IRREVERSIBLE DESTINY(MG)PART 21 UPDATED

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IRREVERSIBLE DESTINY

PROLOGUE

"Crimes related to arms smuggling and drug dealings are increasing at an alarming rate."Stated Dr.Vishnu,the sub-head of CBI.For the past 7 years dealings worth 9000 crores have been done,still the most efficient officers are not been capable enough to hold a little piece of information about the time and place of these horrendous dealings.The only piece of news that they gather is what is been shown as the aftermaths of these crimes.

"What the hell were your bloody officers doing till date?Seeing the bloody chit of news with a bowl of hot pakoras in hand?!!I still can't understand for what damn purpose you appointed them.."yelled seniormost,respected and not to mention(the most kharus)officer of CBI to Dr.Vishnu(bechara,now what can he do if his dear students reach the spot after the thief has showed them tongue!)..Discussions about these matter were held in a regular basis yet the CBI dept.has not come up with any solution..it seems as if the criminals are in much favorite position of the Almighty.

After the heated conference officer Mehta returned home in a extremely foul mood.He yelled at his beloved wife a couple of times only to invite a pool of tears from the doe-shaped eyes of the 55 year old..(young)woman!he went to his study with an ultimate decision of finding a solution to this damn problem of the drug fiasco.Thinking for a long time,he finally found his answers''.

"Just a year more then this will be your last crime Mr.criminal'for my saviour will come to the rescue"stated officer Mehta to himself with his face oozing out a million dollar smile.

Tring tring'.receiver picked up the phone'

Officer Mehta:Can I speak to''

Receiver:At your humble service sir'.

Officer Mehta:I want you to report tomorrow in the headquarters'

Receiver:Yes sir'

Officer Mehta:Good night

Receiver:Good night sir..

Now Mehta can finally sleep after manoufyinfg his darling wife'for his rescue service is alarmed now!Head officer Miss Geet Handa''


CHARACTER SKETCH BELOW...SCROLL DOWN TO SEE

PART 1:SCROLL DOWN

Heyzo frndz...dis iz my first ff...wel i hav been a silent reader for a long tym...so thot of giving sum of mah stuff out here...plz do give a try...and if its interesting press the like button😊😊😊


...My other works...

Where souls meet (OS)

Never Again(OS)

My Dark Desire...a sinful love(SS)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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😳Plz comment dear
...silent readers...wake up!!!!It encourages the poor writer...😊
Warna update nai dungi...believe this story wud b sumthn reali UNCOMMON &
die-hard romantic!!!😉😳

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😊😊Hey guyz...dont bash or thrash me...as i suddenly edited the prologue...but i promiz u wont regret it!😊😊
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CHARACTER SKETCH

