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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aish ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ Awesome dear ๐Ÿค—
All poetry's are mindblowing and touching dear ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
So suitable for our Dakshna ๐Ÿ˜› Each one expressed so well ๐Ÿ‘ Thank u dear a big hug for u ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

Ps: Aish Dance of hearts just mention kiya tha poetry dala nahi tha FF main
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan

Aish ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ Awesome dear ๐Ÿค—

All poetry's are mindblowing and touching dear ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
So suitable for our Dakshna ๐Ÿ˜› Each one expressed so well ๐Ÿ‘ Thank u dear a big hug for u ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

Ps: Aish Dance of hearts just mention kiya tha poetry dala nahi tha FF main

rupu thnx darlin...beeeg hug 4 u 2๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—...nd thnku 4 d idea [u kno which ideaTongue]...
ha re i kno...i only mentiond t...us FF ke beech me hi likha tha vaise mene "Dance f hearts"...likhte likhte kuch aur hi ho gaya, din match d FF ka pace, isliye uske beech me nahi lagayaTongue...but its all Dakshna...100% ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: LadyMystique

This is so beautiful aish๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ just like dakshna๐Ÿ˜Š

mysti thanx sweethrt๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—...nd thnku 4 prompting me๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 13 years ago
#14
this one s for my KP dakshu๐Ÿค— who went fida over Naina ke naina๐Ÿ˜†
The Angel...

I was no hermit

But life was plain

Till I met this angel

Runaway, on a train

She came at me

Out of the blue

In every colour, every hue

A dash of joy, a zap of love

Everything so bright, so true

And the eyes,

the lovely eyes

Which held the depth

Of all the seas

Oceans, wide, of love for me

I drowned in them and never rose

Could love be sweeter

It's me she chose

The world was new

And I, one of the chosen few

'Cos not every soul

Gets to fall for an angel so

And fewer still who get the angel

To love them back too...

ps : i might edit this one๐Ÿ˜›...

Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@aish

The angel!!!!.๐Ÿ˜..superb yaar.๐Ÿ‘.U have captured dakshu ke exact feelings๐Ÿ˜›..I felt as if reading dakhsu ka dil.โค๏ธ.wah wah..๐Ÿ‘...I am love in it..๐Ÿค— wow..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ..gr8 job... u are really blessed to get such a talent..I am totally fida over "this angel๐Ÿ˜›".. and thanks for making my sunday morning special
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: lucky.m

@aish


The angel!!!!.๐Ÿ˜..superb yaar.๐Ÿ‘.U have captured dakshu ke exact feelings๐Ÿ˜›..I felt as if reading dakhsu ka dil.โค๏ธ.wah wah..๐Ÿ‘...I am love in it..๐Ÿค— wow..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ..gr8 job... u are really blessed to get such a talent..I am totally fida over "this angel๐Ÿ˜›".. and thanks for making my sunday morning special


Ditto ditto from me too ๐Ÿ˜‰ Simply awesome ๐Ÿ‘ Thanks for making my morning also so special dear buddy๐Ÿ˜ƒ... Apne pyaare KP Dakshu ke dil ke feeling ๐Ÿ˜ This also goes to my list u know where ๐Ÿ˜‰ Loved it dear ๐Ÿ‘ Thank u Thank u ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: lucky.m

@aish


The angel!!!!.๐Ÿ˜..superb yaar.๐Ÿ‘.U have captured dakshu ke exact feelings๐Ÿ˜›..I felt as if reading dakhsu ka dil.โค๏ธ.wah wah..๐Ÿ‘...I am love in it..๐Ÿค— wow..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ..gr8 job... u are really blessed to get such a talent..I am totally fida over "this angel๐Ÿ˜›".. and thanks for making my sunday morning special

whoa...meri momma sunegi to behosh ho jayegi...me nd an angel๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
thnx sweetu๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: DakshnaFan


Ditto ditto from me too ๐Ÿ˜‰ Simply awesome ๐Ÿ‘ Thanks for making my morning also so special dear buddy๐Ÿ˜ƒ... Apne pyaare KP Dakshu ke dil ke feeling ๐Ÿ˜ This also goes to my list u know where ๐Ÿ˜‰ Loved it dear ๐Ÿ‘ Thank u Thank u ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

le ek baddda sa bear hug tere liye bhi๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค— knowin dis one 2 made t 2 ur list made my day๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š...thnx jaanu๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—
Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetaish

this one s for my KP dakshu๐Ÿค— who went fida over Naina ke naina๐Ÿ˜†
The Angel...

I was no hermit

But life was plain

Till I met this angel

Runaway, on a train

She came at me

Out of the blue

In every colour, every hue

A dash of joy, a zap of love

Everything so bright, so true

And the eyes,

the lovely eyes

Which held the depth

Of all the seas

Oceans, wide, of love for me

I drowned in them and never rose

Could love be sweeter

It's me she chose

The world was new

And I, one of the chosen few

'Cos not every soul

Gets to fall for an angel so

And fewer still who get the angel

To love them back too...

ps : i might edit this one๐Ÿ˜›...

WOW!๐Ÿ‘ What a beauty aish!!!!!!! so romantic! maybe daksh actually felt that way when he saw Naina for the first time in the train but we all now how stubborn he was๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† he didnt wanna admit it i guess๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: LadyMystique

WOW!๐Ÿ‘ What a beauty aish!!!!!!! so romantic! maybe daksh actually felt that way when he saw Naina for the first time in the train but we all now how stubborn he was๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† he didnt wanna admit it i guess๐Ÿ˜›

mysti thnx yar๐Ÿค—...mujhe bhi wahi laga tha...nd Naina IS Dakshu ki angel๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
vaise din they show t onc ki he rememberd d train wala scn, how they 1st met...

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