Tumhare hai hum….(tr fic)last part pg18 - Page 3

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hope this part meets your expectations.
no romantic part but 😆



KNOCK KNOCK

Tia pulled back from ranveer,shocked. She looked at ranveer ….unable to say a word.
The person knocked again.
She hurried to the door and opened it.


Tia:PAPA!!! A…Ap…yaha??? Par kaise?

Sumit:im so sorry beta.maine bahut koshish ki ki main tumhare graduation par aa pau but unfortunaely ere flight late ho gayi.he put his hand around her shoulder.to bato.kaisa tha…tumhara last day?

Tia(smiling,happy that her father has come back):graduation to bahut acha tha papa.im going to miss college sooooo much.

Sumit:(seeing ranveer there):ranveer!!!! Maine tumhe dekha hi nahi!! Tumhe kaise lag raha hai?

ranveer(trying to look cheerful)::sir….bahut acha.jaise tia ne kaha….theres nothing like college.hum yeh sab bahut miss karenge.

Sumit(looking at tia ,and then at ranveer……understood that they were upset.)
Tia…tum neeche jao aur dekho kailash kaka kya bana rahe hai dinner pe.unse kehna kuch special banaye.aaj toh celebrations honi chahiye bhai!!!

Tia nodded her head.she looked at ranveer and gave him a weak smile.then turned and went out.

Sumit looked at ranveer.he sighed and sat down on the bed.

Sumit:toh tum ja rahe ho.

Ranveer hung his head.

Sumit was silent for sometime.then…
Sumit:ranveer……tumhe jaane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai you know.tum mere company mein kaam karo.main tumhare rehne ka bhi intezam karunga.tumhare ma aur behen ko bhi yaha lao.im sure who mana nahi karenge.

Ranveer:nahi sir.baat hamare yaha kaam karne ki nahi hai.humare data ka school ……jiske liye hume itna kuch kiya hai…sab humari zimedari hai.aur……humare aur bhi holdings hai jo humare data ne humare naam liye the …par hum unhe aaj tak handle nahi kar paye kyunki hum college mein the….aur minor the.humare alawa isme aur bahut saare log jude hai. Hum unhe nahi chod sakte sir.

Sumit grimanced.he had known this would be ranveers answer.
Im sorry tia.main ranveer ko nahi rok saka.

Sumit:(keeping his hand on ranveers head):I wish ki mera tumhare jaisa ek beta hota.main nahi jaantha tum mere baare mein kya sochte ho.par you have always been like a son to me. im proud of you ranveer………he took out an envolope from his pocket.yeh lo.

Ranveer:yeh kya hai sir?

Sumit:kuch paise hai.NO!! don't say no.aur yeh hai kal ke train ki 2nd class ac ticket.

Ranveer:sir yeh sab……..

Sumit:please mana mat karo ranveer.agar tumne kabhi bhi mujhe……hume….apnna maana hai……toh mana mat karo.

Ranveer(biting his lip)sir……humare data ke jaane ke bad…humne jo kuch bhi seekha hai….aap hi se….
You have become a father figure for me sir.hum apki umeedo ko kabhi nahi thodenge.
And he bent down and touched his feet.
Sumit embraced him.
Sumit:agar tumhe kabhi bhi …kisi bhi cheez ki zaroorat ho…to im always there…tia….is always there for you.ok?

Ranveer:yes sir.

Sumit(smiling at him):toh phir ab neeche chale?tia intezar kar rahi hogi.dekhte hai kitchen mein kya kar rahi hai.
They laughed and went out together.

Edited by vitak - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#22
hey babes aapko bhaggu ne bohut achhe brains diye hain.bubli really loved it.itz total sufi 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: bubli1234

hey babes aapko bhaggu ne bohut achhe brains diye hain.bubli really loved it.itz total sufi 😉

thanks😆 i donno how serious u r but thanks😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: lamina

r they going to separate 😭 😭



😭 😭 😭 Its sad naa...PLEASE DONT LET THIS HAPPEN!!And also continue faaast 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
#25
awwwww...!!!
I just read four parts together....they were soooo cute!
please continue asap!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#26
pllllz plzzzzzz dunt let ranveer go!!!

nyways.....cont fastttttt@!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Ranveer pushed his way through the crowd in the station,holding tias hand as they tried to move towards the train.


