Tumhare hai hum….(tr fic)last part pg18

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ok guys i was trying to sleep and this idea just came to me😆

hope you guys like it too😉

its kinda short also.actually this part is a lil long but i didnt know how to make it shorter so.......

TUMHARE HAI HUM.....

Ranveer???.....ranveer?? tch!!! kaha reh gaya yeh!!!

tia stealthily walked along the deserted corridor....alert for the silghtest noise of anyone awake at that time.she took the back route to the auditorium.ranveer had told her to come there....cause there was no chance of anyone coming there at that time of the night.

she opened the door carefully and peeped inside.looked like there was no one there.

o god!!! yeh camel bhi!!! hamesha late karta hai.tia yaha itna risk lekar aa rahi hai aur yeh to turn up hi nahi karta???tia ko toh use trust hi nahi karna chahiye.pata nahi tia us rajasthani gawar ko itna pyar kaise kar sakti hai.sheesh!!!

tia sat down in a corner,waiting.....getting more upset by the minute.

bas!!!ab tia aur intezar nahi karegi.us camel ko na aana hai....toh na aaye.tia....tia ja rahi hai!!!

she got up to go....still hesitent to leave.she didnt want to....tonite was the last time they could meet like this.tomorrow......suddenly she felt her skin prickling.her hair stood on end.....she could feel her heartbeat begin to rise.

ranveer???

ranveer suddenly pulled her towards himself from the back. he held her tightly,nuzzling her neck.ranve....tias words stuck in her throat.....she could never do anything when ranveer behaved like this with her....when she was so close to him...

ranveer kissed her neck,slowely turning her around.she looked into his eyes and saw......merriment.

tia:RANVEER!!! tumhe time ka koi respect nahi hai kya??? pata hai tia tumhara kab se wait kar rahi hai???pure adhe ghante se.tia ne toh apni beauty sleep bhi spoil kar di TUMHARI wajah se!!!

ranveer:oh ho!!!! zyada mat baniye tia aap yaha sirf 15 min thi.hum to kab se yaha pe hai.apko dekh rahe the....curtain ke piche se.

tia:KYA???tum tia pe spy kar rahe the???

ranveer:nahi tia....

tia:ranveer ...tia ne tumse yeh expect nahi kiya tha.tum...tia ko kyun waise dekh rahe the?tia ko tumse koi baat nahi karni.chodo tia ko.

she tried to pull herself away.ranveer pulled her back.

ranveer:tia....appko pata hai ... stage pe aap kaise lag rahi thi???

tia(still struggling to get out of his grasp)nahi.aur tia doesnt want to know also.so lea.........ranveer dropped his head on tias shoulder and began slowly trailing his hand along her back.

tia shivered.she leaned back unconciously against him and pulled his other hand closer around her waist.

humne dekha.....ek pari ko.....woh window dekh rahi hai tia?

he pointed out to a small window right next to the stage from where moonlight was pouring in.

tia:ha....

ranveer:us chand ki roshni jab aap pe pad rahi thi....to pata hai hume kaisa laga?

tia:turning and looking at him:kya???

ranveer ran his finger over her face. tia.....hume aisa laga jaise aap woh chand hai.....jo aaj humare paas hai.....puri tarahse....aur kal....thoda thoda kar ke aap humse...dur chali jayengi.

tia touched his face.ranveer....tia tumhe kabhi nahi chodegi ...kabhi nahi.tum aisa soch hi kaise sakte ho?

ranveer:tia....

tia:tia jaanthi hai ki tum kya kehne wale ho.aur kisne tumpe dabav dala hai.yeh tia ki life hai.aur tia ko kya karna hai...yeh tia khud decide karegi.ranveer...tum puhleese aise upset mat ho.

ran:tia hum nahi chahte ki humari wajah se aap apne life ko compromise kare.apko sir ki baat manni chahiye.

tia:RANVEER!!! tia ne kaha na?aur papa se baat tia karegi.tumhe iske beech padne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai get it?aur ranveer sach batao.kya tum tia ke begair reh loge???

