Tumhare hai hum….(tr fic)last part pg18

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kriti

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Posted: 19 years ago

#41

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pata nahi i just wanted to ask ............. 😆

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Parachute.

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Posted: 19 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: funky n crazy
👏 it is very very very very very very very very veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy nice 😉

😆 😆 I agree...ranny left :(...lkin 4wrd 2 the nxt prt 😳

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vitak

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Posted: 19 years ago

#43

TWO YEARS LATER

Aur khana lekar jaana!!! Registrar office mein pura din baithna hoga.!!!

Ranveer tried to start his bike….which wasn't starting.
Ranveer:Haan ma humne le liya hain!!! He shouted back to his mother.
Shit!!!! Is bike ko bhi abhi kharab hona tha!!!
He tried to start it again.it refused to budge.
Ranveer kicked it hard!!!bloody bike!!!!

Ranveers mom watched him from the kitchen,shaking her head.

Maa:kya hua ranveer?sab theek hai na?

Ranveer turned an angry face towards her:KAHA theek hai!!!BIKE start nahi ho raha hai!!!ab chal ke jaana hoga!!! Ab late ho jayenge aur phir who officer bhav khayega!!!
He took his tiffin and left….cursing his luck.

Ranveers mom saw him leave,worry lacing her face.ranveer was becoming totally worked up.Trying to restart his fathers business,running around for the formalities……and on top of that his non existent social life……

She had sensed when he had come back that he hadnt wanted too.had also known WHY he hadnt wanted to……
She knew he missed her terribly.he didn't tell her….but she knew.she wished she could do something about it……but he would never confide in her…….....yeh aaj kal ke bache!!!khud ko bahut strong samajhte he.par itna bhi nahi samajhte…ki dukh batne se who kam hi nahi hota….balki uske sujhav nikalte hai.ab ye hume nahi batayega ki problem kya hai to hum kaise suljhayenge use?

She shook her head in frustration.

Just then
TRING TRING.

Maa:ab itni jaldi kaun aa gaya?
She hurried to the door and opened it.
And got the shock of her life.

Tia stood in the entrance…..winding her hands together nervously.

Tia:hel….hello….aunty!!!kaise hai aap?

Maa stood there…open mouthed for a minute.here she was …thinking about how much this girl was making her son suffer and….here….

Tia looked uncomfortabe.
Tia:aunty……apko…yaad hoga….tia..tia ahuja….main yaha ayithi …ek baar….?

Edited by vitak - 19 years ago

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kriti

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Posted: 19 years ago

#44

wow what a kahaani main twist i love you for this godddddddddd wow...........tia is here 👏

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disha

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Posted: 19 years ago

#45

It was too gd vinitha...kahani bahut hi interesting hoti jaa rahi hai...par mujhe ek cheeze samaj main nahi aaya ki ranny ki mom ne tia ko kyun ranny ke suffer hone ka karan bataya..

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swati

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Posted: 19 years ago

#46

very nice pleazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon asap.

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vitak

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Posted: 19 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: kutie
It was too gd vinitha...kahani bahut hi interesting hoti jaa rahi hai...par mujhe ek cheeze samaj main nahi aaya ki ranny ki mom ne tia ko kyun ranny ke suffer hone ka karan bataya..

areeyyy that is what any mom will think😆 unki psychology waise hi hoti hai na.

afterall she doesnt know even tia missed ranveer she will only think ki TIA ke wajah se UNKA BETA upset hai.so......😆