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Posted: 14 years ago
still waiting ! Muskan prove kerde k saber ka pal meetha hota hai.plz.jaldi se ek sweet update de dona plz :)

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Posted: 14 years ago
Waiting😍

update soon w/ LLONGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG update, plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz


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Posted: 14 years ago

-truly magical-
part 169

He hated himself to have given her so much of pain. He would wipe his tear fully before getting beside her for he knew that would hurt her more than the pain itself.

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Viraat was still unsure of all the incidents that followed. He became curious to check the dead burned bodies. He called gautum & asked him for the details & permission to see the bodies.
Gautum had smartly claimed on of the body as sweetha kapoor. Now he needed some female body with similar burned condition, that won't be difficult. But wat made them tense was viraat had already found out that the apartment she had rented was recent not as she portrayed. Now he was digging in more details to reach sweeta's details. He wanted to check whose DNA it matched. Who came to claim her body, he was trying to get to the crust of it. Even when he visited the morgue he was deeply examining the body.

HOSPITAL
Geet was recovering. Maan had instructed guatum kumar or any cops not to pay her a visit since it could alert Viraat. The moment Geet was in full consciousness her eyes searched for Maan, he was right next to her holding her arms.
Geet -dar gayen the
he shuddered with tears - jaan hi nikal gayen thi
she snapped & kissed his lips - yah jaann sirf meri hain she roared in his mouth
he cried & hugged her tightly. Please jaan tum aur kuch mat kaho mujhe se saha nahi jata. I love u a lot...sirf tumhari hain.. sirf tumhari..
They broke out the kiss when dr came out for the final check up. dr was pleased by her improvement & suggested she could be taken home. Maan smiled & kissed her cheeks. His hand came around her, she felt concious in front of every
Geet - yeh kya kar rahen ho?
Maan - wohi jo main itne dino se karna chah raha tha.. wohi jo main tumhe 7yrs 6 months aur 10days ke baat dehka tho karna chata tha
She pressed herself back into the bed watching him warily as he leaned over her.
Geet cuddled her legs & hands - kya?
Maan - throw u off my shoulder & carry away with me..
geet - phir kiya kyun nahi?
a question to which he didn't have answer..actually didn't want to answer..his heart stopped ...feared the most to face it.. he couldn't let anything happen to her..not see her hurt ever again. he put his hand around her waist & threw her on his shoulder very slowly. He settled her comfortably. One arm locked around her legs to hold her steady. While he patted her bottom with the other hand.
She giggled - u r kidnapping me
his heart couldn't stop aching..nothing about her had changed..he remembered this how she reacted when he was taking her to Italy for her bday. She never questioned his intention. He closed his eyes & blinked away the tears. He carried her to the car & made her sit in the car.
Geet - hum kanha jaa rahen hain
Maan - away
He leaned frwd & kissed her sweet lips. Mk giggled watching her parents romancing. Geet blushed & smiled at her.. mera bacha. She peeped in front & kissed Geet on the cheek.
Maan smiled & walked over to the driver seat drove. Geet sat astonished as they drove away to the farm house. Just 3 of them.

As they reached the farmhouse Maan carried her to the room. She looked for her phone to make a call. He took it away. She narrowed her brows.
Maan - u r going to do nothing but eat, sleep & lie until u recover fully.
Geet - I need to report back
he kept his fingers on her lips. Chup.. bilkul chup.. he helped her change. She felt really conscious & hid herself in his embrace. He slipped her into her tracks & t-shirt. Kissed her forehead & made her lie on the bed
Maan - tell me if u need anything, I am here.
Mk & Maan played the board games & then went to play the video games.
Geet got up & walked down to the hall. He ran to her & carried her down fuming kya kar rahi ho? Bola tha na.. call me if u need anything.
Geet - mujhe bhi aapke paas rahena hain
she said like baby. He made her sit in the couch next to him while mk & he continued to play the game. Geet was getting restless to know wat happened with Viraat & his men. She took Maan's phone to make call.
Maan - koi phayada nahi.. outgoing calls barred hain still playing with mk.
she twisted her lips & banged the phone on his lap. He didn't mind her anger, he actually never minded anything about her, it was just the situation that never favored him.
He went to lay the dinner. He fed his angels dinner, Geet was loving the whole feel of it. Them together, like she always dreamt about. He caught her eyes moist, she instantly looked away hiding those emotions.. he felt those tears dripping in his heart. He smiled weakly trying to understand but the understanding was painful.. the realization of her pain was piercing his heart.. pricking it like thousand needles at a time. Least did he know this was just the tip of the ice - berg he was feeling.

After the dinner she got up to clear the table. He held her from the wrist. She looked at him little in shock, he never resisted her. She was bit hurt..he immediately shook his head nahi jaan.. I was just wanting u not to do anything. He closed his eyes feeling miserable that he hurt he yet again.
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Viraat checked back with the owners of the flat & traced it back to an police officer. He was clear about the whole scenario now. He had needed to know who sweeta was.. !! her photo from the CCTV didn't match to any officers on record. Gk's profile was maintained highly confidential. So he didn't have access to her real images but he sensed it to be Gk, as she was the only person he didn't seem to know about.


Precap
Geet still longing for him

hope u all like the updates. Love all your comments.
Really love reading them
please do keep commenting'.
Love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

brilliant update

hats off to u
luved every bit of it
i mean wat an update yaar
family reunion 4 Geet Maan n MK
Edited by maanujaanu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow ! Me second ! :D
Yaar kia update tha ! Maan was sad but still they are together :D so i m happy.loved farm house trip starting (bcoz we want many more updates of this trip) love u !

Edited by guru_LoVeR - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wonderful awesome update.
Thank you Thank you Thank you.
Finally our dear family is together.
Family time at the farmhouse was superb.
Maan's pain was too much.
Good he got to endure and mask it too .
Looks like Geet's turn of the pain is slowly going down and
Maan's going up.
Doesnt matter to us as long as they are together.
seems selfish but cant help it.
Viraat seems to be too smart.
But our Maaneet are smarter.

Eagerly waiting for the next one.

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Posted: 14 years ago
love the family time maaneet only them can heal the pain to each other lovely update thank yuuuuuuuuuuuuuu so muchhhhhhhhhhhhh di muah👏👏
Edited by simi91 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice update muskaan. Thank you so much ... 😊 one request now.. plz don't separate Maaneet ever again!! Whatever problems in life further on.. they need to face it together being each others strength... 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for the update .Viraat is after Geet..........Is he going to hunt her down?Plz Muski abb aur kuch trauma nahi................Let Maneet live in peace.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome udpate Muskan
loved it...finally they all are together...just them..
update soon

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