IRREVERSIBLE DESTINY(MG)PART 21 UPDATED - Page 35

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ud shruti...loved maan-geet parts...
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IRREVERSIBLE DESTINY
CHAPTER 14

"You ' idiot..how dare you?"Geet shouted'suddenly she stopped as she realized she was laughing and enjoying with her''enemy'''''''''??

Maan noticed the sudden silence in the house'.he turned to find Geet staring intently at him'''''they looked into each other's eyes'.there was a lot of questions running across their mind'.which both could read very well in their eyes'still none had the answers to them'.they were not behaving the way they were supposed to be'he broke the silence'

"Umm'Geet I think you should go and freshen up'"

Geet still stood in silence'she was still confused by her own behaviour and reactions towards him'..

"Geet.." he called again..

"Yeah'I am going'where is the washroom'?" she asked abruptly broken out from the chain of her thoughts'..

"Its in there'.."and before he could finish the sentence Geet left his sight'and went'

Maan went to the kitchen to find some food for them'

"This girl is getting on my nerves now'.I should not let myself be affected by her presence'why she didn't protest yesterday'why was she behaving in such an way today'.is it a plan to lure me..?" he kept on thinking to himself'

"MAAN SINGH KHURANA'..MAAN SINGH KHURANA.." he heard her calling' rather yelling out his name''unknowingly his lips twitched for a smile'.

"KHURANAAA'''''.." and as he was going to regard her as a sweet lady immediately'.his misconceptions were cleared'..

"What'stop yelling like a maniac..!!" he said from the kitchen'

"What am I going to wear now'.?" Geet asked him'annoyed..

To which Maan thought is she in her senses'now how is he supposed to know that?!!

"Maan singh'" and she was cut off '

"Khurana'.you are chanting my name as you worship me'after a holy bath'aren't you Geet? And answering your question'how am I supposed to know that..?!!"

"Oh sure'.how will you'you were the one to kidnap me'so keeping that in mind'you should be the incharge of my food,sleep and clothings..you get that.."

"Is she mad???" Maan thought to himself'not amused but utterly surprised'.no one in his entire lifetime till date has given him such order'and this girl'..whom he had kidnapped'is treating him as her personal servant'!

"Are you out of your mind'.wear whatever you feel'and stop eating my head'I really think Geet'did you bribe the CBI'to give you a post..rest who would make a maniac like you an officer..?" he provoked her further'.

By then Geet was damn irritated'first in the month of late November'standing bare under the shower'shivering badly'and this man is not helping her in any way'rather questioning her abilities??

"Listen'I really need something'can you please bring some clothes'I mean'some of yours.." Geet tried to sound as sweet as possible'may be then this dumb-headed kidnapper will understand the basic rules of kidnapping a young lady!

"Oh.. my my'bollywood movies have a great impact on you'do you really feel I would sucuumb to your request and give you my shirt or kurta'manage yourself.." and saying so he left '..

2 hours passed yet not a single noise came from the bathroom'Geet was still in while Maan had his breakfast'suddenly he thought about her'.was she really that needy'

"Geet? Are you okay..?" he slowly called to check..but she did not answer back'.

Waiting for two three minutes he called her yet again'finding no answer'he went towards the door'pressed his ears and knocked'.

"Geet'you okay?"

"Achooo'.achooo'does it..achoo'matter..to you?" a shivering Geet answered'still sitting in the bathtub'

"And I thought I am lucky that you are finally dead.." Maan started with his teasings yet'

"Dead'I will not die so soon'take that in your'..achoo'mind'achoo..achoo achooo'!!!"

"Okay'for now I am giving you something'as otherwise you have decided to spent the whole day in my bathtub'" he went to bring some clothes for her..

"Here'take it'he knocked the door.."

"Oye'what do you think..just place it out and move.."

"Give a break'you are not ms. India'that I would love to see you bare.." Maan scoffed..

"What'that means'you love to see Ms. India..bare..!!" Geet replied and gave a proud pat to herself'

"No.. I mean'just take it'" and he placed the cloth on the knob of the door'

Geet took it and found only a piece of white shirt'is he mad'.only this'

"Maan Singh Khurana'you pervert'how am I supposed to wear only this'?"

"Now I am cent percent sure'that you bribed CBI'you don't even know..to wear a shirt.."

"I know but I genuinely don't want to know'that how I would look'if I wear only a man's shirt'give me something more.."

"Listen Geet'do whatever you feel'don't take my good behaviour as my weakness.."

Geet stood there confused'finally she decided to wear the shirt and'''''.

Finally after spending a long good 3 hours in the washroom..she came out'

"So finally you decided to come out'good have your'''''''.and he was mesmerized'shocked'and amused to find her in''????

PRECAP:As he was going to resume his act of destruction yet again'he noticed a shadow'.passing '. It felt somebody was there outside listening his conversation'

Geet'.!

Guys i am very very sorry for the late update...😛...i hope you guys liked this part...show me how much you liked by showering comments...plzzz...and also press the LIKE button...😳😃

Edited by shrutizlyf - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Haha I m still laughing while typing this.😆 Loved this. Precap huum Geet tring to listen Maan's plan?? Nice update.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
kidnapper ko order dena sirf geet ki bass ki bat hain..😆
luvd it a lot..
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update dear... loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
good one
cont soon
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pretty awesome n lovely dear
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Maan-Geet convo very cute and hillarious...Maan will learn now the pros and cons of kidnapping a girl...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...
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great update dear
loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it, really i adore this couple made for each other. continue soon.

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