poetic licence...no.10, page 6...(unnamed) - Page 4

Originally posted by: walquest2000

Your poems, are like the lifting of the mist after a cold night in winter, when the hills are bathed in the white mist, and as the sun warms the surface, the mist clears, to shed light on a green luxurious mountain.

Hope the one who will ultimately share your life, will be worthy of your noble thoughts. I hope for you the best.

Originally posted by: sweetaish

so we all kno Dakshu bechara cant resist Naina in anything right😆...this s 4 our bechara KP🤗, for each and every instance that he melts to her charms😊...

That smile of yours...

Oh, don't turn that smile on me

I'll melt...

I'll melt; I'm not made of stone

Ah, but who could resist you

Not when you smile

And those eyes of yours

Light up so, least of all

And here I fall for you

All over again

Helpless, before your airy charm

And that laughter, a soothing balm

Anything, yes anything I'd do

To keep you from all harm

No, its not for you, more for me

Helpless though I am

I'm selfish too

For you are precious to me

So precious, so...

Because you see

It's that smile of yours

that keeps my heart beating so...

This is what happens to me when dakshu gives us his trademark cute KP smile!😆😆😆😆

Originally posted by: LadyMystique

This is what happens to me when dakshu gives us his trademark cute KP smile!😆😆😆😆

well done aish! 👏👏👏👏👏 bravo!!!!!🤗

@ aish

hey guys🤗🤗🤗some genius on this forum once said, "sapno se bhare Naina, lekin Daksh ke"😍...i donno if i've done justice to that, but i did give it a try😊...

OHK..MAJOR ANNOUNCEMENT😉...

DIS ONE S FOR BIRTHDAY BABY RUPU...LUV U🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

The Dreamer...

I've seen you angry

Seen you sad

And I'm sure my antics

Have driven you mad

But you, with your serious attire

Stern eyes,

scary 'cos you have no vice

go fool someone else

Not me, for I've seen you smile

I've seen you look at me

with all that love in your eyes

And all your thoughts sweet and wise

It's your eyes that really have me

Eyes that see right through me

Down to my soul

Eyes that are my reason to be

Eyes of the dreamer

My dreamer...

ps : i'm seriously tempted to edit this one too...not sure if it turnd out the right way😛

Originally posted by: lucky.m

@ aish

As usual awesome dear.👍🏼.loved it.👏.I agree with mysti...That smile of urs dakshu😍..I love it😆

🤗wow aish👏

Originally posted by: lucky.m

...dance of hrts made my hr8 dance with joy..and ...and that smiles of urs brought lots of smiles on my face...😃

Aish superb as usual 👏 and thanks buddy for dedicating such a lovely poem... U and Lucky made my day today...