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Posted: 13 years ago
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Here ia am with a new os..well this is my first os'this idea came to me very suddenly''..well that's another fact that I always have sad thoughts in my mind whenever I decide to write'😆😆.so here is one terribly sad os for you by shruti'..

Of course it's on our dear Maaneet'..well I almost had tears in my eyes while writing it''hope you too will like it''but why not give it a try and become sad as well as full of heart shattering thoughts about life for some minutes'''😭😭

So here goes my first os''..

Where Souls Meet...

She looked by her side to the faint white background with patches of red'.she felt nauseated'she couldnot well see what it was but she could hear a knell for sure'..her eyes closed as she digested what had happened a few minutes back'she did not know where her life'her love was'her eyes searched for Maan but she was too weak'she closed her eyes in frustation''she could feel the cold surrounding'.

She tried shouting'but she could not'..her jaws would not move'.she tried moving her hand'..but it had turned stiff''..her whole body was covered with heaps of ice'.

This third year medical student was not sure if she was paralyzed from spine''

Her heart throbbed not feeling Maan's presence''.

She again opened her eyes searching''..only to see Maan in a pool of blood'''his head seemed smashed'.and one of his ribs were out of his chest'the all powerful man had given up''..he lay there still'..not even a single movement in the deepest of his heart''...

Geet wanted to cry her heart out'..to yelp'.to shout at her god for giving up'but she could not'.tears welled up her divine eyes''and came gushing down to her cheeks'and soul'her very living was surrounding with darkness'but strangely not even a single sound was heard'.silence was the strangest of all'..her life was so mercilessly snatched from her'her very reason to live was no more'just minutes ago life seemed to be perfectly perfect with her outing with Maan to the mountains''

She looked up at the sky''.questioning why had god been so unfair'..questioning where in this pure life and love of hers had she gone wrong'..but even god seemed to be unaware of her answers''

She bid Maan adieu'.au revoir'.

Life betrayed''.god betrayed'.destiny betrayed''.and their terribly unlucky fate had betrayed''..

She couldnot move'''.and the saddest part of it''she was not in his arms while he breathed his last''.

She felt no pain'.only a terrible helpnessness covered her very soul'.a devastating sadness seemed to lurk around her existence''.she shut hert eyes tightly hoping it to be a nighmare and cofute the reality wrong'''.but it was not a nightmare'..it was reality'the sad bitter truth''..

She hoped to die''she did not want to live any more''.she pleaded her god to take her to him''she did not wish for a life without him'.

Her eyes wide open she looked up at the heaven above her''the sky had never ever been so beautiful like it was now'.because her love, Maan was there to brighten it''..

Slowly her pulse rate died down'.her body cold'..her soul divine''and she thus rested there in peace''.

Her wish of dying peacefully in Maan's arms had not been fulfilled for sure''.but her last wish was granted''she was with her Maan for ever now''''

So how was it????? hope you all liked it😃''..plzzz press the LIKE button if you did'😃''and dare you forget to comment''

Well atleast comment out of sympathy given I am very very sad today😉''..thus came up with this sad os too'..😛

Heaven is the place where every two souls who couldnot meet on earth meet'.

My other works

Irreversible Destiny(FF)

Never Again(OS)

My Dark Desire...a sinful love..(SS)

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bangalores thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i got this mixed feeling sad coz maaneet died, but calm that they r together...
nice OS, dear...but why r u sad?
beautiful pic
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shrutizlyf thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: bangalores

i got this mixed feeling sad coz maaneet died, but calm that they r together...
nice OS, dear...but why r u sad?
beautiful pic

well actually i am sad because i have my exams and projects together...and my life has turned a total mess!!!!!
singh24 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LiL bit sad ,why , but i like it 😊
Remya_Pillai thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#5
happy dey r together even affter deir death..but sad as dey r not alive..
awesum..
kar1538 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Pls dont write such sad story about Maneet. I was expecting PM of ID and I got a very sad story to read about.
Liked the OS b'coz Maneet were one even after death.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome os sad that maaneet died
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Posted: 13 years ago
#8
Sad but glad maaneet r tghtr,even aftr death
bhanu_rekhag thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#9
awesome OS dear..pretty emotinal n lovely.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice u wrote down the emotions beautifully bt it had been nicer if u would had mentioned the cause of death...it seems a bit incomplete
otherwise it was lovely

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