MN - The Fragile Magic ** Epilogue - Pg 140. - Page 93

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Posted: 14 years ago
i loved it...
i loved it lodsss...
its my FAV ff...
i truly loved it lodsss...
ur writing is a pleasure to read...
u r 1 of d best writers here...
i love ur writing a lottt API...
i will miss it lodsss...
i loved d way u showed MayUr relationship developing in dis ff...
starting as a compromise to a strong n love filled bond...
i really love d MayUr in it...
it will alwaysss remain a fresh in my heart...
loved d ending...
it was awesome...
n d siblings love relationdship was something to really adore...
i loved it lodsss
will miss dis ff lodsss
love u API...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
The most beautiful magical ff I read. plz kinza write one more magical mayur ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
Res for a super long comment !! :D

**Edited**

>>Part 21

Aww Mayank finally agreed for the baby.. Yaay..
Loved how Nupur kissed him when he was getting worried and Mayank telling her not to romance uselessly.. That was sho shuweet! 😳
Finally Mayank melted.. After all, kab tak Nupur ki innocence resist kar paate.. 😉
Aww Nupur did her best to remove Mayank's fears.. 😳
Kids' reaction to Nupur's pregnancy was awesome.. I could not stop grinning.. 😃
I totally love the bonding b/w Rahul and Pranav.. Its so pure.. 😳
Haha Diya's teasing to MN made me laugh a lot.. I loved their convo.. 😆
Umm nupur's mood swings but mayank made her feel better.. Aww.. ❤️
Thank god Nupur's delivery was done without any complications!! Finally their family was complete!! The last scene was the highlight of the chapter!! 😳

Kinza, i loved how beautifully u described Mayank's fears .. it seemed really natural!! Great job hun!! ⭐️👏 Loved the update a lot!! ❤️

>>Epilogue

Kinza, ek baat kahu? My jaw dropped when i read the word "Epilogue".. 😲
Really i felt like to cry😭.. I'm so much emotionally attached with this FF, maybe because its somehow related to my own life.. 😳
I hadn't expected tht u wud end it now.. Even i had dreamed of its 2nd thread..😳
Anyways, coming to the update, it was shooo cute.. 😛
Loved Rahul-Pranav's cute little nok-jhoks and Pranav teasing Rahul.. This really brought a huge smile on my face..😃
Piya...goshhh what should i say abt this girl?? she's so damn cute just like her brothers n parents...i mean,i could easily find similarities b/w her n her parents..like glaring n talking with her brothers in an ordering tone..just like mayank n sweetness obviously like nupur..u described her really well..😳
Haha the car scene was cute...loved the siblings bonding..😛
Loved the last scene n the family reunion..bete hai nupur ka ladla n beti hai papa ki ladli...i really cant stop doing awww...it was really a sweet scene..😳
All in all, a great ended to such a beautiful journey.. hats off dear.. 👏👏⭐️

I still cant bliv tht its ended...really this FF has touched my heart like no other...thank u so much for such an awesome story...i really love u for this..n please do come up with another MN magical journey...aur woh bhi jaldi...plzzz...can't wait to read more from u...😳😳

Love ya loads..🤗 🤗
Edited by Bidz_cutegal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

nahinnn diz FF kan't b already over!!

😭😭
sachi mein I feel soo sad Kinzii !!!
ok now 2 la...la..last part😭
I loved it !
soo after 15 yrz Piya *MayUrz daughter😳* calling her big brotherzz na!
n MayUr returning frm deir vacationz!!
n n lol last part waz chooo cuteee na
Mayu hugging Piya
n den Pranuv+Rahul saying dey missed Nupz more !!!😆
choo cutee na !!!
kitni cute ending this😍
acha sis do come back with new MN FF na 🤗
love ya
-Linu
Edited by .PINK. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG!!! such a beautiful ending!

loved it!

back sson with another magic!
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Posted: 14 years ago
BEAUTIFUL,AMAZING,SUPERB
that was the most amazing story with cutest ending.
Yes this relation is the fragile but we make it strong if we able to hold it
Lovely story and amazingly written
Thanks for pm
cont soon with new Mayur Magic.
Edited by DhanakZ - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
with the last part it seems like an era has finally come to an end...no other end can b more beautiful than the way u put it...but with this,the gloominess got back to square one...no more waiting 4 the update pms,no more eagerness 4 the next part..bcos the next part wont ever b back again...i m feeling nostalgic while reading the epilogue...thanks is a very small word to show my gratitude towards u.so wont say it again...but fragile magic wil always b very close to my heart...4 ever.. a special request kinza...can i expect u to b back with another mayur's magical journey asap?bcos trust me..everyday wil seem like ages without ur magical touch..😊luv u...never stop writing mayur..🤗
Edited by palz_ArTi4ever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb
beautiful
awesome
lovely ending
loved this ff very much
u have finished perfectly
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Posted: 14 years ago
edited my comment on 141...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Kinza it ws ur best , best bestest work dear
u dont know how much i loved this FF
it was just too too too good

u r fabulous , superb
we r proud of u kinza- u r d best
u now what the main thing of this f wasmayur relation. scince both mayk and nupur had gone through d same pain - so it was a lil bit easy for them to understand each other , to respect their feelings and to keep move on with their present blissful life..
the way u developed their relationship- just hats off to u,,
u've magical power and u've create magic in ur each an every update...its not easy kinza- but u did it...
love u hun
waiting for ur another magical story
May ALLAH bless u


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