IRREVERSIBLE DESTINY(MG)PART 21 UPDATED - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!jst awesum..
maan cum to noe a new side of his mystery girl..interesting!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
nice...

loved how geet fought...

maan is defo intrigued...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

PS -- could u plz give the link of the next part in the PM...as it becomes difficult to search for the ff link...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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IRREVERSIBLE DESTINY

CHAPTER-5

Geet drove back home''and called up Pari to come to her place for some serious discussions'..

"I am here maam'..is something wrong..that you summoned me at this hour..?"Pari asked Geet as she settled herself in Geet's study chair..

"Absolutely correct Pari'every damn thing is wrong for the past 7 years'.and now I want to correct it'"Geet told seriously

"I did not get it maam'I mean.."Pari asked confused

"Studying through the details'.I discovered that a certain waterway''''."and she explained Pari all the details she explained to Dev in the morning hours'.

After a long hour of explanations and discussions'.they planned up their actions for the next day'.

"From tomorrow we will trace side 2 beach'..with some of our men'traps should be laid very skillfully and if any one is suspected or you find anything wrong just alarm our officers and men'"Geet said to Pari

"Yes maam'.good night'"saying this Pari rose up from the chair'

"Good night Pari'"Geet wished her back'

As Pari left Geet went to have a little chit-chat with her dear sister'''

"Boss the export will be done within the next two weeks'"a man spoke over the phone

"I don't want any hurdles or excuses regarding it'make sure everything goes well.."Maan hissed through the phone

"Yes boss"his men assured him

For a certain reason,for the first time,Maan had a negative feeling about his export and deals '. As working in underworld'has rendered him with countless enemies'.though he was always the king,still Tailash,his most rebellious enemy'.another power of the underworld always wanted'Maan's place and thus caused,rather tried to cause problems with his men and works''last time it was a serious issue''

As planned'Geet and Pari along with their men went to the harbour and laid their trap after studying every nooks and corners'..they observed ships,men,luggages,goods'.still all in vain'their was no sign of any illegal acts'..

Every day they laid their trap'and the subordinates were seriously pissed off finding no results'..they stood cursing Geet for wasting time'

2 weeks later

Saturday

Time:11:35

As Geet,Pari and her officers were waiting''some men dressed in burnt green uniforms'.came in a black car'well they did not seem like any normal civilian'.rather had something which spoke of power ,a different language'..Geet alarmed her services silently''.and followed them'..while she saw'the men continuously chiding something'.and loads of goods were loaded'what striked her the most was'the goods were not checked before loading'..

Booom'a gun was fired''all the officers quickly took their position surrounding the suspected men'

"Off.Karan'check the goods NOW'"Geet commanded

Karan and his fellow men went to check it when Maan's men protested'.they were shocked for being caught for the first time inspite of such planning and when no one could ever guess this crowded harbour being used for illegal exports'..

The goods were opened and a number of weapons were discovered'.

"Leave us'.the three men shouted'.we need to export them to Indian services for wars'."one of the men spoke out

"Oh'I see'in that case'I would like to see the orders and license Mr.."Geet smiled as she spoke'.to which the men stood numb'they were arrested by CBI'.as they couldn't fight them being very less in number'.

"Speak up you bas***ds'."Geet shouted holding the tied man by his hair'.

"You can kill me'..if you want'I won't disclose a single thing'"the man retorted back'

"SPEAK UP'.WHERE IS YOUR HIDEOUT?"Geet shouted frustrated as she continued beating them'.

She came out and ordered her men'.

"Beat them till the vomit every piece of information out'"

"Yes maam"her men obeyed

"DAMNIT.."Geet,I don't thimk they will answer anything'.Dev spoke

"They will'.even their spirits will speak.."Geet responded

Maan was enraged beyond limits as he heard about his men being arrested by CBI'.he collected every bit of info about the event'.

"Adi how can it be possible?"how the CBI fools came to know about these..?

"Sir'.the new batch is very skilled and'"

"OH'CUT THE CRAP ADI'WE WERE,WE ALWAYS ARE AHEAD OF THEM'THEN HOW THE HELL'ALBERT AND ZINDAL GOT ARRESTED..I WAN'T THEM OUT AS SOON AS POSSIBLE.."Maan shouted shocking his men's nerve to the core'.

After few hours'

Evening

"Sir'a new officer has taken incharge of our case'"Adi spoke off as he entered'

"Hmm.."

"Officer Miss Geet Handa.."

Maan looked up'once'a bit startled'"A girl!!!" but maintained his stern face to hide his sudden amusement

"Adi'.you go yourself with our officers to the CBI building now'.I want both of my men out'"he commanded Adi..

Adi was a little surprised by his boss' coldness'.after giving him such a information'but that was something very natural to him'..he finally left for the CBI HQs''

Officer Miss Geet Handa'.the four words'the one certain name ran in his mind''he was surprised as well as amused to discover a woman'fighting against him'well that was something alien'..he only associated them with troubles,emotional foolings and melodramas!!But a girl fighting against him'.

"Work never seemed so interesting before'.it would be a fun fighting with you miss'"He said in his mind'as he smiled'.

"Sir the goods are confiscated by CBI.."one of his men rushed in

"I know'.leave now.."Maan ordered

He rose up from his chair and with a satisfactory smirk on his face'boldly announced to himself'.

:"I can't wait anymore to meet you'officer Geet Handa.."

PRECAP: Geet:"Name your boss'"

Albert:I can't

Geet:Name him

Albert:I can't

Geet:Then wait for the funeral of your family'..

Albert:No'.wait'.his name is'..

PART 6: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1913144/irreversible-destiny-mg-part-21-updated?pn=10

HOWZ DAT'.the update????

Plz comment dear readers'.and do press the LIKE button'

Love_Shruti😊😊

Edited by shrutizlyf - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
interesting update
loved it
thanks for the pmcontinue soon 😊
Edited by udeshi91 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
interesting concept
cont soon
updates r awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wowww loved it😃thanks for PM😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg!gr8 one yaar..!
geet s on her way ..
can't wait for dat confrontation!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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too good!!!!!!!!!!

story is too much interesting...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey thanks for the pm...
read the ff..its quiet interesting...
both poles apart in their profession but interesting plot...
so maan knows whom he is fighting with but geet is fighting with a faceless and nameless person which is quite a setback for her...
but maan will b shocked to learn that its his beautiful lady...
waiting for the next
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi… thanks for PM😛…Interesting FF….so Maan in your FF is a gangster and Geet is a CBI officer…new concept no doubt….Maan and Geet here are in different meridian………..Geet is at a disadvantage here…..she is clueless about the person she is up against, whereas maan is very much aware about his opponent😕…waiting to see Maan's reaction when he comes to know who Geet hunda is😲…waiting for your next update….😊

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