MN - The Fragile Magic ** Epilogue - Pg 140. - Page 92

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update dear...
i was eager to see diya's reaction abt nupur's pegnency...
really nice update...
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful amazing. I love the every bit of this part. plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
fabulous update
mayank's fear n her assurance...the way nupur made him understand was soo sweet...n can understand her confusion regarding pranav surname and she made a right decision.
the boys were sooo happy...n they want a sister...how sweet
luved dia teasing n care fr dem...
the last part was jst mesmerizing..lovely
beautifully written

Edited by love.mayurarti - 14 years ago
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i got really emotional while reading this update...beautiful...just the way i had expected it to b..every bit of it touched the bottom of my heart..thanks 4 updating tonite hun🤗🤗
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it was just beautiful beautiful beautiful update
loved it to d core
awesome job kinza
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beautiful updt kinza..loved it
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beautiful update.
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Chapter # 22 - Epilogue.

15 Years later

"Pranav bhaiyaaa!!"

"Rahul bhaiyaaa!!"

15 year old Piya was shouting on the top of her voice and her brothers, upstairs were panicking on her voice.

"Rahul ab bahir nikal, piya kab se awazein de rahi hai", pranav was banging the washroom door while Rahul was peacefully enjoying the warm shower.

"kia takleef hai pranav, ab nahatey hoye bahir a jaon kiya?, let me take the bath peacefully atleast", he replied turning off the tap and then again got back to his shower.

"jitna time tu lagta ha ne nahney main, 10 log naha letey hain itney time main", he smacked the door with his leg and started pacing around in the room,

"thek hai, main ja raha hon niche, tu nahata reh!, baad main phir mujhe mat kehna k akki ko kis ne shikayat ki", he said suppressing his giggle because he knew Rahul was going to react in a minute.

Akki was rahul's childhood friend and the one who always gave him inspiration for sketching, and according to Pranav ' she was rahul's biggest weakness.

"tujh se do minute sabr nahi hota!, a gaya hon bahir, her baat ko akki tak le jane ki zarorat nahi hai", he glared, coming out of the shower, dressed in a sky blue T-shirt and blue denims to go with it.

"ye kia hai?, tu ne meri shirt kyun pehni?", pranav stood in front of him and Rahul pushed him away to take a proper view of himself in the mirror.

"wo is liye kyun k ye mujh pe ziyada achi lagti hai ", he proudly said and brushed his hair while pranav smacked his back and went for his shower leaving a giggling Rahul.

**

Ye pranav byaiya aur Rahul bhaiya bhi na, always late!, atleast today they should be on time, we need to go pick up mom and dad from the airport, they are returning after two months and these both are again late",

She pacing around in the lounge, again and again jerking her brownish ' black hair pony tail. She was dressed in a dark blue jeans and an orange lose kurta till her thighs.

Her cheeks were getting puffy due to anger and she was gathering air in her lungs to shout once again but before that, her brothers came down rushing,

"I am so sorry princess, sab Rahul ki waja se , you know na how much time he takes in bathing", paranv rushed down the stairs saying all this, and behind him was Rahul,

"is ki baat mat suno piya, I now my doll will trust me, ye ab is ki waja se hua, he was teasing me with akki again and again",

they both came and stood in front of her and she observed them keenly.

"Rahul bhiaya, ap ne phir se pranav bhiya ki shirt pehni hai", piya glared and pranav made a sad face, "dekha piya, hamesha aisey hi karta hai, "

"you stop it, tu bhi tu merey kapre pehanta hai " Rahul huffed and piya breathed deep.

Her brothers were the most adorable boys in this whole wide world. Being 21 years old, they both fought and cribbed just like kids and being so irritated with each other's habits, they never agreed for separate rooms.

Although they did get late many times, but still they were the most adorable, intelligent and the most handsome boys in this world.

"and besides I look more handsome in this shirt tu ye shirt aj se meri", Rahul announced and pranav giggled, "sedhi tarah bol na k pechli date pe tu ye shirt phen k gaya tha, aur akki ne tareef kar di", he giggled and received a punch from Rahul.

"okay now stop it both of you", piya interrupted, "ab chalen airport mom dad's flight will land in half an hour" she said advancing towards the parkway and , both of them followed her.

Three of them got in the car, with pranav driving the car, Rahul on the front seat and piya sitting on the middle of the back seat.

