Tumhare hai hum….(tr fic)last part pg18 - Page 11

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Posted: 19 years ago

As they came back home…..
CONGRATTTSSSSSS!!!!!!
Yuvi and sid were sitting on top of a tree and as tia and ranveer came under it started dropping petals on them.

Tia:yuviiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!

Ashi came up from nowhere and sprayed scented water on them….dancing like a madcap!!!

Ranveer(laughing):ashi!!!! Kya kar rahi hai aap???

Ashi:thakur!!!! Aaj timbo ki shaadi hai!!! PUHLEASEEE mujhe uske faults list out karne ko majboor mat karo!!!!

Tia:hello u punk!!! Scent spraay karne se tia ka kya connection???

Ashi:timbo devi!!!! Ashi ab tumhe jawab dene ke mood main nahi hai!!! So PUHLEASEE can we go inside???

Tia made a face at her and trotted inside,haughtily.
Ranveer shook his head in amusement,and followed her.

Sumit ahuja was standing in the hall……his train was in another half an hour.
He turned when he saw her entering.tia hugged him tightly.
He stroked her head gently.

Sumit:apna khayal rakna beta.khush rehna.he smiled at her and hugged her,tears beginning to form in his eyes.
He wiped them away quickly and embraced ranveer.

Sumit:mujhe kuch bhi kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai.main jaantha hoon…..tum tia ka bahut khayl rakhoge.i hope you have a wonderful life together.

Ranveer nodded his head.
Then it was time for everyone to leave.
Tia and ranveer dropped them at the station and saw them leaving,waving till the train was out of sight.

Ranveer(pulling tia towards him):UFF!!!! Atlast!!!!! Hum akele hai!!!!yeh ek mahina toh torture tha!!! Koi hume akela chodtha hi nahi tha!!!
Tia just smiled.

Ranveer:ok tia ab chaliye.hum apko kahi lejana chahte hai.

Tia:kaha?

Ranveer:ap chaliye toh!!!

After sometime they arrived at a field……it was fully green….with mountains seen in the distance.

Tia:wow ranveer!!!its so beautiful!!!par….yaha kyun laye ho?

Ranveer:(pulling her close by her waist and nuzzling her neck):humara naya ghar.

Tia:kya??

Ranveer:aap dekna tia,hum is business ko ….pehle se bhi succesful banayenge,aur hummara ghar….yaha hoga.this is my dream tia ….and I intend to fulfill it.
There was a quet determination in his tone.

Tia smiled to herself.
Tia:ranveer….mujhe tumpar pura bharosa hai.i know you will do it….we will do it.

Ranveer smiled at her and hugged her closer.
Then suddenly lifted her of her feet.

Tia:RANVEEEEEERRRRR!!! What are you doinggggg????

Ran:tia…ab ap kuch nahi keh sakti.i am your husband now.her rubbed his nose against hers.
And YOU are my wife.so aaj ke baad ap hume kabhi kisi ke liye bhi na nahi karegi.


Taking her towards a huge banyan tree.


Jab hum thakkke hue ghar ayenge toh hume maasage karengi….humare liye khana banayengi…
Tia conked him on his head playfully.

Tia:in your dreams ..playboy!!!

Ranveer continued,as if he hadnt heard her….:aur raat ko……

Tia:tumhe lori sunakar suladegi.

She went into peals of laughter at his irritated face.

Tia:kya???…… What???? …..WHAT?????

She moved back at the expression on his face.

Tia:ranveer no!! khulii jagah hai don't you dare…

She was silenced by his lips on hers.
She tried half heartedly to push him away….and then left it,as he pressed closer to her,kissing her face,her mouth,everywhere he could.
She arched as he bent his head to her neck….sensations she couldn't even name were assaulting her.
He pushed her against the tree and kissed her hungrily,unable to stop.

They didn't notice time passing by….too involved in each other to bother about anything else other than being with each other…….



Tia lifted her head from the diary she was reading and smiled to herself.
Time had passed….yes….but had brought with it the maturity….the well being…and most of all…. The love….that had always been the crux of their relationship…to better heights.


She looked out of the window of her study into the garden.he was playing basketball….with his kids.


The 14 year old boy was a mirror image of his father….tall and a little gangly…just as he had been when she had first seen him….but nonetheless….handsome as sin.girls would drool over him,she thought a little ruefully.


The 16 year old girl screamed as she scored. she was a better player than her brother….everyone knew it…but he would never accept it…he had an ego worse than his father….. poor tanya!!!!
She would be leaving for maurya this year,she thought sadly….time had passed……

Just then she heard the door closing.she didn't have to turn to see who it was….she could recognise everything about him…his every heartbeat.

Ranveer pulled a chair next to her and smiled at her.
Ran:kya dekh rahi thi?
Tia:tumhe……
Ranveer pulled her from the chair into his lap.
Ranveer:did I tell u I love you?
Tia:ha….3 baar….ab phir se mat bolo.
She rested herself against his head as he looked at the diary.


I still don't know how I could have let him go that day..i still don't know why I did what I did!!! My life worked like a clock from that day onwards.i smiled……but for the benefit of others.that suddenly ….a guy should have become so much to me…..taken control of my life….everything that I did was with him in mind……was it foolishness……or what……I still don't know.
All I know is that he was never far from my thoughts.i loved him……and whatever became of me…or him…I would always love him.


But afterall,alls well that ends well. Life has been very kind to me.bahut se aise waqt aye…jaha bahut se compromises karne pade…par it was all worth it na?

Yes !!!! it was worth it.every bit of it.
He closed the diary.


THE END

im sooo sorry if this didnt meet your expectations cause i really didnt know what to rite for this part 😭i just sat and wrote on the spot!!!!

so if its not as good as the other parts im sorry


Edited by vitak - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
waise i dont know if sanganer has any green fields....let alone mountains 😕 but neways...dont look at the goofups 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago

its awesome. 👏
please send me an autograph of urs. u r too good. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
woa-oh!!!!
its was rocking....but now its over 😭 😭
can you please write some more fan-fics like these!!!
Keep it up 👍🏼
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Posted: 19 years ago
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this is for the 3rd last part

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this is for the 2nd last part

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for teh last part i have no other words tp explain its sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo amn nidce
do rite one more
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: tia_5

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this is for the 3rd last part

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this is for the 2nd last part

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for teh last part i have no other words tp explain its sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo amn nidce
do rite one more



😆 😆 Kya re Tia...everythng i wanted to say u did before me!Oh well...its really awesome...i loved every part of it but the end was just too too good...its brlliant...please do write some more!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
read 4-5 parts 2gether as i HATE waitin 😳 😉 😆

really nice 👏

do write another fanfic soon 😳

Divya

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