IRREVERSIBLE DESTINY(MG)PART 21 UPDATED - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
hiii
awesome update
loved it
loved geet
cant wait 4 maaneet 2 come face 2 face
will da man say maan's name
cant wait 4 more
con soon
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lovely update add me in ur pm list
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brilliant updates
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IRREVERSIBLE DESTINY

CHAPTER-6

"Geet is reacting too much'..she is stressing herself unnecessarily in this case'"Naintara told Dev on phone,as he called to inform her about the morning details'.

"Its very common Naintara,I mean we need to seek atleast a piece of information from their mouth'.to proceed further'.and Geet is doing her job perfectly well'infact Sr.Mehta is very proud of her proceedings'we indeed never thought about that public,crowded harbour'to be their export way'..it never clicked us but she'"Dev reasoned but was interrupted

"Its not that Dev,I'I..just want her..ss..safe'"Naintara almost cried'

"Shh'don't cry dear'I will always take care of her ..she is just like my own sister.."Dev consoled her back

"You know Geet very well Dev'she is just extreme'.in every emotion of her life'whether its hatred or love'once she jumps she never backs off'.please Dev take care of her'"Naintara said him

"I will'.you don't stress yourself'..bye for now'"Dev trailed off before keeping the phone'

Naintara never had a positive feeling about Geet joining CBI'..she could never reason the fact though'still it kept bothering her''well its very common for an elder sister who has been bringing up her sister since childhood all by herself'.still something was more than this obvious reason which kept scaring her'.she just kept on praying for her darling sister's safety'..

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"SPEAK UP BAS****S'.SPEAK UP IF YOU WANT TO LIVE MORE.."Geet shouted as she kept on torturing the prisoners with her beatings and threats'but they won't even budge''.she finally got fedup with their silence'.and left the cell in anger'..

"Maam water'"Pari spoke softly'..

"Pari,just try to contact home once'to inform Di..umm Officer Naintara Handa,that I will be late.."Geet told her

"Yes maam'I will do it.."saying this Pari went to call

Geet was tired 'from the days events'really days are going very hectic'since she has taken over operation DA'

"Maam,the men'they aren't leaking out a bit of info'.it has been 6 hours since we arrested them'.if things go like this,it will just be a waste of time'"one sub officer spoke..

"Yeah'I too was thinking the same'these people are much trained up'.to open their mouth we need to infict some 3rd degree torture on them'"Geet decided

"Maam'3rd degree?"the man asked

"Yes give the orders within the next 30 minutes'.after they regain some of their energy back!"Geet instructed him'

"It will be done maam'"

It was 9pm and the CBI building was almost empty'with only Geet,Pari and some juniors'..after the constant failure of seeking a bit from their mouth Geet finally decided to start with the 3rd degree medicine with them'if atleast that can extract out something'.

...

As planned Adi entered the CBI HQs from the terrace,he slowly made his moves and started unplugging the cameras'..only after making both the guards unconscious'..as he climbed through the windows'.he saw Albert and Zindal in a pool of cold water'.where electric wires were momentarily dipped and lifted'and the room filled with their loud shrieks'.two sub officers were doing the job while Geet kept on shouting on them to speak up''Adi knew very well that alarms were on'.and if he barges in he will land in trouble'.he called up Maan'

Adi:"Sir'.there is a problem'.all four of them are present,the security alarms are on if I go inside'they may capture me also'"

Maan:"You jump in when you get my signal'"

...

"Speak up'".Geet held one of the men by his hair'.he was almost unconscious'

She hitted him again'and threatened'

"well dear I see you don't care a bit about yourself'but do you care about your wife and kids..?"

Albert:"You can't harm them'you just can't'you are a CBI officer'"

Geet:"I know that'but you don't leave me with any other option.."

Albert:"Boss will never leave you.."

Geet:"But your family will bid adieu to you forever'."

Though Geet very well knew that she would never harm his family, still at that point of time she had no other option'.

Geet:"Pari'send our men to'"

Albert:Wait'don't don't harm them

Geet:"Name your boss'"

Albert:I can't

Geet:Name him

Albert:I can't

Geet:Then wait for the funeral of your family'..

Albert:No'.wait'.his name is'..

DHUMMM''.and the noise echoed in the whole room as there Albert fell dead'Geet was shocked by the sudden sound'and looked down to find Albert being shot on his forehead,''

"Pari,Karan chase him'"Geet shouted'..

As the officers was about to make a move,the lights went off'.making the HQ fully pitch dark'..

"Adi '. Move in slowly and free Zindal'"Maan said over phone

"Yes sir.."Adi followed

"Fix the lights soon'switch on the main board QUICK"

As the lights were on'Zindal was nowhere to see'.

PRECAP:Time stopped as they looked deep into each other's eyes'in silence

PART 7:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1913144/irreversible-destiny-mg-part-21-updated?pn=16

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Edited by shrutizlyf - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
awesome...

they acted b4 he could reveal anything...

waiting for the much awaited confrontation...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh my God that was thrilling update...but who killed Albert...Adi was waiting for Maan's directions to enter then may be any CBI officer is in Maan's platter...

thanx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
part 6
wow...
Albert was killed but Zindal is zinda...
Maan's timings were correct...
cant wait for the aamne saamne scene...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you lots 4 pm,i already love the story
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it amazing update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it, awesome. plsss update soon. can't wait for the next part. continue soon.

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