Barsaat FANFIC! LAST PART ADDED!!!!!!

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PART ONE:

It is 9 o'clock!!!It is raining, and Bani is watching out the window, she remembers the day when she moved from mt.Abu to Mumbai! It was too raining, Pia,Rano and I were desperately finding a place to live, and we found Jai Walia! He was so nice to let us stay in his house...But today when it is again raining...He has asked me to leave this house, because now even mausi will not be around anymore.So why would I stay here anymore?

Jai comes to the room and asks Bani "Kya tumne packing kar diya hai?" Bani looks sad "Haan..." Then she takes her mangalsutra off and gives it to Jai. "Main aapko talaak ke paper jaldi bichvaduunga...." Then Jai remembers their marriage. It was such a big deceit! But still how do I remember all the time my wedding, why do I still care about Bani? Then Jai says to Bani " Rukjao! Tum kahi bhi mat jao....?" "Kyon?" Jai doesn't even know why did he say this... Then the song KYON KI ITNA PYAAR TUMKO KARTE HAIN HUM......Plays in the background.

Outside Walia house:

Bani is waiting for the bus, then her umbrella gets broken.... She is all vet! Kya karoon, kya mein mr.Walia ke ghar jaa kar ek umbrella lekar aaun?She decides to buy a umbrella from somewhere later... Many hours pass, but no bus is coming, I am now leaving this city alone, leaving Rano and Pia in Pushkar's home. I will miss my sisters...She is getting cold, and then she sees a car coming, the light of the car makes her eyes open very big! The car stops in front of Bani, Bani cannot see who is in the car, he/she opens little bit the car's window "Kya tumhe lift chahiye?" Bani is not sure what to do, it would not be a good thing to sit in someone's car so late, but there isn't even a single bus for few hours.... "Yes thank you."

Car:

"Hello, my name is Rahul, Bani sees him and is shocked! "It is really you, my cousin!" Rahul stops the car, "Why are you so late walking alone in the streets...?" Bani is silent. "Excuse me Bani behan!" "Hmm....I was leaving for mt.Abu but there was no bus coming..." "Where are my two other sisters, Rano and Pia?" Then Bani decides to tell him everything about her life in Mumbai... It is silent, Rahul is thinking about Bani's story in Mumbai.... "Tum mere ghar mein raho, woh ghar bhi mujhe tumhari baap ne diya hai, so it is your home too... Kya should I stay in Rahul's house...Maybe it will be too difficuilt for him... "Ok you decided! You are going to stay in mine house!" Rahul starts the car... The rain goes just when they reach Rahul's home...

Rahul home:

Bani is looking aruond the lobby, she sees a big picture of her dad and she with her sisters and Rahul in the wall... Rahul to mera bhai jaisa hai, aur mein sooch ti rahi ke Mumbai jaakar woh humein bhoola chuka tha. But he still remembers us! Then one cute little boy runs down the stairs Bani screams "Be careful, or you will fall!" The boy falls in Bani's lap! The boy screams "aunty Bani!!! Main hoon aapka bada bhai ka beta, Akshay..." Bani hugs him and Rahul is happy seeing this. Then some woman runs from the stairs "Akshay rukjao, you have to drink this milk before you go to sleep!" Then she sees Bani "Bhabhi! What a pleasent surprise!!" Then Rahul says to Bani "Kal main Jai Waliaka party mein ja raha hoon, tumbhi chaloge Bani behan, mera, mera patni Suhana aur Akshay ke saat???" Bani is confused... Why does my heart feel that I should go to meet Jai. Why is my heart desperate to meet him??? "Ok, yes! I will go.....

END OF PART ONE!!!!You liked it???

Edited by Kritika. - 19 years ago

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow wow wow. plz cont soon. plz plz plz 👏 👏 👏
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omg sooooooooooo kooll itz greatttt do continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nyc one!
i wonder when bani goes with rahul 2 da party n j see's this,
oooh he is gonna b MR JEALOUS!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Yes it's very nice. Plz continue!
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PROMO FOR TOMORROW:

Jai is shocked seeing Bani in his party...The song Kyon ki itna pyaar....Plays on the backgound...Then Bani sees Roshni, who kisses Jai on his cheek. Rahul says to Jai that Bani is his college girlfriend! Jai is jealous.......
Kya hooga Bani aur Jaika pyaar ko, jab Bani Roshniko deekhengi Jai ke saat??? Kya Jai Bani ko waapas ghar mein bulwaalega???
Edited by Kritika. - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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tht was awesome.....plzzz continue......soon👏

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Posted: 19 years ago
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I will write next part tomorrow!!!!!!
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wow cool 😆 😆 cant wait for next part 👏 👏 👏
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I will write tomorrow at maybe 3pm

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