IRREVERSIBLE DESTINY(MG)PART 21 UPDATED - Page 2

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wow i loved the start yaar... do continue soon and add me to ur pm list !!!
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😊Hey guyz...thanx a ton for your wonderful replies and support...i would cum up with the next update surely by tomorrow...😊🥱

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Originally posted by: shrutizlyf

😊Hey guyz...thanx a ton for your wonderful replies and support...i would cum up with the next update surely by tomorrow...😊🥱


Love Shruti😳


Will be waiting dear😊

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IRREVERSIBLE DESTINY

CHAPTER-2

"Leaving me so quickly beautiful"''the phrase ran in her mind as she ceased her steps'she turned back with Bani in her arms to find the same man with black-long coat boring his intense looks towards her''she gulped in fear cursing Bani's voice box for the umpteenth time'

"Umm'I..I I yy-you ss-s-see I am playing hide and seek out here"she finally lied confidently.Okay'now we can't expect her to declare proudly that she was eavesdropping their plan and actions'. to the very same man who murdered a person just an hour ago as if he killed a mosquito!

"Wa..aa..aa"wailed Bani'didi you told others to leave for the game was over'.you didn't tell me that we are playing now alsho'stated a very disappointed Bani..

Kids'I tell you'why they have to be disciples of Harishchandra at this utterly wrong time'poor Geet thought to herself'.

"Awww don't cry dear'come to me'."Maan stretched his hands towards Bani'.Geet in return gave him a deadly glare'.to which he grinned..

Though facing a real handsome gangster was scaring her wits out'but she decided to maintain a cool face'actually a normal one'.

"Listen'Mr..whoever you are'if you are done with your conversation'can we just leave?"Geet asked'

"But I will be bored without you..here..you can't leave"Maan stated to which Geet was utterly surprised'.Is he the same person who just now commited a hideous crime'.and here he is planning an evening chat with me'Geet thought to herself'

Geet was about to walk away ignoring Maan completely and acting alike a fulltoo decent girl who is not at all having butterflies seeing a real(not to forget handsome)gangster for the first time'.when Maan pulled her hand and to which she landed in a full filmy style in his arms'with our li'l Bani dangling in between!!!Her eyes streached as wide as possible'.

"Don't even dare to lie me sweet-heart,otherwise I will make your perfect life as imperfect as possible"Maan stated in a husky dangerous tone in her right ear..which made her shiver'

"Whaaa-aat dd-do you mmm-mmeaa-aan?"Geet asked'now tears clouding her eyes'.

"I think if you are bold enough to eavsdrop us'then you are smart enough to understand what EXACTLY I mean" Maan replied stressing on the exactly part'

"Geet are you here'Beta can you here me'Geet Bani is with you na?"she heard the voice of Sister D-Souza and Sister Mary'she thought this is the best moment to give this Mr.Gunda a piece of mind'as Maan leaned over her shoulder to find the source of the voice Geet decided to shout as loud as possible'Well,now who was she fooling!as she was about to shout in affirmative,Maan pressed his right hand on her mouth ceasing her to breathe even let alone speaking or shouting'..The sisters kept on calling her name and seeing no response as they were about to leave'.Geet gave a good bite in his hand'..Maan for a sec removed his hand out of the sudden pain.as she was about to wail again..he forced his lips on hers'..Geet took a moment to exactly realize what was happening'.she was still holding Bani who was fast asleep by then'she wriggled to free herself out of his grip constantly'..but he increased the force to make her breathless and numb'.he left her after long 6 minutes'when Sisters left the old house'.Geet was in a state of daze'tears streaming down her face like fountain'.

"You really taste nice beautiful'"Maan smiled shyly!Geet was so very shocked to react that she kept gawking him as he was some alien'.She finally got her conciousness and was about to slap him tight for this extremely hoolligan behaviour when he twisted her hand and gave her threatening look'.

"Don't you dare repeat it again"'..

"What do you want?"Geet asked quivering in fear

"I want you to keep your gob shut till the world ends"

With that he pushed her back to the hay stocks and vanished as swiftly as air''.

Moments passed'Geet sat there in the room full of darkness with a sleeping Bani'.thinking and pondering about the events'She very well understood reading years after years about crimes'and facing a real one has a hell and heaven difference'.

Finally she stood up and returned to the orphanage'

Explaining Sister D-Souza about her whereabouts due to the sudden rain..she retutned home fully drenched'.

"WHERE WERE YOU?"yelled a very furious Naintara'.she was very worried as she didn't even get a chance to know about her sister whereabouts for the past 5 hours'

"Di actually I got drenched in rain,mobile-battery was also low'so my cell became switched off'and as it was raining I was stuked at a shop'.so couldn't inform you'Sorry Di'.."Geet replied

"Its okay dear'I was just scared'have your dinner after changing your wet clothes'."Naintara finally calmned down'

"I will call and inform Dev that you are here"she went towards her room'.

Geet changed and had her food'.she went to sleep early as she was too tired for the day'.she thought of informing Naintara then decided against it'finally she drifted of to sleep''

Part:3-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1913144/irreversible-destiny-mg-part-21-updated?pn=4

PRECAP:She is really beautiful and sexy too''he said to himself as he saw her coming out of the temple dressed in green'


plzzz comment...i am waiting...

Edited by shrutizlyf - 13 years ago
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wow i loved it yaar !!!! do continue soon pls ... am so eager to read the next part ..
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interesting story...

do add me to ur PM list...sent u request...
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Thanx a lot friends for your lovely response😊...i expect more comments...warna update nai dungi...😉😛
just kidding...plz do comment dear..it really encourages a newbie like me!!!😊
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loved ur update pls add me in ur pm list
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Awesome update... Hope to get more from you vry soon...
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She saw the murderer and he let her go.
Now why would he do that, how can he trust her to keep her mouth shut

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