Barsaat FANFIC! LAST PART ADDED!!!!!! - Page 4

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Posted: 19 years ago
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PROMO!!!!

Bani is in Pushkar's house, worrying for Pia... Then they get a call from someone!! "You are all sad for Pia's dissapearance?" Bani shouts "Kya tum jaante ho meri behen kahaan hai?" "mr'Jai Walia ke kabze mein, he kidnapped Pia!!!" BANI IS SHOCKED...

Kya Jai aisa kar sakta hai??? Agar nahin to kaun kar sakta hai...How will Bani react to this calll!!!

YOU WILL COME TO KNOW SOON!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice part krithka
i don't think jai could kidnap pia
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART FOUR:

Pushkar is worried about Pia... "Pushkar jiju, please aap Pia didi ka chinta nahin kijiye, I am sure that she is fine!" "Hope you are right Rano." Then Bani comes… "Pia!Pia ka kuch pata chala?" "Abhi tak to nahin di…" Then they get a call Bani answers it. "You are all sad for Pia's dissapearance?" Bani shouts "Kya tum jaante ho meri behen kahaan hai?" "mr'Jai Walia ke kabze mein, he kidnapped Pia!!!" Bani is shocked!!!

Walia house dining-room:

Jai is eating breakfast, everyone keep silent... Dadi and Aditya are very unhappy that the place near Jai is empty. It is the place where Bani used to sit… "Jai beta, agar tumhara mausi vaapas aa gayi to hum kya kahenge unko. Bani ghar chood kar chali gayi? But she will need to know the reason..." "Dadi, thank you for be conserned, but I will take care about it!" Dadi is sad… "Jai beta, tumhe pata hai tum Bani se pyaar karte ho, but why?Why don't you tell her everything…" Jigyasa gives a evil smile "Jai bhaiya, please don't mind but I called Roshni for breakfast." Then the villain Roshni enters, she sits near Jai, in Bani's place.
Some old house:
It is Pia! There is put some paper on her mouth, and her hands and legs are tied on a chair… "Who is this, who kidnapeed me! And why? Everything at home think that I leaved the house because I hate my bhabhi, but I didn't!!!" She sees a man coming, she can only see his shadow… "Yeh kaun ho sakta hai, aur kyon who meri taraf aa raha hai???"

Walia house:

Jai is lying on his bed, and thinking about Bani… "Why do I miss you, why do I need you???Why am I thinking about you all the time. You are happier with Rahul than with me, I only gave you sorrow…Treated you so badly…"The song KYON KI ITNA….plays in the background…
Someone knocks the door… Jai opens it and is shocked to see Bani!!! Bani shouts "Tumne Pia ko kahaan chupaya hai???"

END OF PART FOUR!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART FIVE:

Jai is shocked!!! "Kya, I don't know where Pia is. And I don't even care!!! Kya Jai sach keh raha hai...? Yes I think so, he can never kidnap Pia, as far as I know him."Pia has been kidnapped!She is gone from the morning!" Jai is shocked! "And you suspected me?" "No, I didn't but someone called me and said that you are the kidnapper..." Jigyasa and Ranveer are angry to see Bani in their house.

Ranveer room:

Jigyasa says to her son "Now, hope that Jai abd Bani Don't come to know about our plan...We kidnapped Pia, and now we are making Jai the kidnapper, he starts hating Bani when she accuses him for her sisters kidnapping... Bani and Jai are standing still on the door! Jai slaps Jigyasa! "I didn't believe that you would stoop so low...Get out of my house, and take your son too!" Jigyasa starts apologising for her mistake, Bani is very hurt...Jai shots "Get out from this house!!!But before you go tell me where is Pia!" Raveer tells Jai...

The old house:

Jai frees Pia, she runs to Bani... "Bani didi you saved me!!!" Jai is leaving but Bani stops him... "Shukriya, without your help we couldn't free Pia..."
Please Jai, aap mat jaiye... I need you... O my God! Yeh maine kyon kaha???? Jai is just going to say something, but then remembers Rahul saying that Bani is his ex girlfriend. And soon his girlfriend... I should let Bani be with Rahul, she is very happy with him.Jai leaves then...

Pushkar house:

Pia comes with Bani. Rano is very happy seeing them. Pushar is just going to hug Pia. But she goes far away from Pushkar. Tum mujhse pyaar nahin kar sakte, you were with bhabhi when I needed you. You are in bhabhi's side...And I can't live this kind of life. She runs to her room, Bani and everyone look sad, and Pushar insaulted...

END OF PART FIVE!!!!
Edited by Kritika. - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was fab Kritika!! can't wait for the next part!! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART SIX:

Jai is sitting on the terrace... He is thinking about Bani. Why am I even concerned how is she doing... She is with Rahul, and very happy. He is just going from the terrace and sees Jigyasa... "Jai bhaiya, now when even Bani has moved on eith her life and choosed Rahul for her lifepartner. You should too think about getting married,and maybe the woman is somewhere near you..." Then we see Roshni coming. Hope Jai bhaiya marries Roshni, she is much better than Bani. After their marriage Bani won't come back, FOR SURE!"Jigyasa whispers to Jai, what do you think about Roshni..." Kya mujhe Bani ko bhulana hoga? Maybe I should move on...But getting married?And to Roshni! Jai says to Jigyasa "I will think about the offer..." After Jai goes Jigyasa says to Roshni "I am sure Jai will marry you, he said that he will think about it. And it most probhably means that he is going to agree.." They give a hi5! Bani sees this and is sad...

