poetic licence...no.10, page 6...(unnamed)

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helo my darlins🤗...i'm assemblin all the poems i'v dedicated 2 dakshna here😊😊😊...nd yea, iske age bhi as usual ek bada sa disclaimer bhi dal rahi hu, bad me mat kehna ki warn nahi kiya😛
😆 Disclaimer 😆
ek : this post s stil in baby stages, so me edit karti rahungi beech me, includin d disclaimer [lo me phir se keh rahi hu; i'm givin u fair warning so i'll duck d joote as n wen dey come😛]
do : kuch rothlu bhi honge, d ones i'v written wen Naina was put through emo wrenches...
teen : literatur bug mujhe bahot pehle kat gaya tha, lekin tum becharo ko totur karne ka plan bas adha hi mera hai, baki kuch khas logo ki...umm, hidayat he😆😆😆 [names wil b disclosd nly via PMs btw😉]
ok so these r the ones i've put up so far...
note : i've hyprlinkd d titles yahi pe...😊😊😊
2. together...
5. the angel...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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note : dis one s defo rothlu😆😆😆...written wen d psycho-drugging-dakshu drama ws goin on...

I stopped feeling when my heart was trampled

Once, twice, then I was wise

Was I dying inside?

I let it be

Lived the way it now was to me

Saw only what I ought to see

Nothing was rosy

As it was before

Just black and white

No joy in joy

And then you came

Made me feel again

You made me laugh

You made me smile

Made me yours,

I thought you mine

You took my hand and led me home

Gave me your love and oh

My love, but that

Was my world, my heart, my home

Home it isn't anymore

I'm lost, I'm lost again

Out here in this unfeeling rain

And all my dreams are leached away

Washed away; no colour, no life

What have you done to me

Oh, why...

ps : i'll rearrang if u guys hav objectns 2 rothlu ones put first😊

pps : dis one was part f the emo FF :
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/sapnon-se-bhare-naina/1789887/ff-dakshna-reunion-versn-2-0
Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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dakshna 4ever🤗...dis one s very spl 2 me😊

Together...

It matters not where we meet

Nor does the weather beat

Heat or smoke or concrete

Ice or rain or sleet

It matters not, if we are broke

So long as we both know

You're here for me, I'm here for you

No matter who spoke

No empty words or promises

No staring at the lake

I'd rather you were here with me

Every time I wake

See I don't need a fairytale

A castle, a fancy dome

That blows off in a mighty gale,

Just this little home

'Cos I have seen where rainbows end

And trees that never bend

But this life is ours to tend

Together till the end

So stay with me

We'll make it through

All that for life is due

'Cos it's all real and true

Together, me and you...

Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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What I feel for you...

What I feel for you,

Is not like a change of seasons

Nor do I need a million, million reasons;

But it's not written in crimson,

It's soft, pure and white...

Unlike anything under the sun,

This gentle, shining light...

Just don't say don't look, don't see

Don't ask me to never feel...

For this is something precious,

From which I wouldn't part...

To do so would surely be

Treason to my heart;

So let me say in black and white,

'Cos this does feel so right:

I love you...

Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetaish

What I feel for you...

What I feel for you,

Is not like a change of seasons

Nor do I need a million, million reasons;

But it's not written in crimson,

It's soft, pure and white...

Unlike anything under the sun,

This gentle, shining light...

Just don't say don't look, don't see

Don't ask me to never feel...

For this is something precious,

From which I wouldn't part...

To do so would surely be

Treason to my heart;

So let me say in black and white,

'Cos this does feel so right:

I love you...



Wow..aish..awesome..👏👏 👏

@ blue; I really loved those lines..👍🏼...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: lucky.m



Wow..aish..awesome..👏👏 👏

@ blue; I really loved those lines..👍🏼...

thnku darlin🤗...rothlu ko neeche utarna hai kya...wadyathink...?
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The Dance of hearts

Ah, love don't think of being

Even a minute apart

Come hither, I'll let you have

a peek into my heart

You seem to be impervious

To all of my charms

But darling, I'm lost to all

When you are in my arms

Come closer, let me drown in them

The beauty of your eyes

The ocean of love from which

I wouldn't ever rise

Come closer still, and you can hear

Every breath I take

Each one with your name to it

Every day I wake

She smiles at that,

Says look at me

And tell me who is free

You may think it's me

But no,

Nor do I want to be

For I'm bound to every whisper

Every word of yours

Every smile that's in your heart,

And every single tear

I am bound

To every breath of yours

Each beat of your heart

Which you owe to me

Why, because long back

I lost mine to you

And yours is all that's left of me

Because you're mine

And I'm yours

And will forever be...

Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetaish

The Dance of hearts

Ah, love don't think of being

Even a minute apart

Come hither, I'll let you have

a peek into my heart

You seem to be impervious

To all of my charms

But darling, I'm lost to all

When you are in my arms

Come closer, let me drown in them

The beauty of your eyes

The ocean of love from which

I wouldn't ever rise

Come closer still, and you can hear

Every breath I take

Each one with your name to it

Every day I wake

She smiles at that,

Says look at me

And tell me who is free

You may think it's me

But no,

Nor do I want to be

For I'm bound to every whisper

Every word of yours

Every smile that's in your heart,

And every single tear

I am bound

To every breath of yours

Each beat of your heart

Which you owe to me

Why, because long back

I lost mine to you

And yours is all that's left of me

Because you're mine

And I'm yours

And will forever be...

This is so beautiful aish👏👏👏 just like dakshna😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ aish

OMG.😛..Dance of hrts.❤️.its so beautiful and touching.👏.. abig hug for u meri jaan🤗🤗..kya poetry hain!!👏

BTW..did u post THIS doh in any of ur emo ff..?😲
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: lucky.m

@ aish


OMG.😛..Dance of hrts.❤️.its so beautiful and touching.👏.. abig hug for u meri jaan🤗🤗..kya poetry hain!!👏

BTW..did u post THIS doh in any of ur emo ff..?😲

um, nahi...but i mentiond t...remember wo functn me jo bheja tha dono ko FF me...[vakil ki flight crash land wali😉], usme😊...lemme c...uska link neeche dal dungi😊
nd thnku😊...badda sa hug 4 u 2🤗🤗🤗
ok mil gaya😊...here it is ...
ps : i've edited the link dear...seedhe usi post pe ayege ab😊😊😊...
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