OFFICER GEET HANDA
AGE-22 YRS
MAAN SINGH KHURANA
AGE-25 YRS
SENIOR MEHTA
AGE-52 YRS
DR.VISHNU GUPTA
AGE-43 YRS
DEV SINGHANIA
AGE-29 YRS
NAYANTARA HANDA
AGE-29 YRS
PARINEETA KUMARI
AGE-21 YRS
ADITYA SHARMA
AGE-25 YRS
Edited by shrutizlyf - 13 years ago
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CHAPTER 1
Next morning...(Head Quarters)
"Officer Geet Handa reporting Sir.."stated Geet as she stepped the HQ for the first time after 5 years of tremendous training under CBI academy of young officials.Her intelligence,hard work and dedication was always her plus point..for which she was the apple of the eye of Sr.Mehta..
"Miss Handa good morning...and welcome to CBI headquarters"exclaimed Dr.Vishnu...well he was little confused about her sudden arrival..but his confusion was soon clear...
"Dear officers...from today onwards Miss Handa takes the charges of handling the drug and arms export case" Sr.Mehta finally broke the silence...
"Officers you may proceed with yours questions...if u really have anything logical to ask..."Sr Mehta spoke again seeing the startled and confused face of his fellow colleagues..
"But sir how can this be possible...means we all know Miss Geet and her abilities very well but she is a newbie in action...and this case is utterly dangerous"stated Off.Viraat
His statement was bluntly agreed by all the others...
"Well officers i know the fact very well...but she is trained by me...and has been the best candidate of not only her batch but among the students of last 12 years..and she carries the same blood of her cousin Naintara Handa...whom we all know is honoured being the best woman criminal off."Sr.Mehta stated...
"Sir,sorry to speak in between but i am very much confident in my abilities...and i know i can handle this operation very smoothly...just give me one chance sirs...i promise not to let you all down...if we have wasted the past 7 yrs...i would just like to take 1 month from you people to judge me and if i am found incapable i would back off myself.."Geet told...inwardly praying that her dear Babaji grants her wish...(obviously through this "sirs"!)
Finally seeing her determination and her face oozing out confidence...the senior officers agreed to hand-over the case compltely to her...but for her safety...Off.Naintara Handa(her beloved di) was ordered to asist her to which they both happily agreed...
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Geet and Naintara were brought and taught up in an orphanage under sister D-souza..after the sudden demise of there parents due a plane crash...when finally grownup to run her and Geet's responsibility,Naintara took a leave from the orphanage and she was given a flat from CBI...she managed to take good care of Geet and to teach her the right morals of life.While for Geet ,her di was always her inspiration,teacher and guide she would always looked upon...
Geet and Naintara returned home after a hectic day in HQs.
"Hey didz finally i got my dream project of assisting you..."exclaimed Geet.Naintara was very much aquainted with her sister's antiques...though Geet was a CBI off. but outside she was just any other girl with high dreams and simple life..."Yeah i can see it..,but Geetu be very careful..waise bhi Dev was telling..."and she was cut short by Geet.."oh didz you are always over-worried...you know me na...i am the best...and by the way...where is dev darling...?!!
Naintara rolled her eyes..."oops sorry...i mean by would be brother-in-law!!!""For the last time Geet,i am warning you,dont tease me by hooking me with Dev,he is just a friend.."finished Naintara...to which Geet responded by giving...yeah-as-if-i-believe-that look..."Well its very late dear,i think you should go and catch some sleep.."with that Naintara left to her room...
Geet to went for her night sleep after packing up toys,chocolates and others stuffs for the next day...
Every month she pays a visit to her orphanage to play with her small friends and to visit Sister D-Souza...being an orphan herself she knows how much they like when somebody care for them...well that is Geet...as if her existence is only meant for spreading love and happiness...
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Next morning..Geet as planed went to her alma-mater...after a long hour chat with all her teachers and Sister D-Souza...all her kid friends as usual came with there demands of chocolates,teddies,and game-sets...to them Geet was a fairy who bestowed love and not to forget gifts upon them...they went towards the country side in a old house and were enjoying a tough game of hide and sick...when suddenly it stared raining cats and dogs...
"Kids run fast,lets return to school"Geet shouted...hearing Geet's commands all the kids hurried towards the orphanage when Geet found little Bani crying as she was too small to run fast and had injured her foot while running with her school-mates...Soon as the kids left Geet rushed and picked bani up...as she was about to move she heard some loud commotions out there...she peeped from the pillar and found at-least 20-25 men standing fully armed,dressed in black outfits...they are so scaring...who are they...what are they doing here...a chain of thoughts ran across Geet's mind as she saw the men taking there positions...as Geet dipped her head down to take a check on Bani...she heard a voice...
"From where you mustered such courage you backstabber to plot against me?"...Geet looked up to find the source of such a dangerous and husky-demanding voice...a 6 feet tall young man,extremely well-tonned featured,dressed in long black coat with his eyes targeted at his gun spoke out..."Please for g g giv ve me s-ssir...i won-nn nt repp ppea tt it" begged a man lying in front of his feet..."I never give a second chance...Good bye darling!!" and with that he shot full six bullets through the forehead of the begging man..."No-body messes with Maan Singh Khurana"...he coldly stated it as it was the most obvious statement on the entire planet..."Dismiss"...all the men went out...leaving the boss alone...as he stood there just to verify if there was any witness...finding no-one as he turned towards the exit he heard a loud shreik of a child...
"Holy crap...Bani"Geet quickly grabbed her mouth to stop her wailing...as she stood there eavsdropping and witnessing the hideous crime...Maan strated rechecking the house again ... For the last one hour Geet stood beside the hay stacks...carrying little Bani...when finally she was sure that the man has left she quickly got up to leave...when...
"Leaving me so early beautiful..." the same cold and husky tone made her steps to cease..
Precap:"I want you to keep your gob shut till the world ends"


Heyzo guyz done with the update...its quite long i guess...well i know i ende it in a cliff-hanger...but thats the fun...plz do read it...and kindly press the LIKE button...i promise to come up with more blasts!!!Bdw how did u guyz find my Maan?!!...next update with tomorrow...😊😊
LOVE_Shruti😊😊
Edited by shrutizlyf - 13 years ago
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Ohhh gr8...A love story of a criminal and a law abider😃

Plz do continue dear
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WOW NEW FF
GEET IS A DETECTIVE AND MAAN IS A GANGSTER
INTERESTING CONCEPT
PLEASE PM ME
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nyc yaar...

story is far different frm other ff

nd waiting for d next

nd pm me dear


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awesome update dear plz continue soon and add me to your pm list...😊
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Its a nice one... Plz add me to ur pm list...

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