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Posted: 14 years ago
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ritzy update do na yaar pls
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 34 – Maan's Birthday

Morning 8:00 AM

Maan came down from his room for breakfast. He touched elder's feet and all gave him blessings. Annie, Rahul, Pari and Geet hugged him and wished him again.

Annie – "Bhai, please party karte hain na"

Maan – "Kyon, Raat ki party se dil nahin bhara tum logon ka"

Annie – "Kya Bhai aap bhi na"

Maan with attitude– "Nahin, bilkul nahin aur waise bhi ,mujhe MOM ke saath Ram Tekri jana hai'

Juhi – "Haan Maan, please 4:00 baje tak zaroor aa jana"

Maan – "Sure Mom"

Maan ate his breakfast stealing glances at his lady love. Geet was also trying to do the same and froze when their eyes met. Geet blushed and tore her gaze away.

Maan st – "koi na Geet…jitni nazar churani hai chura lo…aaj mere dil ki baat sunne ke baad maloom nahin tum meri hogi ki nahin…par jo bhi ho mujhe ignore nahin kar paogi"

He quickly finished his breakfast and left for work.

Afternoon 1:00 PM

Maan could not concentrate on his work. He was too excited and nervous about the evening when finally he will propose Geet. He had the bracelet in his jacket pocket and he once again opened the box to have a look at it. He caressed the engraving and prayed – "Please God, let her say yes…I love her so much"

He checked the same watch which Geet had given him few days back. "3 hrs to leave work and then 6 more to be alone with my Jaan. Why the hell is time moving so slowly?"

Evening 4:00 PM Khurana Mansion

Juhi glanced at the watch and sighed – "Is ladke ka kuch nahin ho sakta….abhi tak nahin aaya"

Geet – "Fikar not Beeji, aa jayega"

Evening 5:00 PM

Rishab – "Phone kiya to hai maine par who uthaye tab na"

Raj – "Are kuch emergency aa gayi hogi…aata hoga"

Evening 6:00 PM

Juhi – "Had hogayi hai is ladke ki…aaj ke din bhi na iska kam nahin choot ta"

Geet – "ab to mujhe bhi tension ho rahi hai…humare plan ka kya hoga…main na Adi ko phone kar ke poochti ho"

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"Lo ab yeh bhi phone nahn utha raha"

Suddenly Nisha shouted "please be quite…all of you". Saying this she increased the volume of the TV. All started hearing to the news which had caught her attention and seem to be more important than the current dilemma they were facing.

Reporter 1 – "It had been confirmed that Dr Khurana was there in one of the ambulances though his condition is still not clear. He is one of the finest doctors our country has produced and is……."

Nobody heard rest of it. What the hell has happened? Has there been an accident? Has there been an emergency. Juhi, Nisha and Annie were panicking and they had started to cry. Rahul, Pari and Raj rushed to console them while Rishab once again punched in the number of his son.

In the ensuing chaos, no one noticed the girl who was rooted at her spot near the stairs. Geet suddenly felt as if her world had coming shattering down. Her breath constricted. She wanted to scream but no voice came out. She just stood their silently in shock as her soul shattered in thousand pieces.

Reporter 2 – "For those who have just joined us, breaking news is that a school bus of DPS which was full of 47 children and a driver fell today from highway while taking a sharp turn. Bus went into the ditch and caught fire. We do not have concrete information as to how Dr Khurana got involved in the accident. But it is confirmed that he was also transported to the hospital in the same ambulance. According to the eyewitnesses outside the hospital he was injured and was taken into the hospital on a stretcher. We are still trying to gather how many children are safe and what is the condition of Dr Khurana. Officials are tight lipped……"

Juhi and Annie were hysterical now and Rishab punched in Maan and Adi's numbers again. He cursed in frustration while Rahul try to reach hospital's board.

In the background a forlorn figure quietly went to her room. It seemed her life had seeped out of her body as she sagged down to the floor just the way her world crashed around her feet.

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Precap - Man Proposes, God Disposes

Ok Guys, I know lot of you will be upset by this part. My only request is please have faith in me as a writer. Geet has just realized her feelings and I wanted them to be strong enough to handle any upcoming storms. Maan always expressed or at least wanted to express his love but Geet was not there yet.

It is a very short detour and confession is really round the corner (max 2-3 parts away). So please keep your confidence and like the part on it's merit and story line. Also there will be lot of Maaneet romance in upcoming parts so please don't stop reading and giving your comments. I have been so scared of posting this part that I did not post it though I had typed it yesterday itself.

Also, sekhonpuneet asked me not to make one of the leads die. So please be sure, nothing like this is going to happen as I myself can not handle that much sadness.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
continue soon waiting for the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64

OMDZ i loved it!!

Ok so like now she's gonna realise...i hope that she looks after Maan too...just like he took care of her!!

Oye hoye!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
nice...

when i first read abt accident..i was like...no way...but the note at the end helped...otherwise right now i would be blaming n bashing u...😆

wow...geet will now realize how strong her feelings r...n what she truly feels for him...

precap is interesting...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
shocking!
oh god!...I hope maan will be alright!
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
OOps i was expecting proposal today tumne tho 360 degree twist de diya
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
hi
i am a new reader😊
loved ur ff read the entire ff at one go👏
awesome updates👏
wonderful job⭐️
loved it
add me to ur pm list
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome update...
loved it...
continue soon... waiting 4 next part...:)


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Posted: 14 years ago
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I was expecting for a proposal day
I is a total shock. Maan's accident with the school kids.
Hope nothing goes wrong
After reading the note at the end. I am relived.
Precap sounds interesting...

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