'EK ANCHAHA SAFAR' part 21 - Page 8

Originally posted by: simi91

congo congo

new SS

lovely character

both parts beautiful

love it

love maan & gaurv

friendship

the precap sounds nice

looking forward next part

pls do pm me

thanks alot i'll surely pm u

Lool geet calling maan aakdu is so funny. Loool maan as mr gusselal is too funny. Love how geet is noticing maan's handsome looks

Originally posted by: rajeev the best

very good sakshi keep up the good work..

thanks alot samata di...

Originally posted by: leverne

Wow saakshi...nice update...ur no longer a bachchi...u wrote very well...dialogues were funny...precap is interesting...

thanks reni i m glad u find it interesting coz i was worried ye boring na ho...

Originally posted by: bharkha

Short update sakshi..

update thoda long yar...

nice update.. waiting for the next one...

conti soon...

yeah varshu di i know its a short one but will try longer parts later... thanks

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

loved the starting...plz continue soon

thanks alot will surely cntinue soon

Originally posted by: Sayna

Hey sakshi ...nice updt👏👏👏

Do continue

Thanx for pm😃

thanks sayna dear!

Originally posted by: preethia

<font color="#9900cc" size="3" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif">loved the update...</font>

<font color="#9900cc" size="3" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif">so maan and geet know each other well not very well but mulakat toh huyi...</font>

<font color="#9900cc" size="3" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif">y doesnt maan respond to her hi and doesnt talk to her...</font>

<font color="#9900cc" size="3" face="'Comic Sans MS', Times, serif">waiting to c wat happened that changed everyone's life</font>

thanks a lot... Maan didnt replied 2 her qki he is our maan an arrogant type...apne kaam se kaam rakhne wala but utna arrogant nhi hai so he wished uncle and aunty... U will soon come 2 know what changed their lives...

Originally posted by: divareena

Lool geet calling maan aakdu is so funny. Loool maan as mr gusselal is too funny. Love how geet is noticing maan's handsome looks

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lovely update sakshi. 🤗

thank u di... Its our geet the blabbering queen... And its our maan the angry young man...

@all thanks alot 4 the lovely comments.. i need them alot 4 my coming parts... plz plz plz keep supporting me and do tell me my mistakes!!!!!!!! love u all... so heres the next part...

PART 3



Days were going great... geet was doing well with her clg gaurav was doing doing gud with his job and sadda maan to great hai hi...all was well BUT a day came that changed everything a drastic change... One morning during Geet's final year exams of B.arch... She had gone 2 take her exam...At handa house phone rings...

Suman:-Mr. handa plz phone dekhiye na meri sabzi jal jayegi...

SSH:- mrs. handa headlines aa rahi hai i dont want to miss them...

Suman:-Inhe to kisi hotel me bhej dena chahiye tha... ghar ko hotel samjha hai or mujhe house keeping babaji ki kasam...
Blabering all her frustation on her husband she went to pick up the call...

Suman:-hello!!!!

Voice1:- Hello suman jiji mai kamla aapki saharanpur ki padosan...

suman:-kamla kaisi hai tu... tere ghar pe sab kaisa hai... aur ma kaisi hai..

kamla:- jiji aap jaldi se yahan aa jayiye mausi ji ko heart attack aaya hai woh hospital me hai...plz ap jitni jaldi ho yahan pahunchiye...

suman was choked she cudnt believe her ears... she was shocked to that extend that was abt to fall when mr. handa notices it and rushed to hold her..

SSH:-suman kya hua tell me!!!!!

suman hugged her tight and told everything she heard and started crying...

SSH:- dont worry suman everythinng will be fine..let us move towards saharanpur...

Suman:- par geet ke exams ...

SSH:-tum uski chinta mat karo hum mrs. chopra ko keh denge...

SSh called Gaurav and told him everything.. Gaurav picked geet up from clg and explained her everything... She listen to him and hugged him and started crying "Bhaiya Nani theek to ho jayengi na"

Gaurav:- geet be a strong girl.. life me aise kai situations aayenge jab hum apne aap ko bahut bebas aur kamzor samjhne lagenge par itna hamesha yaad rakhna aansu bahane se na to kabhi kucch thik hota hai nahi kabhi hoga... aur tu to mera strong baccha hai na... live your life with emotions and strength to control them whenever needed...thats life...

