CID Story: Ruthless Kidnapping - Page 3

first of all... i m so SORRY ASTONISH that i m LATE,,, mostly i did not like to give FEEDBACKS late... but sum workload restricted me...
abt STORY... buddy... U WROTE at the END of UR story that the
The ending of this story is something which never happened in CID..
basically this ENDING makes the story a perfect word called REAL...
FABOULOUS ending... nice portray of emmotions, decisions etc...
the treatment realated to the POLICE was so EXCILLENT...
really really MARVELLOUS... i hope will read lots more such REAL from UR side in near future...
THANK U for UR STORY...

astonish finally got to read the story -power cut spoiling most attempts.

Finally finished reading this and must say it is one story in IF I'll never forget .. for many reasons !! Anyways ... I loved the way you handled the plot. It was simple and the whole story was in a flow ... you held Abhijeet's character perfectly and I could really imagine him feeling guilty ... I even was able to imagine himself meeting the parents and also the expression on his face. I really appreciated the 'reality' element you decided to concentrate on ... and not even for a single moment did you divert from it or go OTT ... it was a nice simple story .. I really liked it .. Thanks for presenting such a nice story on IF 😊

How sweet... Thank you Bhavana ☺️

Awesome story astonish...loved it...emotional part was very nice...and so was the end...👏👏👏 waiting for more stories from you...😃

sorry 4 being late ASTONISH...

I want to read this story once again, so pushing up.

Originally posted by: visrom

I want to read this story once again, so pushing up.

Haww... this is my first... non-contest story !!! 😳

But you know.. since last year.. i don't feel like writing stories... may my stories and ideas were/are not good

You are not in the right frame of mind to sit and think peacefully
...to write a story you need...fursat ke raat din...

It's important...to get that relaxed frame of mind. even I am trying...hopefully in June I'll be able to get a couple of days to myself...jab main or meri tanhayi baat kar sakenge.

🤣

wow asto, nice one! will read, and gv feedbk sn!