Jai room:

Jai is thinking about Jigyasa's offer...Main kya karoon? But I don't love Roshni dammit! I love Bani! Bani knocks in his door. "Mr.Walia, may I come in.." Jai is shocked to hear Bani's voice. "Yes...Come." Bani comes and looks quite scared.. "Mr.Walia I came to give this, divorce papers..I have sign it already, you need to just sign it..I will come tomorrow to take the paper."Jai is very unhappy, Shaiyed yeh tiik hai, I should release Bani. I shouldn't keep her as my wife when she doesn't love me, she loves Rahul. He says "Yes I will sign it!"

Rahul house:

Rahul and Suhana are talking... "I think we should tell Jai that Bani is my cousin...Maybe he loves Bani, but is scared to say anything because of me. He thinks that I am Bani's boyfriend..." "Haan Rahul, tum thiik keh rahe ho."Then they see Bani coming, they both stop talking, Bani is suspicious.

Pushkar home:

Pia is sleeping on her bed, Pushkar comes looking tired, "I need a good sleep." Pia takes Pushkar's pellow, and puts it in to the sofa. "Main tumhare saat nahin sooungi! You can go to sleep with your bhabhi because you are always in her side if we fight! Go!" Pushkar slaps Pia, "Maine soocha nahin tha he tum itne giri hue ho, apne pati se is tara baat kar ti ho!" Get out of my house!!!" Pia is shocked! "Yes, I will go.I will marry a millionaire who takes good care of me. Fulfills my every desire!But I will leave tomorrow!!" Pushar goes to sleep on the couch.

Rano room:

Rano is reading some book, because she has exams tomorrow... Someone knocks the door.. She opens it and sees Sahil. "What are you doing in my room at this hour!You are always after me!" "Excuse me madam. I came to take some candles because my room's lamp is broken!!!" Rano is embarrased...Rano is just trying to push him out from her room, and her neclace gets sticked on his shirt button...They go very near each other to try to take neclace off... Jigyasa has followed Sahil to Pushkar's house...She is shocked that he is going in Rano's room at this hour!Jigyasa see them hugging!!!

END OF PART SIX!!!NEXT PART WILL COME IN TWO DAYS!!!
Edited by Kritika. - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great part cant wait for the next one 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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continue soon...wanna know wat will happen between bani and jai
Edited by sweetu144 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 that was fab!!!!!



please cont soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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PART SEVEN:

Pushar wakes up, and is watching if Pia is somewhere there. Oh shit! Main to bhoola chuka ke Pia ghar chood kar jaa raha hai.He opens thee cupboard and sees that all Pia's things are gone!!! Someone knocks the door, Pushkar goes and opens the door. It is Bani who is searching for Pia. "Pia kahaan hai, mujhe usse kuch baat thi.." Pushkar looks sad, "She leaved this house, she took all her things and went!" Bani is shocked! "Leykin kyon?" Pushar doesn't say anything and Bani is sure that Pia has done something bad. Bani goes away...

Jigyasa room:

Jigyasa is thinking what she should do to stop Sahil to get closer to Rano. "Yesturday he only tried to take her neclace out from his button, but later maybe they......NO!" Jigyasa getting iritated of thinking that Sahil and Rano fall in love...

College, classroom:

Rano and Sahil are doing their exams...Soon they give their test papers to the teacher. "Students, now you will have a break!" Rano goes and starts talking with her friends, Sahil is looking at her... "Sahil, why are you looking at me!" "Because...Because..." "Hahaha such a fool!" Rano smiles, and her friends start laughing... Then one sexy woman walks to the classroom and stops near Sahil. "Hi cutie pie!" Sahil makes his one eyebrow go up. "Hi Kusum..." Kusum gives Sahil a kiss on his cheek. Rano is very jealous...

Walia house:

Bani is standing in livingroom. Then she sees Jai walking down the stair, and for a while she starts rembering her wedding.Who does my wedding come always in my mind! Jai doesn't care about me, he doesn't love me...Jai is looking confused, "Maine divorce ka paper abhi tak sign nahin kiya, wait I will bring my pen!" Bani keeps on waiting for him. Finally he comes! He starts singning the paper, his hands are shaking... But finally he has signed the paper. Jai is remebering his wedding... The song KYON KI ITNA PYAAR...Plays on the background.Bani takes the paper and goes...Aditya and dadi are looking at Jai and Bani sadly. They are doing a big mistake!

Taxi:

Bani is sitting in the taxi, she is crying,Why does this divorce make me sad???WHY?She puts the divorce paper in her bag... The taxi stops soon after this. The driver has a gun!!! "Leave your bag here and run from here!And don't dare to inform the police!" The driver puts the gun near Bani's ear, "Now go or I will kill you." Bani is scared, she goes... She runs far away from the taxi. I have robbed now the woman who came from the Walia house!!! I am going to be a millionaire.Then he sees that there are only 3 thousand rs. And a divorce Paper!!!

Some street:

Bani is running...Oh no! Now the divorce papers are with the driver...Will Jai believe me that some taxi driver stole the paper... She sees some car coming towards her. The car is dangerously near her. Then the hits her!!! The one who drived the car goes away with the car... Bani is bleeding.

Rahul house:

Suhana and Rahul are very concerned about Bani. She went early morning and hasn't come yet... "Why did she go to Jai Walia's house??Why hasn't she come yet.." "Rahul, we should go to Jai Walia's house and find out if Bani is there, and we should tell the truth about your and Bani's relationship!" They are going to Walia house!

END OF PART SEVEN!!!!!!

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