Listening to gaurav geet wiped away her tears...

Geet:- chalo bhaiya aapko late ho raha hoga...

geet and gaurav reached home... geet rushed to her mom and hugged her tight...

Geet:- mammu dont worry nani ko kucch nhi hoga... babbaji pe vishwas rakho...

Suman:- geet tu apna dhyan rakhna akela lage to pinky ko bula lena beta.. aur...

Geet:- mammu aap meri fikr mat karo... mai sab dekh lungi... aap befikr hokar jao...

All the three left fo saharanpur... Gaurav called Maan and told him everything..

Maan:- dont worry mai dekh lunga...
if you have to stay longer mai teri behen ko tere paas le aaunga after her exam...

Gaurav:-thanks dude..

Maan:-i'll kill u...

Gaurav:-Accha baba no thanks par mai itni jaldi nahi marne wala... khair take care...

maan:- U 2 take care... and dont worry...


Maan was feeling something odd as if something bad is going to happen.. he prayed for Gaurav's nani... he know gaurav loves his nanima alot... but something was still troubling him...



Geet was in no better state state.. she was much more restless.. whenever tears starts falling from her eyes she remember her bhaiya's world and wiped away her tears everytime.. but a bad feeling was still occupying her...



They both were not wrong...


While moving towards Saharanpur Gaurav was driving as fast as he cud coz he wanted to meet his nanima asap...He was totally lost in the sweet memories of his nanima along with her all sweet talks when his father poked him...

SSH:- Gaurav beta concentrate on driving its Meerut highway... very rushy area...

While he looks at his father and was noding suddenly a truck full of sugarcane or i must say overloaded with it lost its balance and barged into their car... it was a jerk more than an earthquake.. Gaurav losts his balance and the car was totally unbalanced and it was totally crashed by hitting on a sideway tree... and next that cud be seen was the blood coming out of the car...

Police arrived at the spot and rushed the victims(my heart is bleeding calling them that)to the nearby hospital...while looking for belongings a cop found gaurav's phn which was not in gud condition too but was working... the cop dialed last number which was of Maan...

Maan who was in a meeting but whose concentration was somewhere else heard his phn ringing.. the people at the meeting room were amused coz Maan Singh khurana always switches off his phns during meetings and that was indeed a very important meeting.. but Maan didnt want to miss Gaurav's call so he didn't switched off his phn...

Maan rushed towards his phn and saw Gaurav's number was flashing.. he sighed and picked it up

Maan:-Gaurav tu to pahunch gaya hoga nanima kaisi hai??


Cop:-Mr. Maan may i know whose phn is this????

maan was shocked to hear someone else's voice.. he checked the phn 2nd time yes its Gaurav's number..

Maan:- May i know who the hell is speaking from my frnds phn??????

Cop:-Mr. maan i am a police inspector from Meerut.. May i know whose phn is this...

"Police inspector"Maan thought.. he took himself and spoke...

Maan:-this is my frnd's i mean Gaurav Singh Handa's phn... What happen???? Where is he????

Cop:-Mr. Maan I am really sorry 2 inform u that the people travelling from his car have met with an accident and are being taken to Life Care Hospital Meerut...come as soon as possible...

and he disconnected the phone


Maan was shocked more than anything... he felt as if ground is being snatched beneath his feet. he was abt to lose his balance when Adi hold him...

Adi:- sir what happened sambhaliye apne aap ko...

Everyone in the meeting hall were amused seeing this side of their MD...
Adi signaled them to call of the meeting...

Adi:- Sir kya hua?????

Maan came back 2 his senses from the state of utter shock... and rushed towards the exit.. He sat in his car and was abt to start when he remember Geet...

Maan:-(to himself) Is she aware of this... no how cud she be????? the cop called me..Oh my god what shud i do...


He turned the car towards Handa house or towards Geet...


PRECAP:-

An U turn to life with a load of a promise...




plz guys bear with it and plz tell me how do u like it????? me waiting...