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Posted: 14 years ago

#681

Come on Muski . . . . See sooooo many are in line . . .

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Posted: 14 years ago

#682

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

ya sure...but me leaving now.....can't wait more....eyes r very heavy😕!!! yawn🥱....muskaan....punishing us 4 no reason!!!😭
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Padfoot_Prongs

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Posted: 14 years ago

#683

raja ko rani se pyar ho gaya

dil jigar dono ghayal huye
tir-e nazar dil ke par ho gaya
iforgot second line.
well i had nothing to do because i can't concentrate.
so i wrote the song.
but again i forgot the lina.
please ab to update kar do.

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Rukh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#684

Waiting..
Waiting..
Im eating my mobile with my eyes.. Just want to know if u r still updating or not..
Pleesh pleesh jaldi kalona mushkan...
Waiting...

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Swaatii

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: mannu1988
raja ko rani se pyar ho gaya

dil jigar dono ghayal huye
tir-e nazar dil ke par ho gaya
iforgot second line.
well i had nothing to do because i can't concentrate.
so i wrote the song.
but again i forgot the lina.
please ab to update kar do.

me too feeling bore . . .
Wanna play antakshari?

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-memorable-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#686

Originally posted by: mannu1988
raja ko rani se pyar ho gaya

dil jigar dono ghayal huye
tir-e nazar dil ke par ho gaya
iforgot second line.
well i had nothing to do because i can't concentrate.
so i wrote the song.
but again i forgot the lina.
please ab to update kar do.

pehli nazar me pehla pyar ho gaya.....

dats 2nd line, now cont😆

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Muskan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#687

-truly magical-
part 168

How the hell the heart pumped all that now.. well that was the magical effect of him on her. Which he himself didn't know.. all that he had to do to get her alive was say those words.. he probably would have kept on saying them without taking a breath. he eventually did that. Kept saying.. with every kiss he placed on her. She seemed to shy & blush more.& more with with time he said it...making him cry like a baby how can she love him...so very much.

He cried & cried hugging her. He still couldn't believe that she was responding to his words, his touch..only his. He really didn't deserve that much of importance, he knew she was an angel he needed to worship her. She came into his heart, his life, his soul, his mind changed everything for him, everything around him, his entire being. He was just a normal man...& she uplifted him to a different league with her love, with her trust, with her!!! just her.

Dr . - mr khurana we need to operate on her immediately
Maan panicked
dr - she has some internal organ damages
he held her closer
dr - we need to talk
he didn't want to let go of her. He held her closer to him, dearly.
Dr - mr. khurana please
he looked at her & then the dr
dr - she is asleep now
he kissed her forehead yet again & followed the dr to his cabin.
Every one looked at peace now. Mk was a sleep on Rano's shoulder. Raj & prem hugged Maan dearly like they were really grateful to him. He clearly knew that he didn't deserve any of it. He smiled weakly & went to the dr's cabin.

Dr showed him the reports - one of her heart valve is damaged
he tried to look at them in more detail though nothing made sense to him.. only the words ..her internal organ is damaged scared him.. his hands were sweating.
Dr - we need to go in for the operation.
He pleaded do wat ever it takes
dr - may be liver transplant too
his misery doesn't seem to end
dr - then that a long term process of proper medication, regular excise, after she recovers fully from the operation. ..at least 3 months
Maan - don't worry about that, I will take care of that
he could have never sounded so confident
he signs the required documents for the operation. Every one was waiting outside for the OT. Every one prayed for her well being. No one had a drop of water since they heard the news. They just sat their praying for their Geet.

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FARM HOUSE

Guatum Khumar & his team rushed into the farm house. They definitely couldn't make any arrest, they just created a panic to camouflage her rescue. They pretended to pay their last rights to Davis & the fire brigade just crated the much needed kiosk. Viraat gave a suspicious look to guatum.
Guatum - wat is all this fire about?
Viraat - just an accident
guatum - any casualties?
Viraat - yet to discover
guatum - leave it to me, please do the needful for the last rituals of Davis
viraat nodded but definitely not convinced.

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Hospital

the operation was successful. Every one was relieved. They all looked at her through the glass window, she seemed to sleep, her face was still seemed tired & exhausted. Rano & papaji took mk home. Daadi, anni, dev & Nt left little later. Eventually every one left. Maan stayed, next to her holding her hand. Seeing her die, right before his eyes, that moment , killed his everything his soul, he now sat by her side as hers only her.. nothing of him now existed, when the heart beat slows he would get restless & look at the machines in panic, look at the drs for reassurance.

Even in her pain she sparkled and shined..like she was in seventh haven of him being around. The thought of him just around her.. was enough of her. He need her to be here to show him who he was, to show him where he came from. Without her, he would be someone different, he needed to touch and hug her to let her know how important she is. He wanted her here with him, he wanted her here with no pain.. with all her misery to be end. He wanted to be happy simply the way she always was until his anger tore them apart.

He didn't blink a wink just sat beside her whole night. Caressing her forehead when she winced her brows in pain. She would immediately relax & sleep peacefully. It took her 3 full days before she gained her full consciousness. Maan stayed in the hospital. Mk visited with Rano. Maan didn't know how to pay attention to the little angel though she was understanding enough.
Maan - daddy will stay with mama here
mk smiled weakly
he had tears in his eyes. How well Geet had managed her. She was simply the best daughter. Mk didn't complain, instead stayed with him after the school. She brought flowers for mama. Mk took care of Maan. Made sure he rested too. Mk insisted he showered & changed while she sat beside mama with rano. She fed him with her own hands. He always wondered if he deserved any of this love & care.

Geet could barely talk since she was on constant seductive to ease her pain but all the while she knew he was there with her holding her hand caressing her, soothing her, healing her soul. She knew it when he left her side. The only time he could cry out loud was he went to change. He hated himself to have given her so much of pain. He would wipe his tear fully before getting beside her for he knew that would hurt her more than the pain itself.

~MUSKAN'S NEW FF MAITRI~

Precap
viraat knowing about Gk as shweeta
-PREV PART 167 NEXT PART 169-

hope u all like the updates. Love all your comments.
Really love reading them
please do keep commenting.
Love
muskan

Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#688

finaly wait being paid off with beautiful update⭐️

thank god geet is safe now & will heal physicaly & emotionaly with maan being around😊

but how will maan heal from his guilt😕

mk is so sweet..taking care of mama-dady both at the same time at such a tender age 👏👏

precap is shocking😲davis is gone then virat is here😡

come back soon with new update.....don't make us wait more than 24 hrs....😒we gets restless as we are addicted to TM..😭👍🏼

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Swaatii

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Posted: 14 years ago

#689

Originally posted by: sindu555
muski is online 😃

yeeeeeeeey

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sanu3108

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Posted: 14 years ago

#690

awesome update muski .... yipppeeee Geet is fine .. I can feel every bit of Maan's pain and remorses ... wat cud be more painful than living with the fact that he himself caused pain to the one he loved the most .... and not even able to punish himself cause that will cause more pain to her ....

the precap is scary .. am sure Maan will not let any one harm his Geet any more ....

plzz plzz give us one more update ...plzzzz

love

Sana

Edited by sindu555 - 14 years ago