"I am so happy mom dad wapis a rahen hain, I missed them sooo much", Rahul said sighing and pranav nodded, "same here!!, and next time I am not going to allow them to go on such a long vacation, I mean bachon ki bhi tu sochen , bus apne romance ki pari hai", Rahul huffed and three of both broke in a giggle.

"mom dad vacation pe nahi gaye they, they went to meet bua and attend shurti di's wedding", piya corrected them and yet again they both laughed, "okay mom dad ki camchi", Rahul turned a bit to pull her cheeks but she huffed,

'chamchi nahi, mom dad ki princess!!", she said proudly.

"sirf mom dad ki nahi, apne bhaiyon ki bhi princess", Pranav said and Rahul again pulled her cheeks and she returned him a warm smile,

"hmmm, but this doesn't mean that I will not complain about all the mischief you both have been doing", she announced and Rahul and Pranav sighed.

**

They reached the airport and the flight had just 15 minutes to land. Three of them were waiting impatiently through every passenger who was coming out to get a glimpse of their parents,

"mom dad kitna time laga rahe hain", rahul said impatiently and didn't receive any reply because both of them had seen Mayank and Nupur coming out of the lounge.

"mom dad!!", piya shouted in glee and ran in between the passengers to advance towards her parents and rahul and pranav followed her.

Mayank opened his arms seeing his princess running towards her and she just hugged him, "dad!!, I missed you so much",

"awww, I missed you to beta".

Mayank and piya were hugging each other, while on the other hand, paranv and Rahul were fighting about who will hug nupur first.

"mom pehle main, I missed you more", Rahul pushed pranav away and hugged nupur and she hugged him back smiling,

"this is not fair, is ne ap ka naam bhi nahi liya mom", pranav pouted, adjusted himself in the hug and nupur just rubbed their backs.

"whatever, I missed you both equal!!", nupur said

"and what about me?",

Three of them moved apart on Piya's voice, who was huffing and seeing her brothers move away, she hugged nupur, "I missed you the most mom!!", she said and nupur hugged her tight.

"acha gi!, mil gaya time mujh se milne ka?, thora aur time hug kar lena tha dad ko!", she complained and mayank sighed,

" stop taunting my daughter nupur, same goes for your sons, kyun bachon tum logon ne dad ko miss nahi kiya?" , Mayank glared both of them and laughing , they hugged him, and finally all five of them headed towards their home.

**

Their home had the worst possible jinx of society but still they knew how to hold on. Every person in their home was held by a thread of magic, but it was the - Fragile Magic ' a rare Fragile Magic which was so strong that there was no distinction between blood bonds and step bonds. It was the strongest Fragile Magic.

The END.


Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank you all .. from the bottom of my heart .

Okay sweets .. so here we come to the end of the Fragile Magic. I hope i was able to weave it in the best possible manner.

This was the most complex story i ever wrote and trust me i never thought it will turn out to be my most appreciated story.


I thank you all from the bottom of my heart to be so kind with your words and feelings.

Please do share your feelings about the story at the end as a whole.

So, for now it's a good bye from my side .. hoping to meet you all soon in some other magical journey .. inhsALLAH .. with some other Mayank & Nupur .. with some other problems..


Khudaa Haifz and God Bless
Edited by Fantasia. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Angel..ok so after my initial mSHOCK, though i knew it will end., and sadness...that this one of the BEST ff has ended..i really wanna say u hav done a commendable job!! like seriously..each n every word, line, sequence..was purely MAGIC!! n u my MAGICIAN..gosh..<333...
the prologue was so cute..with Piya being the apple of every1z eyes..it showed how perfctly MN had made this Fragile magic work...No body had evn a bit of the step relation idea!..loved the rahul-pranav duo..they wer the cuties throughtout LOL...
angel u r just awesome..like ur favz evn u surpass ur own achivemnts always..😃 n i mean it really...this m saying was ur best ff...like this i hav told so very many tyms already!! n m sure ur nxt ff..n i will say the same thng...that itself shows how awesome u r as a writer<333..ab isse zyada i wont say anythng coz m not mworthy enuf..:)//:D
just keep writing..u bring smiles to so many ppl by ur ffz...u r doin an excellent job...love u..be bck soon..<333 real soon!<333
🤗 GODBLESS🤗
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FM will always b my one of d favz! n will keep on reading it<333
Edited by Nikita-Sharma - 14 years ago

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