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Posted: 19 years ago
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awwwwwwwwwwwwww 😳
i dont read too much of tia-ranny fics but this one is soooooooooooo sweet so romantic hats off to you itr really very well written 👏
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itz really good.plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz dont stop 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks 😳

and hey angelgirl16.....how do u have the patience to write your posts in diff diff colours 😆 😆 😆 me toh so lazy i always write in black 😉

whats your name btw??? 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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vitak ab jaldi cont. karna plzzzzzz......
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: vitak

thanks 😳

and hey angelgirl16.....how do u have the patience to write your posts in diff diff colours 😆 😆 😆 me toh so lazy i always write in black 😉

whats your name btw??? 😳

awesome fic..way too romantic..cont soon..

n vinita..i agree wid u!! angelgal..how do u do it😆n yah..whats ur name?

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Originally posted by: sal_remix



awesome fic..way too romantic..cont soon..


n vinita..i agree wid u!! angelgal..how do u do it😆n yah..whats ur name?



I agree too!Awesome fic...cont soon!
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waise maine sabse pehle reply kiya tha but replying again your fic is rockiiiiiiiiiiing its relly very very nice plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon 👏
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ok guys no romantic part in this part next part will have ok??😆

tia nervously smoothened her graduation gown.finally....today was the day!!!

pri(rushing about here and there):tia babe hurry up!!kya kar rahi ho??kitni der se sheeshe ke samne baithe ho!!!

tia:angel....tumhe darr nahi lag raha?

pri:tia.....mere toh pet mein kuch kuch ho raha!!pata nahi....kaisa hoga.....

tia:ha pri!!! aaj...3 saal ke baad ...hum finally pass out kar rahe aur....tia ko bahut bura lag raha!!!ab hum sab alag ho jayenge na pri?pata nahi...tum kaha jaogi...meher kaha jayegi...aur tia...tia....

pri:tia….kya hua? Tum kuch pareshan si lag rahi ho?

Tia:na…nahi babes bas….graduation ko lekar…

Pri(touching tias shoulder):sach? Aur koi reason nahi hai?

Tia:nahi babes.bas yehi.

pri:(sitting near tia) babes!!!hum hamesha ke liye friends rahenge.tum dekna....hum angels hamesha saath rahenge.hmm.tum sad mat ho babes.please!!!
ab hume jaldi ground jaana hoga.bahut late ho gaya hai tia!!!

tia:ha babes chalo!!!
Ab tia tumhe kaise bataye babes.tia graduation ke bare mein tense nahi hai……tia toh……
Tia held her head in her hands.

Pri looked at tia worried.tia theek nahi dikh rahi hai.kal raat bhi…kitni der se soyi.pata nahi….ranveer aur uske beech sab theek toh hoga na?

Tia got up from the bed.pri chalo na.late ho gaya hai.comeon lets go.

they reach the ground. All the students have already assembled….everyone are in their graduation gowns.

Vrinda came up happily to tia.

Vrinda:hey tia!!!!wow!!!tum toh kitni achi lag rahi ho.is voldy gown me bhi!!! Par ….yeh kya?tumhara face itna dull kyun hai?

Ranveer came up from behind.

Ran:tia toh hamesha hi achi lagthi hai.hai na tia?aur vrinda…tia ne abhi tak hume nai dekha na?isliye itni glum hai. 😳

Vrinda(naughtily)ha bhai. Ab toh tia ki khushi tumse hi hai.ab toh hume tia se milne ke liye bhi tumhari permision ki zaroorat padegi.afterall………tum dono saath hi honge na?

The smile slipped from ranveers face.he tried to avoid tia's pleading look.
He looked helplessly at her.tears were gathering in her eyes.😭

Tia(choking up on her tears )vri….da……ti….seat jaa rahi ..hai…..and she hurried away before ranveer could say anything.he bit his lip in frustration.he hated seeing her like this ,hated seeing her so hurt…..hated hurting her so much……

Tia aap kyun nahi samajh ti? Hume acha nahi lag raha hai yeh sab….par hum kuch nahi kar sakte!!!! Humare ma ko…vasu ko…humari zaroorat hai!!! Hum kya kare tia!!! Kya kare!!!😭

Edited by vitak - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its so sweet so emotional sooooooooooooo beautiful u r awesom i loveeeeeeeeee iur fic 👏 its lovellllllllllllllllllllllllllllllly 😳 😳 😳

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