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DakshnaFan

@DakshnaFan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Aish 👏 👏 👏 Awesome dear 🤗

All poetry's are mindblowing and touching dear 👏 🤗🤗

So suitable for our Dakshna 😛 Each one expressed so well 👏 Thank u dear a big hug for u 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Ps: Aish Dance of hearts just mention kiya tha poetry dala nahi tha FF main

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan
Aish 👏 👏 👏 Awesome dear 🤗
All poetry's are mindblowing and touching dear 👏 🤗🤗
So suitable for our Dakshna 😛 Each one expressed so well 👏 Thank u dear a big hug for u 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Ps: Aish Dance of hearts just mention kiya tha poetry dala nahi tha FF main

rupu thnx darlin...beeeg hug 4 u 2🤗🤗🤗...nd thnku 4 d idea [u kno which idea]...

ha re i kno...i only mentiond t...us FF ke beech me hi likha tha vaise mene "Dance f hearts"...likhte likhte kuch aur hi ho gaya, din match d FF ka pace, isliye uske beech me nahi lagaya...but its all Dakshna...100% 😊😊😊😊😊

Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: LadyMystique
This is so beautiful aish👏👏👏 just like dakshna😊

mysti thanx sweethrt🤗🤗🤗...nd thnku 4 prompting me😊😊😊😊

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

this one s for my KP dakshu🤗 who went fida over Naina ke naina😆

The Angel...

I was no hermit

But life was plain

Till I met this angel

Runaway, on a train

She came at me

Out of the blue

In every colour, every hue

A dash of joy, a zap of love

Everything so bright, so true

And the eyes,

the lovely eyes

Which held the depth

Of all the seas

Oceans, wide, of love for me

I drowned in them and never rose

Could love be sweeter

It's me she chose

The world was new

And I, one of the chosen few

'Cos not every soul

Gets to fall for an angel so

And fewer still who get the angel

To love them back too...

ps : i might edit this one😛...

Edited by sweetaish - 13 years ago

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

@aish

The angel!!!!.😍..superb yaar.👏.U have captured dakshu ke exact feelings😛..I felt as if reading dakhsu ka dil.❤️.wah wah..👏...I am love in it..🤗 wow..👍🏼..gr8 job... u are really blessed to get such a talent..I am totally fida over "this angel😛".. and thanks for making my sunday morning special

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DakshnaFan

@DakshnaFan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: lucky.m
@aish

The angel!!!!.😍..superb yaar.👏.U have captured dakshu ke exact feelings😛..I felt as if reading dakhsu ka dil.❤️.wah wah..👏...I am love in it..🤗 wow..👍🏼..gr8 job... u are really blessed to get such a talent..I am totally fida over "this angel😛".. and thanks for making my sunday morning special

Ditto ditto from me too 😉 Simply awesome 👏 Thanks for making my morning also so special dear buddy😃... Apne pyaare KP Dakshu ke dil ke feeling 😍 This also goes to my list u know where 😉 Loved it dear 👏 Thank u Thank u 🤗🤗🤗🤗

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: lucky.m
@aish

The angel!!!!.😍..superb yaar.👏.U have captured dakshu ke exact feelings😛..I felt as if reading dakhsu ka dil.❤️.wah wah..👏...I am love in it..🤗 wow..👍🏼..gr8 job... u are really blessed to get such a talent..I am totally fida over "this angel😛".. and thanks for making my sunday morning special

whoa...meri momma sunegi to behosh ho jayegi...me nd an angel😆😆😆😆

thnx sweetu🤗🤗🤗...

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan

Ditto ditto from me too 😉 Simply awesome 👏 Thanks for making my morning also so special dear buddy😃... Apne pyaare KP Dakshu ke dil ke feeling 😍 This also goes to my list u know where 😉 Loved it dear 👏 Thank u Thank u 🤗🤗🤗🤗

le ek baddda sa bear hug tere liye bhi🤗🤗🤗🤗 knowin dis one 2 made t 2 ur list made my day😊😊😊...thnx jaanu🤗🤗🤗🤗

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LadyMystique

@LadyMystique

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: sweetaish

this one s for my KP dakshu🤗 who went fida over Naina ke naina😆

The Angel...

I was no hermit

But life was plain

Till I met this angel

Runaway, on a train

She came at me

Out of the blue

In every colour, every hue

A dash of joy, a zap of love

Everything so bright, so true

And the eyes,

the lovely eyes

Which held the depth

Of all the seas

Oceans, wide, of love for me

I drowned in them and never rose

Could love be sweeter

It's me she chose

The world was new

And I, one of the chosen few

'Cos not every soul

Gets to fall for an angel so

And fewer still who get the angel

To love them back too...

ps : i might edit this one😛...

WOW!👏 What a beauty aish!!!!!!! so romantic! maybe daksh actually felt that way when he saw Naina for the first time in the train but we all now how stubborn he was😆😆 he didnt wanna admit it i guess😛

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: LadyMystique
WOW!👏 What a beauty aish!!!!!!! so romantic! maybe daksh actually felt that way when he saw Naina for the first time in the train but we all now how stubborn he was😆😆 he didnt wanna admit it i guess😛

mysti thnx yar🤗...mujhe bhi wahi laga tha...nd Naina IS Dakshu ki angel😊😊😊

vaise din they show t onc ki he rememberd d train wala scn, how they 1st met...