all around)

Archana- (without trying to free herself from Manav)itne utawale mat ho..yeh kya kar rahe ho..sab log dekh rahe hain manav'aap ki flight ka waqt ho raha hai..chhodo na'.bade gande ho

Manav- I love you archana

Archana- I love you too

Manav- yeh aag aise nahi bujhegi

Archana- aap ki flight miss ho jayegi

Manav-abhi 2 hr hai meri jaan..tab tak apne dil ki flight ko to land karwa lun

Archana- to 2 hr tak kya aise kiss karte rahoge mujhe..chhodo na..ummm'nahi'chhodo na..log dekh rahe hain

Manav- 2 hr kya mera bash chale to puri zindegi aise bita dun tumhare sath

Archana- chhod bhi do..haaila 5 baj gaye..aap ki to 4:30 baje flight hi..flight to miss ho gayi

Manav- tum itni hot lagogi to aaj ki kya' kal ki bhi flight miss ho jayegi

(Sulo come)

Sulochana- archu yeh to ku kya kar rahi hai?

Manav- kaun hai yeh kabab ki haddi

Archana- meri aai hai manav..aise nahi kehte..

Manav- ram ram aai..aap abhi mari nahi? Khair koi baat nahi. meri flight to aaj miss ho gayi..kya main aaj ki raat aap ke ghar ruk sakta hun'

Archana- oh wow..maza aa jayega..chalo na manav..i love you

Sulochana-nahiii

omg ... i just cudnt stop myself from laughing🤣🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
#4
🤣🤣
Manav ka dimaag bahut shaitaani hai ...always double meanings .
Archu all the time ' aap bahut gande hein...🤣
Brilliant as always SD, great job ..👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
#5
Archu: Chhiii aap bade gande ho ji...

This has to be the most consistent line of all your ArMan stories... 😆 the last dialogue by Manav to Sulo Aai was the best...

A romantic story after a long time SD! How about a short story series like you used to do earlier? ;-) (You know many a times I go through your old stories like ArMan in Switzerland or Phoolon ke sheher mein ArMan)
Edited by nikitagmc - 14 years ago
Posted: 14 years ago
#6
Another great work from you sd bhai
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Posted: 14 years ago
#7
Everyone seems to be enjoying themselves with this story. I would love to as well, (nothing to laugh about with the current PR), but can't because there's too much Hindi.😔
Posted: 14 years ago
#8

Originally posted by: suan


Everyone seems to be enjoying themselves with this story. I would love to as well, (nothing to laugh about with the current PR), but can't because there's too much Hindi.😔

the current pr story also didn't apple me.so di how are you?
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Posted: 14 years ago
#9
Hi Shuridh,
😊 I'm fine. How were the holidays for you and your family?
How is Aparna? Tell her hello for me. I hope this term will be very successful for you and Aparna, and all the work will not make you both go crazy.😆
I'm waiting to see what PR brings with the new year. I hope the tracks are more realistic than they have been in the past and they seek to resolve all matters appropriately, before the show ends, whenever that may be.
RE SD''s story, I hope someone can give a brief translation so that I too can join in the fun. My personal translator (Divya), seems to be missing again.😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loved it SD bhai...
You always rock!
btw, wishing u a very happy new year :)
be happy n keep rocking as always...
God bless!

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