CID Story: Ruthless Kidnapping

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astonish

@astonish

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Posted: 14 years ago

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astonish

@astonish

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Posted: 14 years ago

The ending of this story is something which never happened in CID.. but i somehow wanted to end it this way. Most of the feelings in this story are from a real life kidnapping and murder case. I hope that 5 year old Kid's parents get strength to fight the case and get all criminals behind the bars.

DISCLAIMER: Only the concept of kidnapping, hasty decision by the police and the feelings of the kid's parents has been taken from the real incident. Everything else is pure fictional and is no where related to that case.

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neeme

@neeme

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

Nice story Astonish...is it ur first story?

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astonish

@astonish

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: neeme
Nice story Astonish...is it ur first story?

Yes, It is... 1st independent story...

I wrote two stories for the story contest 😊

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neeme

@neeme

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: astonish

Yes, It is... 1st independent story...

I wrote two stories for the story contest 😊

okay..also tell me in story contest which story is urs??

And, i just feel k tori aur investigation hoti iss story ma .. But trully, really nice attempt..really 👏👏👏

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astonish

@astonish

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: neeme
okay..also tell me in story contest which story is urs??
And, i just feel k tori aur investigation hoti iss story ma .. But trully, really nice attempt..really 👏👏👏

Thank you

Mine was the 13th story in the last story contest 😊

And yeah..its a very small case..and as i already said yesterday... its a real case..i didnt want to add much of masala to it...so kept it simple

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Roopal Gupta

@..Roopal..

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Posted: 14 years ago

Nice story👏👏👏👏👏...short and good...and i agree with neeme that there should be some more investigation...and one thing i also liked very much that first time a officer have got punishment...abhijeet sir is my fav but still i liked this...