Tia:uff!!! Manners nahi hai kya u idiot!!!she glared at a ruffian type guy who shoved her.
Ranveer held her hand tightly as he glared back at the guy.

Ranveer:humne kaha tha na tia!!!! Hum jaanthe the yaha aisa hi hoga.ab ap bahar kaise jayege?

Tia:ranveer tum chup raho aur apna seat dhundo.tia squash ho rahi hai!!!

Ranveer looked up at the coaches and located his coach.

Ranveer:ha!!aagaya.jaldi andar chadiye.


They got into the train.ranveer heaved down his bag and pushed it under the seat.
Then he sat back and looked at tia.
They just kept looking at each other.
Finally ranveer couldn't take it anymore.he put her arm around her shoulder and pulled her close.
Tia looked up at him and smiled.


Tia:kya soch rahe ho?

Ranveer:ki hum kitne bade fool hai jo ap jaise ladki ko chod kar ja rahe hai?

Tia(softly):flirt kar rahe ho?

Ranveer(his voice breaking):aaj ke baad wo bhi nahi kar payenge na hum?

Tia touched his face.
Tia:no ranveer.sad mat ho.tia nahi chahti ….ki hamari last mulakat…sad ho.

Ranveer took her hand and kissed it.:yeh humari aakhri mulakat nahi hai.dekhna.hum phir se saath honge.

Tia:hmmm.

Just then the the train horn blared.
Ranveer looked as if he could have jumped out the train then never mind what the consequences.

Tia(weakly):tia ko ab utarna chahiye na?

Ranveer just looked at her,unable to say a word.
The train jerked.

Tia(putting all her strength to prevent her face from crumpling):ranveer……apna khayal rakhna.ok?theek se khana.waise main jaanti hoon tum apni maa ke paas ja rahe ho(hitting her head)par still….aur puhleeese waha jake sun mein mat kahdna.kale ho jaoge.aur…aur who tumhara left foot….injured ho gaya tha na….uska bhi……

ranveer:Shhhhhhhh!!!! Ranveer placed a finger on her ips.hum khayal rakhenge.aur aap bhi….paris mein ..apna khayal rakhiyega. Darna mat……ap waha akeli hongi…aise waise logon se dur rahiyega.ok? pata nahi kaise rahengi ap waha akeli.aur……hume mat bhulna…

Tia couldn't stop her tears then.she fell into his arms weeping silently.
he held her tightly……feeling all emotion draining out.he kissed her head and stroked her hair.

The train started moving.
Tia looked up at ranveer.she slowly inched closer and touched his lips gently.


Tia(softly):take care ranveer.she moved back from him….ranveer didn't want to let her go.she could see it in his eyes.she gave him a watery smile and got up.
They walked to the door.ranveer helped tia slowly get off the train.
She jumped out and almost fell…as the train was moving.
The train picked up speed.ranveer stood in the door and watched her,feeling all his energy draining out of him.

Tia just stood there,watching the train move away,unaware of the crowd pushing her,shoving her…..
She stood there till the train was out of sight.then made her way bak to her car.




I still don't know how I could have let him go that day..i still don't know why I did what I did!!! My life worked like a clock from that day onwards.i smiled……but for the benefit of others.that suddenly ….a guy should have become so much to me…..taken control of my life….everything that I did was with him in mind……was it foolishness……or what……I still don't know.
All I know is that he was never far from my thoughts.i loved him……and whatever became of me…or him…I would always love him.

Edited by vitak - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#28
read the 2 parts 2gether
n its
really nice Vinita 👏

but, i wish Ranny had not gone 😭 😭

take a leap or sumthin 😉

Continue soon

Divya
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Posted: 19 years ago
#29
oomg!!!!!!!!!u r tooooooo goooooooood 😳

plzzzzz cont. fasttttt

plzzzzz ranveer ko wapas ti aki life mein lana plzzz
Edited by mesocool - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#30
it was too gd vinitha....
but i did not understood the last para..is it the flash back..

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