Barsaat FANFIC! LAST PART ADDED!!!!!! - Page 2

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Im dying to read it now!!! If you have time please can you post it now!!! 😃 Pretty please.. with a cherry on top!!! And icing sugar!!! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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please continue soon, Jai will b so jelous of the "college frnd"
well done 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART TWO!!!

Bani and Rahul are in the party... Then they see Jai coming with Roshni down the stairs... Some time ago I was the one who walked down the stairs with Jai...Quite fast he moved to Roshni, he doesn't care about my feeling even a bit!Jai sees Bani and is shocked! "Hi Jai!" "Hi Rahul..." There is some silence.... "I am today in this party with my college friend" He whispers to Jai "Ex girlfriend, Bani." Suhana looks happy, Now my and mine husbands plan will work to get Jai and Bani together!!!! The media people come to ask Bani "Aap kyon aaj Jai Walia ke saat nahin hai?" "Aapka Rahulse kya rishta hai??" "I heard rumour that you leaved the house, is it true?" Bani is confused..... Rahul takes the mike "Yes, ms.Bani Dikshit has leaved Jai for ever, how can she live with such an selfish man..." The media are shocked to hear this news... Bani doesn't know what to do.Jai gets angry and goes to garden.Jigyasa is angry Whenever i think that she is out of our lives, she always comes back! Kab chali jayeegi woh humari zindagi se???Kab?

Garden:

Jai is sitting in a sofa Kyon Bani ne mujhe aisa kiya, she runned straight to Rahul, she doesn't know that I love her.....OMG! Yeh maine kya kahaa? He sees Roshni coming towards him... "You remeber your promise, if you pretend to be in love with me I won't tell our RAAZ to anyone..." "Haan...I remember Roshni, very well..." Then Roshni gives Jai a kiss on his cheek... Jai goes away from Roshni! "I hate you!" Says Jai.Jai keeps thinking about the parties when he and Bani were together... The song KYON KI ITNA PYAAR....Plays on the background....

Party:

It is a very nice party, everyone keep dancing... Rahul asks Suhana come near him "Ab hamein is plan ka duusra step leena hoga. You go and put vodka in Jai's drink ok?" "Haan, main zaroor apne bhabhi Baniko aur Jai ko milwaker hi rahoongi...

Jai is drinking some juice, he keeps on thinking about Bani. Bani keeps on thinking about Jai Kyon mujhe Jai ka chinta ho raha hai. He will be just fine without me.... Soon Jai is drunk and screams "Bani!I need you!!!You cannot leave me!" Bani runs towards him and hugs him, "Main kahiin bhi nahin jaaoongi she takes Jai to his room, and takes Jai's sleepwear from the cupboard, but Jai falls asleep.....Kyon?Why did i bring Jai here, I am not living here anymore, I don't have any relations to him... Jai says in his dreams "Bani, Bani..."

END OF PART TWO!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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WOW
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SUPerbbb
that was sooo good! u should really continue cant wait to read the next PARTSS 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
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greattttt u have 2 continue ASAP plzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I will continue TOMRROW AROUND 3PM!!!!!SORRY I AM BUSY!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Don'y worry its alright!! I can wait that long.. i think!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I will continue TOMRROW AROUND 3PM!!!!!SORRY I AM BUSY!!! The next part will be EXTRA long...... For the time you wait you can also read my preuvios kasamh se FAN-FICTION... It has already ended with around 30 parts!!!!If u wanna read, but I will post the next part tomorrow 3pm!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I will continue TOMRROW AROUND 3PM!!!!!SORRY I AM BUSY!!! The next part will be EXTRA long...... For the time you wait you can also read my preuvios kasamh se FAN-FICTION... It has already ended with around 30 parts!!!!If u wanna read, but I will post the next part tomorrow 3pm!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Its wonderful.I am eagerly waiting for next one. 😊

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