IRREVERSIBLE DESTINY(MG)PART 21 UPDATED - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
hai

this is awesome and great update
maan and geet comfrontation
awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
Great ff u did a great work geet is reallly a very strong girl ...i m eager to know wat maan is actually working for ...tc😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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IRREVERSIBLE DESTINY
CHAPTER-7
"Pari'..rush'inform the security soon'."ordered Geet
"Yes maam"
Saying this pari rushed out'the officers'.ran across to find the intruders'the whole security was alarmed'everuything was in a rush'.
Adi was finding a great difficulty in carrying Zindal'.as he was severely wounded'..he somehow managed to climb the steps towards the terrace when Geet saw them'.finding no one in the corridor'Geet alone ran behind to chase them'..
Adi managed to hide in a corner'.expecting as Geet takes a wrong move,he would escape '.
"This girl is indeed efficient in her moves'.we seriously need to discover her weak points before its too late.."Adi thought to himself while hiding in the corner'
For 20 minutes'he kept waiting,as Geet began to move towards the exit'.Zindal made a whimper'due to the extreme pain on his foot'
"Hands up.."Geet said pointing the gun towards Adi..
Adi raised his hands'backing up a little'.
"Finally caught you Mr.Criminal'."Geet said confidently
"Not so soon'"Adi laughed..
Saying he kicked Geet on her leg to which Geet jumped up'then started the fight between Geet and Adi'.
Finally Geet managed to kick Adi hard on his stomach which made him growl and sit'.
"Surrender yourself'."Geet threaten him'
"No never'"and he rose up to push Geet,she pointed the gun directly on his forehead'
"ADI JUMPPP" Maan roared from behind as he hit Geet on her left shoulder'.with a rod'which caused her gun to drop'.
Geet was shocked with this sudden attack'Maan wasn't still able to see her face'as she had her back faced towards him'.when he shot Albert'.
Just as Geet looked behind,
Adi ran to Zindal'
Geet turned back and'.was shocked to react'.even Maan couldn't utter a word '. Too surprised'too numb'.
Time stopped as they looked deep into each other's eyes'in silence'..
Arre aankh se boond gira koi
Chingari ka tukda jala koi
Umeed ko aag laga zara
Sehra ki pyaas bujha zara..
They kept staring each other's face ' as if the world had stopped for them'
Umeed ko aag laga zara
Sehra ki pyaas bujha zara..
It was only them'.
Ghan itna baras ke galne lagoon
Main paani ke upar tarne lagoon...
Under the night sky'.
Standing under the blanket of stars'.
In the cold night'.
Surrounded with tranquility''.
Behne de mujhe behne de mujhe behne de
Behne de ghanghor ghata behne de paani ki tarah
Saagar mein jaa girna hai behne de nadiyaa ki tarah
Shart lagi hai mar jaane ki jeena hai toh pyaar mein...
The past events played in Maan's mind'.his threats'her fear and terror stricken face'.whimpering lips'scared and shocked eyes'.their first meeting'..
Deh kahi bhi ho mera, jaan rakhi hai yaar mein,
Beh jaa beh jaa, hai saagar ka kehna,
Beh jaa beh jaa, hai nadiyaa ko behna,
Geet kept drowning in those deep black eyes'.which were looking at her with such an intensity as they could decipher each and every beat of her heart ''.she was way too shocked and numb to recall any of his early words'she just could remember those eyes'.
Patte se tapakti boond ki aawaz sunai di thi
Nadiyaan mein tapk aur gum ho jaa, beh gaya beh gaya.
Jo rah gaya rah gaya.
A thousand questions ran across her head'as she kept staring him'
Maan slowly placed his hands on her waist'..and snuggled her close in his arms'.
Mera pal pal ang ang bhar diya,
Tune jaan pe junoon sa kar diya,
Mera hai kya jo main haar doon,
Jaan teri hai tujh pe vaar doon
Geet raised her hand slowly and rested on his face'..
Doob gaye jo suna hai saare
Tere dere aate hai,
Dil ke chullu mein bechare,
Doobkiya gote khaate hai,
He closed his eyes as he felt the soothing caress and warmth of her touch'.
Geet kept on looking at him'..
Beh jaa, beh jaa, Chal tod kinaare ko,
Beh jaa, beh jaa, dhar le majdhaare ko,
Chingaari uda ke raakh se, ek boond gira ke aankh se,
Chalne ka ishara kar gaya
Kar gaya kar gaya
Sab bhar gaya bhar gaya...
He raised his hand and placed it over hers'she narrowed her brows'he smiled .. not much..but a glint of satisfaction beamed in his eyes'telling her'how he treasures her touch'.at that moment she felt good'contented'her emotions were at its peak'and her eyes welled up'.eyes'that enchanted him from the very beginning of their story'they kept standing with hands placed over one another'she in his arms'surrendering to the strangeness of nature'uniting two opposite poles..
The night sky stood still in tranquility'.sheltering the two enemies''so close to each other'.
There was something at that moment'that ceased both of their actions'ceased the time'they couldn't'they just couldn't detach themselves from one another'.they stood together'.forgetting the world'forgetting the situations''forgetting that they were''''enemies'''''''!
PRECAP:Well '.. is it seriously needed now?!!!😉
Fingers crossed'biting nails😳
😕'.hope you all liked it😊'.do comment and press the LIKE button'.😃

Edited by shrutizlyf - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
wowow...
wat a meeting..!
who vl broke d trance first??😆

omg me first...congrats..to me..😆
Edited by Remya_Pillai - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
awesome update
there meeting sequence is super
cont soon
wt makes dem 2 break d trance
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
awesome meeting...
what gonna happen next???
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
awesome update like it thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
Wow...it was a fullon maaahiii...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99


finally they met each other again in their true selves
thanks for the pm
continue soon
Edited by cloudflower - 11 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hiii
awesome update
loved it
loved maaneet
sooo cute
they r sooo falling 4 each other
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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